A chance~AbhiNikki FF

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A chance...

Status: On Going
Type : Short Story
Rating : General
Genre(s) : Romance, Humor, Drama.

*Dedicated to all the DMGians :D


Author's Note~

***I know it's been a long since the serial ended and I really miss it especially my fav couple AbhiNikki. I was watching DMG again and also going through their beautiful FFs wirrten by some wonderful writers and suddenly I thought to try to write something for the awesome couple. So here I am :D I don't know if anyone is going to read it but I will write it for the peace of my mind :) ***


My story is going to be a bit different from the original story. Hence the intro :

Abhimanyu Modi : The young, handsome senior doctor of the reputed hospital, Sanjeevani. He is the colleague of Dr. Shashank Gupta, Dr. Shubhankar Roy and Dr/Mrs. Keerti Roy. And the young, carefree, fun loving interns (and to be resident doctors) who work under them are : Armaan Malik, Muskaan Chadda, Atul Joshi, Ridhima and Anjili Gupta (daughters of Shashank Gupta).

Nikita Malhotra : The sweet and spicy girl who is loved by all most everyone. She is doing her last year of internship in a well known hospital of New Delhi which is also owned by her mother Supriya Malhotra. Her sincere nature makes all the senior doctors appreciate her, the caring nature always make her patients feel safe and loved and her spicy and good sense of humor make her friends love her even more.


Main Characters : Abhimanyu Modi & Nikita Malhotra



Other Senior Doctors' of Sanjeevani




Interns' of Sanjeevani




Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 10 years ago

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Part ~ 1




Dr. Abhimanyu Modi was taking long strides as he made his way towards the conference room. Every posture of his reflected the power he held, his calculating eyes never missed a thing and his firm jaw and broad shoulder made him look handsomely strict but handsome none the less. His casual clothing made him look more like a business man rather than a doctor which is true because despite being a surgeon he stopped operating due to an accident (which is not know by many people) and was sent by the trustees to solve the financial problem of Sanjeevani.


As Dr. Modi reached the conference room and looked through the glass door a nerve on his temple triggered. The interns who were supposed prepare for presentation, were no where to be seen.


Cursing under his breath he went to the canteen to check but the interns were not there either so he moved towards their locker room and finally found the little rebels.


Other than the canteen Sanjeevani's locker room is the place where the interns like to spend their quality time. The two walls of the room contained rows and columns of red lockers owned by the interns and some benches. Currently, on one side Dr. Riddhima was leaning against the lockers reading a file and a smile on her face which was due to the person leaning beside her, Dr. Armaan who was fidgeting with her dupatta to get her attention. On the other side there was Dr. Anjali who was surfing through her phone and staring dreamily at her was Dr. Atul sitting on a bench. Another bench was occupied by Dr. Muskaan who was applying nail polish her back towards the door where Dr. Modi was standing.


"Interns" Dr. Modi's voice rang like a thunder in the locker room.

"Kon kamina hain? Meri nail po..." Muskaan stopped in the mid sentence as she turned and saw Dr. Modi.

Atul was so deep in thought of Anjili that he almost fell of his bench but managed to stand up hastily. Anjili quickly hid her phone replaced it with stethoscope. Riddhima and Armaan also straightened up.


"Agaya pakkane..." Armaam whispered for which he got a light nudge from his love. But to his bad luck this didnot escape Dr. Modi's ear.

"Dr. Armaam mene suna aapne keya kaha" Dr. Modi said getting angry by every minute.

"Good! Kamse kam patta to chaal gaya k aapke kaan kaam rakte hain."

This comment made other interns laugh which they were trying to control very hard.

"Mera kaan thik kaam katra hain lekin shayad aap saabki ghari nahi kaam karraha. Aap saab bhul gaye aaj humari presentation prepare karneka akhri din hain eya phir aap saabki calender mein bhi koi problem hain?"

Before Armaan could give another witty answer to that his fiance replied "Dr. Modi who..."

"I don't want any explanation Dr. Riddhima I have seen what were you all so busy doing. Yeh presentation mere liye nahi aap saabki aur Sanjeevani k reputation k liye bhi important hain. Iss conference mein India ke top 10 hospital k interns and senior doctors attend kar ne wale hain mein aap logoko batayaan tha na phir bhi aap itne irresponsible hain. "


"Sorry Dr. Moody...I mean Dr. Modi. Aap jayeey hum saab abhi ate hain."

"Jaldi " and saying that he left.

The interns finally let go and bust into laughters.

"I can't believe it! Ridz tune saach mein unke saamnehi unhe Dr. Moody bola" Anjili said out of breath.

"Meri kaya galti hain? Aap saab hamesha unhe Dr. Moody bulate hain to meri muhse bhi galti se nikal gaya."

Muskaan chimed in "Areee chor na who to hain hi moody macchar. Hamesha humari khoon chus na chata hain."

