New PH for BKVPMP

Hi Folks,

For those who would have read my post yday "Freezer is hot", you would know how I feel. And I could see the forum pervaded by a similar feeling. So, let us chill guys.

I don't believe in sitting and crying, like our Ajabde does now and so would like to get into action, as the Ajabde we want to be. And I definitely do not want my weekend gone on crying, instead use the same opportunity to make it more fun filled😛.

So, my dear friends, why don't we roll up our sleeves and direct our own Monday episode to begin with. Let me jump in now and wish I have all your support in making this a memorable episode. Join hands now!

Episode opens with Ajabde entering the cell. And Pratap asks "Aap yahaan" and goes on to say that it is too late. Ajabde and Pratap share the famous "tho, tho kya" dialogue and they laugh forgetting their agony for a moment.

Then Ajabde declares to Pratap that she is there to have her first night with him and shows the basket of flowers for the decoration of the cell. Pratap for a moment does not know how to react. Then Ajabde laughs and says atleast that is the reason why she is here and reveals how she used that as a reason to be with him in the name of fulfilling Pratap's last wish to save herself from the bark of Ranaji. Now the guards are asked to move away as they need privacy😉.

Scene changes, where HK is shown sending a paigam and asking for immediate execution of it. Pattha is trying his best to keep Chetak quiet. (Background voice: The deewana team is assembled and ready to implement the plan.)

Then DB shown crying to US and requesting him to atleast consider excuting Pratap with the golden sword given by Ajadbe's parents. US is highly impressed with DB's love for Pratap and Ajabde (😡 - its me, not in the show!) and he also allows her to come to the site to give her last blessing to her beloved son. (I tried my best not to include any DB & US scene, but looks like I am habituated seeing the serial😭.)

Next we see Pratap and Ajabde outside the prison on Chetak and they are flying towards some destination. We could see them followed by HK and Pattha.

(Flash back: Pratap thinking about his mathrubhoomi in the cell and how it would be plunged in darkness with the Mughals taking over Mewar under Jagmaal. He visualizes Akbar's ruthless attack on Mewar (see, I have been consistent and have followed the unwritten rule of MP show showing Akbar also in each episode.) Ajabde comes (and repeat of their discussion), which concludes by Ajabde revealing the plan of escape to Pratap for the sake of mathrubhoomi, while thinking that she will never allow truth to die. Pratap is overwhelmed at how they both think the same way and immediately gets into action. He breaks the jail and escapes with Ajabde and gets on to Chetak who gives out a cry of victory. Before the guards could even realize what has happened, they have flown out to Chittor. )

Pratap smiles recollecting all these and tells Ajabde (while still riding away on the horse), that both his vachan and dharma are kept now - vachan to save Jagmaal and dharma to save mathrubhoomi. Ajabde gives a knowing smile.

Our deewana teams reaches a well-lit place, beautifully decorated. As they enter there is jai jai kara for Pratap and he is given a royal welcome. HK comes forward and dedicates his place to Pratap.

(a future episode, during Chittor seize when Ranaji escapes:

Akbar the brave (in the serial) knowing Pratap is not anywhere near Chittor, makes a bold decision to attack Chittor. Chittor seize happens. Ranaji escapes, ofcourse with paan in hand😉. But before that he ensures that DB and Jagmaal as well!!😃 do jauhar, so that no harm comes to his deewana.)

How was the Monday episode for you. Hope it had all the elements of romance, confusion, presence of DB, Akbar and US barks, logical flaws a typical MP show would have, and also a PrAja we would want to see (lest we feel that we are watching someother show!)

Now over to you folks...script away, direct away and alter the story away also. You can also take my sthaan and I will move out of the palace, sorry the PH!!

Amazing episode...well here goes mine

Pratap is being held in the cell when Rawatji comes to speak to him and asks him again to break his silence but Pratap refuses to do that so Rawatji himself tells him the truth - It was your brother Kunwar Jagmal who fired the gun both the times and you like the ideal son promised Rani DB to protect your younger sibling at all costs but Kunwar Pratap you forgot your promise you made to protect your motherland- who tell me will protect the Rajputana after you are gone? And moreover what about your promise to Ajabde? Did you even think for a second what would become of her if you die? DO you want her to perform the Jauhar or do you wish to see her lead the life of a widow or even DB who is going to protect her if Jagmal loses his control and repeats his deeds again

Rawatji's words had quite an impact on Pratap and got him thinking, he knew his brother was unstable and needed all the help he could get but what about his promise to DB

On the other side we Ajabde walking along the corridor when she runs into both DB and Jagmal who taunt her about her husband's impending death but her response leaves them stunned

Jagamal: What will you do now Bhabisa? I mean DadaBhai Pratap will be hanged tomorrow morning and then you will have to lead your entire life as a widow
DB: Now Kunwar Jagmal don't worry your Bhabisa about her future, I'm sure she will manage to make something out if it once she goes back to Bijolia

Ajabde: YOur mother is quiet right Kunwar Jagamal don't be worried about me worry about your own future after all once Kunwar Pratap is gone it will be you who has to take on all the responsibilities of Chittor - It will be you who will sent to fight wars against all the enemies I just hope you know how to fight because from what I have heard and seen both the Afghans and Mughals are ruthless when it comes to killing and you happen to Kunwar Pratap's younger brother so they may have a lot of expectations from you but sadly they will be disappointed because you cannot even carry a sword well let alone fight, you are nothing but a coward who hides behind his mother when things go wrong and all of us here present know the truth about the gun shooting incident and we are all quite because of Kunwar Pratap but once he is gone so is our promise and I assure you that when the truth comes out the people will see you get punished for your deeds and with that she leaves them

