Arakshi FF - Web of Love - Chapter 20 & 21 updated 27/01

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
the post was captivating and enrapturing.👏 only one thing i felt to bring to your notice in the whole post (hope u don't mind).the mention of a hospital in a small village.i think the word should have been 'charitable dispensary".otherwise the rest was 'perfect'.😊

Thanks soo much! No no I don't mind.😃 Thanks for that... I didn't know😛

Originally posted by: NainaSM
wowww nice
flashback just super
can't stop smiling
raina ufff
sam always be a good friend
arjun letter woww
arakshi fights back
continue soon

Thanks a lot Naina! Hehe glad I could make u smile😃

Originally posted by: Areesha566
part 3
beautiful

Thanks soo much for leaving comments!😳

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Amazing update
arjun and sakshi's first meeting was cute
and the effect of the letters are awesome
looking forward for next part

Thanks sooo much Anita!🤗

There will be more letters coming soon😉

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Sakshi's step father loved her like his own daughter...😃😃😃
But his rules has made Sakshi confined to the house only...
Sakshi as Achaar chor...😆😆😆
Arakshi first meeting...😆😆😆
Bechara Arjun...galat insaan se panga le liya...😆😆😆
I really liked threats via chits under cup...😆😆😆
Raina...😡😡😡
But why did Sakshi appointed her as prosecution lawyer??😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

PS :- Last time I forgot to mention that I really liked this letter writing...👏👏👏

Heyloo Sneha!🤗

Hehehehe glad you're enjoying the fun side of the story😉

Umm maybe u got confused.. and I probably didn't write that correctly... by "Bhabhi" he meant someone else.. Arjun's Bhabhi. You'll know in the next chapter😊 Sorry for the confusion!

Thanks soo much for the comment🤗

Originally posted by: fly.high
Sure thing!
This update surely brought up a smille onb my face. .

I never ever have read this wild village girl avatar of sakshi...and this is really creative of you to bring our this beautiful picturesque characteristics in one character..

meri personal Nicholas sparks...thus time you are venturing out of your comfort zone

and trust me...you are doing a great job by far...

continue soon...

Heyloo Birdie!

Ahhh I get all ☺️ when you mention him! Thanks soo much .. that really means a lot!😳

I hope I hope that I continue to do the samee and you like what's coming up!

Hehehe I really wanted to bring out a wild character in her.. and yeah it's just the beginning😛

Thank youu again❤️

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Swara85
Sorry late ho gayi,,and I'm good now..thanks.!
Chapter 2:
The lines at the start, again, were apt.👍🏼 After reading those, I was in a dilemma whether to continue further or not. Because his emotions feel so REAL or rather You make it feel REAL..But then, raha nahi gaya.🤪😳.And see, now I even don't know what to say..😭
Ok..The intensity of his emotions you have brought out made me have goosebumps and feel chocked. 2 reasons, for I actually FELT it, was..One: I had a trip to a jail when we were in school.they had taken all of us to visit the jailors, and now it reminded me of that.
Two: I can relate better to his emotions than Sakshi's..On top of it, your writing, as i said earlier, it feels REAL.😭

"Once, his gaze used to be as warm as the azure waters of a calm sea, the twinkles in his eyes like the glittering beads of sunlight dancing on the surface. And now, the warmth seemed to have been replaced with a fury of the raging grey waves of a stormy sea."👍🏼 I loved this comparison..😃How do you do this everytime..??
Her reactions,..then her asking "So are you taking care of yourself, ACP Sahab?",.😭...their convo..and the scene where he had to go..Uff..! kya bolu..Rula diya..!😭
When he enters their flat, and the moment when she touches the bars where he had touched, just to feel him🥺..that was again hair-raising ones..😭

The song..Haye.😳.!! It added the finishing touch to the update..Again it is One of my fav song of my fav singer..!😳
You have done a splendid job here..👏 You know.. Avantika Di, by her writing such complex,poignant or i don't get the exact word here.🤔.used to make me go all chocked with emotions..Now you also doing this..Not fair..😭😆
But anyways..Keep doing so..Warna chein nahi milega..😛😃

I forgot about the case..kya karu..not in a condition to think..😆😭
Ha,, so overall it was a marvellous update..👏
Thanks for pms..will be back for the next chap soon..Let me get a grip on myself..

Hellooo Swara! Seriously, I want to thank you dil se for leaving such a huge comment... you've no idea how much I look forward to these😳 And it means so much when you type such a lot... really🤗

Achaa now coming to the comment!

