Love Our True Destiny!!!!! Important Note on Pg 8

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Hey all... I am an admirer of all the writers in this forum... so I got inspired to write this one... plz read it n leave ur cmnts if u thnk the stry is worth it...

I promise u tht I wont continue this stry if u ppl r nt interested... it is jus my imagination... so u r free to criticise... waitng fr ur valuable cmnts...


Prologue

Raman Kumar Bhalla the ceo of psr, is in trouble... deep trouble... his mother Mrs.Toshi Bhalla hs given him a last warning...

T:Raman u hv to get married... we wont be around forever... u need to start ur own family... this is the last n final warning I am givng u... today evng I need a final decision frm u... if it is still a 'no' from u then we will go back to punjab n u can live ur life in the way u want but we ppl will no longer consider u as our son...

R:Ma... wht r u sayng? U r blackmailing me... this is nt gud... mrg is nt the most imp thng in a person's lyfe ma.. plz try to understand... ma plz...

T:I hv heard a lot raman... nw I wont hear even a single wrd frm u... as I hv already sd u hv to decide by today eveng n let us knw... my decision is final...

With tht mrs bhalla left the room..

Raman turned to his dad for help Mr.Omprakash Bhalla

R:Papa... plz make her understand na...

O:Raman I thnk ur mom is right u shld think abt ur mrg seriously...

With tht he left...

Raman ws left all alone in his room... he has to take a decision... he knw his parents whr really serious this tym n his mother wnt hesitate to go back to punjab if he gives a 'no' as his answer...


Ishita Vishwanathan Iyer a dentist by profession is in trouble... deep trouble... She was cornered by her parents Madhu Iyer n Vishwanathan Iyer... she has been tryng to avoid this conversation fr many days but today her parents was adamant to talk to her...

M:Ishu... dont give lame excuses... its hight tym tht u shld thnk abt ur future... abt ur family... most of the gals of ur age r married... I am givng u a last n final warning... u shld tell me ur decision by 2day eveng... if it is still a no then we r going back to chennai n dont try to contact us therefter.. thr wont be any relationship btwn us...

I:Amma... this is nt fair... This is blackmailing... this is my lyfe amma... plz... appa plz make her undertand na...

M: No ishu my decision is final...

With tht she left the room... ishu turned to her appa...

I: Appa plz...

V: Ishu... plz put urself in ur mother's place n think... plz kanna.. plz take a gud decision...

N with tht he left the room...

Ishu ws left all alone in her room... she has to take a decision... she knws tht her parents r really serious ths tym n her mother wont hesitate to go back to chennai if she gives her a 'no' as her answer...


Raman n Ishita r 2 individuals who believe tht thy will loose their freedom if thy get married... both of them want to be freebirds... thy dont want to take any responsibilities nt bcz thy r lazy but jus becz thy dnt want to be tied down by any means...

This is a stry of 2 individuals who r brought together by God himself... anytng n evrytng happens for a reason... n God has a reason to bring them together... as the stry progresses u will find out the reason...

Thanks fr readng...

NB:- This is my frst attempt to write a fan fiction... so a big sry to all of the awesome writers here... I am jus a beginner... plz bear with me...
Plz excuse the errors...

Thanks to my frst and secnd readers (u ppl knw whom u are)... 😉 love u both... 😳
A big hug to my 2 sweeties fr the title suggestions...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start...

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nice prlg .update 1st part soon .pm me
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Index 😉
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Prologue- Page 1
Part 1- Page 2
Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 - Page 4
Part 4 - Page 5
Part 5 - Page 5
Part 6 - Page 7




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nice start
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting... pm me when u update..
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sounds gud... plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sry even I myself is nt satisfied with this part but I will make the next part much better...

Part 1

Raman is pacing to n fro in his room...

R(self talk): Raman you are in trouble... u knw tht ur mom is a punjabi sherni... she wont leave u tht easily... she wnt accept ur excuses anymore... the only option left wid u is to say 'yes'... but hw can I say tht... I hv jus started to enjy my life... I dnt want to ruin it by getting married... but raman u r left with no choice...

Raman ws sad... but he should go to his office so he left the home with slumped shoulders n a sad face...

Ishita is sitting at her clinic she came too early to the clinic today so she got sometime for thinking...

I (self talk): Ayo murugan... why r u doing this to me? I was enjoying my life n nw ye musibhat... wht wrng did I do??? Ishu u have to take a decision... but wht is thr to think the only option u have is to say 'yes'... but I dnt want to ruin my enjyment by gettng married... but ishu u hv no choice...

Ishu ws sad but she has to put up a happy face in frnt of her patients... afterall she is a doctor...

Ishu's home

M:Vishwa... we r shiftng to our new house 2mmrw... did u do all the arrangements?

V: Yes madhu I hv done all the arrangements... atlast madhu a house of our own...

M: Yes vishwa our own home... u hv worked really hard to support our family... nw my only concern is ishu's mrg...

V: Everytng will be alright madhu...


Night

Raman's home

Everyone ws havng dinner...

T: Raman... wht hv u decided? (With a straight face)

R: ma... wo...

T: Stop beatng around the bush raman jus tell me ur decision...

R: Ma.. u hv left me with no other choice... yes I will get married... (with a sad voice)

T: Bale Bale...

Toshiji screamed out of joy n hugged raman... though he ws sad he couldn't keep himself frm smiling at his mother's antics...

Ishu's house

Everyone was havng dinner...

M: Ishu... wht hv u decided??? (With a straight face)

I: Amma... mein kya bolu? Wo... mein...

M: Stop stammering ishu... n come to the point...

I: Amma do u think I hv any other option other than to get married... yes I will get married...

M: Ayyooo ishu...

Tht ws all she heard n amma got up n took her into a tight hug...

M: I am really happy ishu...

Amma kissed her forhead...
Ishu ws sad but she smiled at the antics of her over excited amma...


NB:- Sry guy's I knw it is nt up to the mark I want the stry to develop slowly... so tht I would be able to make it better as it progresses...

Thanks for reading...
Please give ur suggestions...

NB:- I will introduce the other characters as the stry progresses...

Precap:- Entry of new characters... (guess who all???!!!!!)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue is superb
Part one is good finally they agreed to get married
Can't wait for them to meet
Is new character mihir or mihika or abhi
Continue soon

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