"College khatam ho gaya lekin abhi taak lecture shunna khatam nahi huya." Armaan made a face.

"Aab jaldi se chaalo varna phir lecture shunna parega." Atul reminded them and they hurridly made their way towards the conference room.

Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆
Kaun kamina hai
Dr. Moody
Moody macchar

Ye interns Dr. Abhi ke naak mein dam kar diye hain
Bechare Dr. Abhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ok...its hell confusin to me the stry n the characters too 😆
but thn mayb i'll get used to it in tym
gr8 strt
ders always this fascination with me regardin hospitals aftr watchin greys anatomy so m in this stry
WRITE MORE 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey,this is really interesting.its fun reading from abhis point of view.please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

😆

Kaun kamina hai
Dr. Moody
Moody macchar

Ye interns Dr. Abhi ke naak mein dam kar diye hain
Bechare Dr. Abhi



I am glad you are reading and thanks for commenting too 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiR

ok...its hell confusin to me the stry n the characters too 😆

but thn mayb i'll get used to it in tym
gr8 strt
ders always this fascination with me regardin hospitals aftr watchin greys anatomy so m in this stry
WRITE MORE 😎



I will surely write more and for you I updated the characters' pics with name, so hopefully this time it will be easier for you.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sochona

hey,this is really interesting.its fun reading from abhis point of view.please continue.



Thanks for reading. I will write soon. 😃
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Originally posted by: anaddictof_KY2



I am glad you are reading and thanks for commenting too 😃

I just clicked on the DMG forum and there it was sitting for me waiting to be read😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part ~ 2




The plane landed on the terminal of Goa airport, in which came the senior doctors' and interns' of Sanjeevani. The flight was only of 1 hour but it felt way longer than that. Whatever the interns did made Abhi annoyed and all they got in return were deadly looks.


As they came out of the airport after the security check they were greeted by the fresh air of Goa.

They noticed a driver who was carrying a card which said 'Sanjeevani'. When they reached the driver, he gave a smile and welcomed them to Goa and lead towards a huge nine seater car.


"Yeh humare liye hain? " Muskaan asked in a excited voice.


"Hain. New Delhi k ek hospital k trustee ka yeha hotel hain to unonehi sara intezam kiya hain. Hum wahi tehrenge aur conference bhi wahi hogi."

"Chalo accha hain, bohath maza ayega"


"Dr. Muskaan aap eh maath bhuliye ki hum yeha kaam k silsile mein aye hain vacation pe nahi." Dr. Keerti reminded them in her usual stern voice.

"Yes maam." All the interns replied together and without saying anything else entered the car and started their ride towards the hotel while enjoying the view outside.


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The car came to a stop at the entrence of the grand hotel and everybody came out and two bell boys came forward helping them with their lagguage. Abhi left them to their work saying he would go to the reception and talk with the manager.

Meanwhile the others unloaded their lagguage and entered the marvelous looking hotel. They noticed that Abhi was talking with a middle aged smart looking woman who wore a cream colored blouse along with black pants. When Armaan took a closer look he realized who she was and almost ran towards her and took her in an embrace, others with a surprised expression followed.

After a long hug Armaan let go of that woman but everyone else was still surprised.


"Dr. Armaam yeh aap kaya kar rahe hain? Yeh iss hotel ka owner hain or New Delhi hospital k trustee bhi, Ms.Supriya Malhotra." Abhi said giving an embarrassed smile to the woman for his intern's behaviour.

"Supriya Malhotra hogi aapke liye mere liye to sirf Riya hain." Armaan said giving a huge smile. Now Abhi looked even more puzzled.

Supriya gave a sweet smile "It's okay Dr. Modi, mein Armaan ko janti hun. Yeh meri dost ka beta hain or meri beti ka bohath accha dost bhi."

"Hain or inki boyfriend bhi." Armaan said which made Supriya laugh remembering their old joke.

"Accha to aap Armaan se to mill hi chukhe hain or yeh hain Sanjeevani k baki interns or senior doctor Dr. Keerti." Abhi introduced her to the rest of them.


"It's nice to meet you all. And by the way Dr. Shashank and Dr. Shubhankar kal hi aa chuke hain or shayad aab lounge mein honge baki doctors k saath. Delhi or Bangalore k hospital k doctors bhi kal hi agaye hain." Supriya informed them.


"Delhi k doctors? Iss ka mathlab nikki bhi yeha hain?" Armaam asked in a child like excited voice remembering his childhood best friend.

"Hain. Who to bahar swimming...areee dekho agaye" Everyone turned where Supriya was pointing.


Coming from the entrence door was girl who could make anyone's heart skip a beat. Her wet hair was let loose so water droplets were flowing down her white shirt which reached few inches above her knees but it was wet from swimming for which the blue colored bikini that she wore underneath was slightly visible along with her perfect figure. And as Armaan mentioned before, that gorgeous looking girl was Nikki, Dr. Nikita Malhotra.

Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 10 years ago

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