Arakshi FF - Web of Love - Chapter 20 & 21 updated 27/01 - Page 9

the post was captivating and enrapturing.👏 only one thing i felt to bring to your notice in the whole post (hope u don't mind).the mention of a hospital in a small village.i think the word should have been 'charitable dispensary".otherwise the rest was 'perfect'.😊

wowww nice
flashback just super
can't stop smiling
raina ufff
sam always be a good friend
arjun letter woww
arakshi fights back
continue soon

beautiful yet painful

Amazing update
arjun and sakshi's first meeting was cute
and the effect of the letters are awesome
looking forward for next part

Awesome update...

Sure thing!
This update surely brought up a smille onb my face. .

I never ever have read this wild village girl avatar of sakshi...and this is really creative of you to bring our this beautiful picturesque characteristics in one character..

meri personal Nicholas sparks...thus time you are venturing out of your comfort zone

and trust me...you are doing a great job by far...

continue soon...

Sorry late ho gayi,,and I'm good now..thanks.!
Chapter 2:
The lines at the start, again, were apt.👍🏼 After reading those, I was in a dilemma whether to continue further or not. Because his emotions feel so REAL or rather You make it feel REAL..But then, raha nahi gaya.🤪😳.And see, now I even don't know what to say..😭
Ok..The intensity of his emotions you have brought out made me have goosebumps and feel chocked. 2 reasons, for I actually FELT it, was..One: I had a trip to a jail when we were in school.they had taken all of us to visit the jailors, and now it reminded me of that.
Two: I can relate better to his emotions than Sakshi's..On top of it, your writing, as i said earlier, it feels REAL.😭

"Once, his gaze used to be as warm as the azure waters of a calm sea, the twinkles in his eyes like the glittering beads of sunlight dancing on the surface. And now, the warmth seemed to have been replaced with a fury of the raging grey waves of a stormy sea."👍🏼 I loved this comparison..😃How do you do this everytime..??
Her reactions,..then her asking "So are you taking care of yourself, ACP Sahab?",.😭...their convo..and the scene where he had to go..Uff..! kya bolu..Rula diya..!😭
When he enters their flat, and the moment when she touches the bars where he had touched, just to feel him🥺..that was again hair-raising ones..😭

The song..Haye.😳.!! It added the finishing touch to the update..Again it is One of my fav song of my fav singer..!😳
You have done a splendid job here..👏 You know.. Avantika Di, by her writing such complex,poignant or i don't get the exact word here.🤔.used to make me go all chocked with emotions..Now you also doing this..Not fair..😭😆
But anyways..Keep doing so..Warna chein nahi milega..😛😃

I forgot about the case..kya karu..not in a condition to think..😆😭
Ha,, so overall it was a marvellous update..👏
Thanks for pms..will be back for the next chap soon..Let me get a grip on myself..

Heylooo i finally am here...sorry traffic jam 🤪😆😆

Arjun been really supportive to sakshi,letting her live her dreams and actually encouraging her...i want a patidev like that too 😳😳

Sakshi brothers makes me worried truly speaking..the way he behaves with sakshi and all kinda hates her...i guess its jealousy because he now thinks there is someone else who is close to his father😊😊

Hehe stealing ripe mangoes...must be soo much fun...i want to eat mangoes now

Sooo sooo arjun already saw sakshi because her veil was not on her...yayyy i want to read about arjun Pov now 😳😳

Awww arjun smiled looking at her...haaye 😃😃

Haha the sweet little revenge of sakshi 😆😆

Dont ever mess with a girl whom is in trouble because of you 😎😎

Black coffeee 😲😲😲 going to make a cup for meee right now😳😳

The letter,the trust arjun has in sakshi and also the willingness and strength he has in him to prove sakshi innocent is commendable 👏👏

Ayooo yeh tum kya kahing...sorry because update was long...mujhe toh nahi lagta...you see when we read it,we goes to arakshi land and and also an update from rituu is never too long 😉😉

Looove the update,how the story is shaping up and also sakshi in yellow truly bought a smile while reading😛😛

Biig biiig hugs 🤗🤗

Chapter 3:
The village description at the beginning was good.😃
Her step-father loved her as much as she did..But both's wishes and thoughts crashed with each other.That was bound to happen.
Raw mangoes..yummy..😛!! Mummy..!
Yellow dupatta..Yellow again..looks like it is your favourite colour...hmm??
Arakshi's first meet was amazing..😳😃 Imagining Arjun giving his usual hard glares to her..Bechari Sakshi..😆
So he came to her house and also recognised her ..*slapping my forehead* Kya jarorat thi Arjun ko batane ki ,ki Sakshi se mila tha😡..Wah Sakshi kya tarika nikala hai badla lene ka..😎! Superb..!😆
Liked that note-writing too..I'm enjoying here..!😃
So that's how the "ACP Sahab" thing came..is it?

Their home without her would have eaten him up..😔good that he shifted at Sam's place..
Sakshi appointed Raina as her prosecution Lawyer..Didn't she knew Raina's thoughts on her..?? Or at that time they were different..??
You know what, after reading last chappy again, I'm thinking it was not a murder at all..

Letter again.. 😳I love letters.. It was a small letter but the impact of the words inscribed in it was much much deeper..Good job at writing letters..👏

Loved both the updates..Though while reading 3rd chappy, some parts of it distracted me, 😆😳It was good feeling reading it.
Thnaks for pms..cont soon.

Originally posted by: Kiyaa-Rhapsody

yayyy me first ! that's a first loll. anyways lovelyyy! I've run out of compliments for you and your amazing writing. love loved it, update soon! Oh and when you become a professional author let me know so i can have your autograph ;) xx