Ahh that means a lot.. really😳 Which prison did u visit btw?

Hehehe that line.. I actually thought of it when I was travelling... the bus was going along the sea and the weather was baaad.. like rainy and the waves reached up to 6-foot or something when it crashed against the road.. Ahh the feeling.. anyway I thought of sharing it with u😳

Hailaa are u an Arijit fan too? I go maaddd when I hear his songs!!☺️

Aww... sorry if that made u emotional.. but then it was needed😳

Thank u againnn❤️

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Heylooo i finally am here...sorry traffic jam 🤪😆😆

Arjun been really supportive to sakshi,letting her live her dreams and actually encouraging her...i want a patidev like that too 😳😳

Sakshi brothers makes me worried truly speaking..the way he behaves with sakshi and all kinda hates her...i guess its jealousy because he now thinks there is someone else who is close to his father😊😊

Hehe stealing ripe mangoes...must be soo much fun...i want to eat mangoes now

Sooo sooo arjun already saw sakshi because her veil was not on her...yayyy i want to read about arjun Pov now 😳😳

Awww arjun smiled looking at her...haaye 😃😃

Haha the sweet little revenge of sakshi 😆😆

Dont ever mess with a girl whom is in trouble because of you 😎😎

Black coffeee 😲😲😲 going to make a cup for meee right now😳😳

The letter,the trust arjun has in sakshi and also the willingness and strength he has in him to prove sakshi innocent is commendable 👏👏

Ayooo yeh tum kya kahing...sorry because update was long...mujhe toh nahi lagta...you see when we read it,we goes to arakshi land and and also an update from rituu is never too long 😉😉

Looove the update,how the story is shaping up and also sakshi in yellow truly bought a smile while reading😛😛

Biig biiig hugs 🤗🤗

Heylooo Pooh Bearrr! 😳

Guess what? I'm having black coffee now😛 Actually just finished it he he he.

Ahh me too.. but pata nahi kaun milega🤔

Yes yes you're right... and more coming up on him! But in the next few chapters..

There's more mangoes in the next chapter!😛

Awww... for u even 50 pages won't be a long update😛 Love yaa for that my editorni❤️

Originally posted by: Swara85
Chapter 3:
The village description at the beginning was good.😃
Her step-father loved her as much as she did..But both's wishes and thoughts crashed with each other.That was bound to happen.
Raw mangoes..yummy..😛!! Mummy..!
Yellow dupatta..Yellow again..looks like it is your favourite colour...hmm??
Arakshi's first meet was amazing..😳😃 Imagining Arjun giving his usual hard glares to her..Bechari Sakshi..😆
So he came to her house and also recognised her ..*slapping my forehead* Kya jarorat thi Arjun ko batane ki ,ki Sakshi se mila tha😡..Wah Sakshi kya tarika nikala hai badla lene ka..😎! Superb..!😆
Liked that note-writing too..I'm enjoying here..!😃
So that's how the "ACP Sahab" thing came..is it?

Their home without her would have eaten him up..😔good that he shifted at Sam's place..
Sakshi appointed Raina as her prosecution Lawyer..Didn't she knew Raina's thoughts on her..?? Or at that time they were different..??
You know what, after reading last chappy again, I'm thinking it was not a murder at all..

Letter again.. 😳I love letters.. It was a small letter but the impact of the words inscribed in it was much much deeper..Good job at writing letters..👏

Loved both the updates..Though while reading 3rd chappy, some parts of it distracted me, 😆😳It was good feeling reading it.
Thnaks for pms..cont soon.

Helloo again! 😳

Hehehee it is... actually it's one of my most favourite colours. Others being purple, wine red and shades of blue😃 I actually used to hate yellow once..😛 but these days it's the happiest colour I find!

Hehehee glad u loved reading it as I loveddd writing it!😃 And yep that's why she teases him with ACP Sahab now.😳

Ok I confused u with that line too... no actually by saying "Bhabhi", he actually meant Arjun's bhabhi.. I'll introduce her in the next chapter. She appointed Raina as the prosecution lawyer. Hope it gets clear in the next😊

Ahaaa...keep thinking😛 I'm not saying anything hehehe

Thanks soo much ...letters are loveee.. at least for me😳

Hope my writing wasn't distracting na? Was it the mangoes?😛😛

Thanks a lott for the comment Swara.. it means such a lot🤗

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

well that was again bewitching.👏 its till now like ''we r not friends,we are strangers with memories.''😊 i hoped for a letter again(was a very little bit disappointed).I noticed one thing that mangoes have been pilling since 1st chapter...😃 Awaiting for some case(s) and clues to unfurl.

over all loved every line and it was ''perfect''.👏

Thanks for the pm.

