3 Shots : (DARK) Arhi in SINISTER (Completed)

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@richasharma0991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Continue sooon loved this arnav this is a complex story I love such cracky situation

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

very interesting twist. Glad I found it and read through it.

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: BARUNODAYA
It was something very new to me..thrilling til the end..bt i stil feel bad for arnav..rofl..dnt mind..it is my defect 😳

HAHA... seriously... Bad for HIM... If you would have said you feel bad for Shyam i would have surly understood that.. 😆😆

Nevertheless.. You enjoyed it and Liked it.. My motivation is completed...

Thanks for sharing your thoughts thou.. 😊

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: richasharma0991
Continue sooon loved this arnav this is a complex story I love such cracky situation

First of all, sorry gal but story is finished their.. If you haven't notice even on the title tread i have mentioned "Completed"😊

I am so sorry if you feel it is incomplete but to keep the beauty of it, i have to keep it like that.. You know hidden, secret type..

Thanks you so much for loving it thou...😳

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ifsaal044
very interesting twist. Glad I found it and read through it.

I am also glad you found it, read it, and rely to it... And I am happy for it also.. hehe..

I write other stories too, if you want to give them a chance too..😊

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: jisa
very unique one..!

Thank you very much for liking and commenting on it.. For a writer its means alot... sachi.. 😃😃😃😃

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piyaarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

chapter one... i really thought it was arnav with her but.. whta the...
it was shyaam...

so then this other side of road person..i guess its arnav...

it was crazzy update.. :D :D

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piyaarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

OMG!!!!
it was wonderfull...
arnav is the culprit over here...
just loved it...
but she is trapped...
and she won't be able to get out of this trap...

u know i had a dream today morning of some gangsters attacking our colony,the reason unknown to me...(i really couldn't figure it out coz i was actually roaming in my whole house because i was scared)

dreams can be really scary at times... who is happening what is happening how it is happening is all what we try to figure out but we reach nowhere...

u know after reading the last part i still hope that this is all a dream to khushi...
the story actually disturbed me.. :D :D (how is it possible to remove the memories) :/

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: piyaarshi
chapter one... i really thought it was arnav with her but.. whta the...
it was shyaam...

so then this other side of road person..i guess its arnav...

it was crazzy update.. :D :D

Originally posted by: piyaarshi
OMG!!!!
it was wonderfull...
arnav is the culprit over here...
just loved it...
but she is trapped...
and she won't be able to get out of this trap...

u know i had a dream today morning of some gangsters attacking our colony,the reason unknown to me...(i really couldn't figure it out coz i was actually roaming in my whole house because i was scared)

dreams can be really scary at times... who is happening what is happening how it is happening is all what we try to figure out but we reach nowhere...

u know after reading the last part i still hope that this is all a dream to khushi...
the story actually disturbed me.. :D :D (how is it possible to remove the memories) :/

Hey girl... I am so sorry, i didn't even knew someone has replied to this...

Sorry for late reply..

Thanks for reading it gal, I know what you are saying about dreams and how its feel, Believe me when i have saw this one, i literally was panting when i got up, it was scary, Believe me i am unable to capture anything which i have seen or to be said lived.. it was so scary the idea was so superb, for a second i shuddered to even thinking that to write it out, but i did and it felt so good..

It was come nice but again not perfect.. and if you want to delete your dream, just live it, live it fully, so what if it is scary or disturbing.. It is wroth it girl.. believe me, coz again it was just a dream...

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

In the whole story i was like hawww...
I mean its a total roller coaster ride yaar...
Khushi was married to shyam...
She make out with arnav...
Arnav kills shyam...
She is living with arnav from past 5 years without any memory and with those dreams...
Finally one day she got to know the truth but then also arnav and injects her and now she have to live the same life...
A totally new concept...
& i defo like it...
😊

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