Ranaji had heard everything Ajabde had said and decided to investigate the matter by himself. He goes on to meet Pratap who is seen talking to Maan who is pleading him to tell the truth or allow her to speak to her father

DadaBhai Don't do this... the incident was not your fault it was Kunwar Jagmal..You saved Rani Ma as well me, who is going to do that if you are gone? Please let me tell Daajiraj the truth
Pratap just pats his sister head and says I know you want to tell teh truth to Daajiraj but the truth is only going to hurt him more as he will know that Kunwar Jagmal shot his own mother...No I cannot let Daajiraj get hurt like that

Ranaji interrupts and says So you rather take the blame and make me guilty of another crime Kunwar Pratap

Pratap and Maan look at him shocked. Ranaji tells them that he heard everything and now he will make everything alright- he orders the guards to release Pratap and sends them to bring everyone to the curt room at once

DB and Jagmal get the news of Pratap's release and they get scared. DB leaves to go the court but Jagmal goes in search for Ajbade as he knows the only way he could escape was if he had Ajabde with him after all his brother did love her

Ajabde was sitting in front of her Kanhaji praying for her husband's safety when she heard someone enter but she did not pay heed as her prayers were more important but then she felt the barrel of the gun pressed to her head and Jagmal says /come with me quietly or else I will shoot you
Ajabde tells him to not to disturb her during her puja and goes back to her prayers which infuriates Jagmal and he fires a shot in the air

Hearing the gun shot everyone comes running and see Jagmal pointing the gun at Ajabde everyone is stunned and Ranaji barks at him to keep the gun down whereas Pratap tries to placate him to not to do anything rash and think calmly, he will protect him Pratap promises Jagmal but Jagmal does not listen to him

Just then Patta enters and he calmly tells Jagmal to throw the gun away and to get away from his Jija on Jagmal's refusal Patta again in aalm tone as if talking to a child tells him to walk away from Ajabde Baisa
You are making her angry by disturning her during the puja nad believe me you do not want to see her angry
Jagmal does not pay heed but Ajabde had enough she gets up which startles Jagmal but he still points the gun at her forehead
Seeing her gaze Patta says, your brother is gone Kunwar Pratap and then it was a blur - Jagmal was lying on the ground holding his hand which seemed to be twisted nad the gun was thrown off on the ground but before it fell a shot was fired which went past Ajabde's shoulder. She had disarmed the insanse and delusional prince in a matter of seconds and walked out of the room with Maan and Rawatji following her as they got her flesh wound tended

Patta looked at Jagmal who was holding his hand and groaning in pain, I told you to walk away. Thank God that all you received was a broken hand she has punished far more severely when her puja is interrupted
Ranaji, Pratap and DB all are stunned when Patta looks at them and says BaijiLal knows how to defend herself when the situation arises, she has been doing that for all teh past 8 years when she was in Bijolia - she not only defended Bijolia and its people but also her family and herself...She is not a fragile person she way more strong than she appears

PRECAP: Pratap apologises to Ajbde for causing her pain, a trip to Vrindavan brings the truth out - leads to DB and Jagmal's departure from Chittor, some romantic situations between our love birds and finally entry of Amar Singh as Pratap takes on the role of MahaRana


Hope you guys enjoyed my episode 😊

hope monday will have all these stuff... brilliant garima 👏

Originally posted by: menoila

hope monday will have all these stuff... brilliant garima 👏

Aww Thank You babaji😳
Monday we will only see Ranaji barking and DB taunting and Ajab giving her tit for tat 😛

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Aww Thank You babaji😳
Monday we will only see Ranaji barking and DB taunting and Ajab giving her tit for tat 😛

Oh Garima! You are awesome. I just rolled at Ajabde's taunt regd his bravery and also his stupid act to shoot Ajabde's. Pattha's reaction was also perfect- I was only seeing him when I read those lines. You know the characters so well. And you even had a precap!

Originally posted by: Kaana

Oh Garima! You are awesome. I just rolled at Ajabde's taunt regd his bravery and also his stupid act to shoot Ajabde's. Pattha's reaction was also perfect- I was only seeing him when I read those lines. You know the characters so well. And you even had a precap!

CV's ka kuch toh influence hoga na..isiliye precap bhi likh diya 😳

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

CV's ka kuch toh influence hoga na..isiliye precap bhi likh diya 😳

Hahaha!

And btw, I really liked the Ajabde's taunt - to me, it's a fantastic strategy to scare Jagmaal away. Just as he tried to commit suicide after Dhaman's killing on seeing Pratap, he would prefer to die or plead mercy to his Dadiraj placing all hopes still in his mother though, instead of going to war.

Originally posted by: Kaana

Hahaha!

And btw, I really liked the Ajabde's taunt - to me, it's a fantastic strategy to scare Jagmaal away. Just as he tried to commit suicide after Dhaman's killing on seeing Pratap, he would prefer to die or plead mercy to his Dadiraj placing all hopes still in his mother though, instead of going to war.

That is so true and still that Bhootni wants Jaggu to take on the throne she and her paan ruined Jaggu's life😆