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Loved it. Thanks for the pm and continue soon please.

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

I am back!

Bas bas... don't thank me again for the letters re! Idea chilo, toke kikore na boli re?

Accha, coming to chapter 1 now.

Chapter Uno.

The quote was simply lovely - truly lovely! I loved the way you crisscrossed his dreams with the stark reality he was facing. So basically over here Arjun and Sakshi really love each other to a deep extent! I loved the way his heart reached out to feeling what his Sakshi was like...

How her state was... *sigh*

baki ka pore :D

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing..
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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sonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

lovely update plz update soon

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Continuation de Chapter Uno.

Sniff, *blowing nose*

You dedicated this chapter to moi 😭 I became senti man, whenever someone dedicates something to me I become highly emotional! *Tight hugs* Thanks a tonnn...

Now coming to Ayesha and Sameer, the matured couple out of the lot, I guess they have unsaid feelings for each other? Sigh, this time even I agree with Sameer that in reality it is very very difficult to not say that he has failed them.

But then, sometimes will power is behind everything? That's what creates miracles...

Perhaps the person who can actually save Sakshi is the one for whom her heart beats

I believe that the Rawtes were in the budding shades of their love, I would state that they are recently married.

That's true, even for a fleeting second death brings about a moment of sympathy for your enemy... especially is it's a relative.

Now... coming to my assumptions...

She had told me then, that she would visit Rajveer, even though she didn't want to, just in case he was there already.

This line my lady, this line... you know ki agla Sherlock kaun hai *point me* LOL...

But yeah, I had already placed my deductions on fore as to why I thought.

1) Rajveer was a luthra character

her bracelet lying under the sofa of his living room, a neighbour overhearing a heated conversation between her and Rajveer

Yeh sentence brings a sign of struggle between the two.

she had appeared frightened

Ugh, when and why would a woman be scared of her husband's brother? Unless...

2) Sakshi is the innocentwa

she had appeared frightened

Anger, bhaagna, anxious... but fear? Kuch toh problem hai... kuch toh choot raha hai!

3) She had told me then, that she would visit Rajveer, even though she didn't want to, just in case he was there already.

SHe was ready to go because she expected her husband to be there...

So Judge sahab, yehi hai kuch daleele jo hum pesh karna chahte the. 😉

Ah the letter, we were never meant to be.

And that line proved one more thing, Arjun would cross anything to prove the counter na?

Brilliant, the letter came out to be fab!

Loads of love!

Shree :D

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Chapter Deux

The quote - simply lovely and gorgeous! Ah, I don't know why our constitution becomes highly effective while putting the wrong person behind the bars!

Sigh... the moment when he walked into the jail was painful, damn painful... in fact it was haunting! Brilliantly sketched Ritu!

The first night was beautifully written, mone ache na I had told you that I love where the first night is about soft whispers, getting to know and smiles :) I loved how the two moulded to get used to each other's presence.

Oh by the way...

Assumption numero quatre : Not a love marriage... could be... a spur of the moment or could be to save her or...

Giving her freedom...

Back to updatewa,

I wanted to tell her that I loved her.

This line made me emotional...

You know when people hesitate to speak out for they don't understand and when they understand then they don't have enough time to speak out...

Something similar in the case of Arjun and Sakshi.

Their meeting touched our hearts, it was so damn emotional.

By the way, couldn't have the defence stated something on the violation of woman and etc etc.

Ah... but then who was the witness... oh wait.. there were noises of heated argument... argh... there must be something more... definitely something more...

Somebody is hiding something... somebody.

We got to hire KD Pathak!!!

Arjunwa... hire KD!

Oh God... oh wait wait wait...

Did his brother do something... jeta teh Sakshi's dad ka tata goodbye... Hmmm...

That Rajveer is a first class a**, donkeys bhi sharma jayenge...

Hmm... this Rajveer and Sakshi... I am eager to know what' the story behind them. Grr

I was lost in the update *Again*

The last two lines took it man! Big time! 👏 ⭐️

Awesome update!

Love you...

Shree :D