Dosti, Pyar, Aur Nafrat Ki Ek Kahani - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1:

Life can be strange sometimes. It can give you happiness in a moment, but it can snatch away all the happiness in a flash as well. Life gives you smiles, joy, laughter - but it all comes with pain, sorrow, and tears. This is my story - it'll make you smile, love, cry...A mixed array of emotions. It all begin at a raas tryout meeting ...


[Flashback]


Day 1 of Raas Team Tryouts

Jay - So welcome everyone to the Raas Team Try Outs. I'm the captain of the team.

Nisha - And I am the co-captain. So before we start let's introduce ourselves. A lot of you are freshman so let's get to know each other.

Rhea - Hi my name is Rhea. I'm Gujju. Well duh. lol. Um I love singing and...

Karan - Hey guys.

Nisha - Late as usual.

Jay - Just because you're the oldest doesn't mean you walk in late like every time!

Karan - My bad bro. Haha. Sorry for interrupting. Let's continue.

Nisha - Go ahead Rhea. Don't mind him.

Rhea - Um so I love singing and dancing. That's all.

Nisha - Nice nice. Now Karan, since you came in 15 minutes late. You're up.

Karan - Lol. Ahh Nisha...Well I'm a senior. Graduating soon. The oldest member of the Raas Team. And yeah...Known for walking in late for everything.

Jay - Haha. Let's keep going.

Jahnvi - Hi I'm Jahnvi. A freshman here. Love dancing. And hoping to make the Raas team.

Nisha - Cool cool...I'm Nisha. Co-Captain of the Raas team. I'm a Junior.

Jay - And I'm Jay. Founded the Raas team a couple years ago. Also a Junior here.

[The introductions kept going on like that until everyone was done introducing themselves.]

Nisha - So now for the try outs. Here's how its going to work. We, Jay and I, will each show you guys a routine and you simply have to follow what we do. Tryouts will be intense and 4 hours long. We have to chose the best 6 with 3 back ups! So good luck to all! =)

[The next day]

Nisha - Alright guys! Most of you are doing fabulous! Honestly we have to make this team the strongest like it has been for many years! So put in all the effort!

Jay - Yup Nisha is right! Gotta make the team stronger than any other college team!

Nisha - So Rhea you're up. Show us what you got girl.

[I show off my routine as Nisha and Jay watch me in awe]

Nisha - That was almost flawless, however, you made mistakes from here to there...When you...[She goes on to explain where I messed up and where I needed to improve my skills]

Jay - Alright next up. Karan.

Karan - Haha. Here I go. [He shows off his routine and is picture perfect at it]!

Nisha - Damn boy! You're so fine!

Karan - What can I say babe! I'm so sexy!

Jay - That was beyond awesome!

Karan - I've been on the team forever! What do you expect?! Haha.

[I find this opportunity to introduce myself to Jahnvi who seems to be a nice girl. Little did I know, she would soon become my biggest nightmare].

Rhea - What a flirt!

Jahnvi - Lol. Don't tell me you've fallen for him.

Rhea - Nope not at all. Haha.

Jahnvi - Uh huh sure not your type! But must say he's damn good!

Rhea - He's been on the team for so long. What do you expect?

Jahnvi - True! Well I'm excited I hope I make the team.

Rhea - Me too!

[The tryouts continue. Everyone shows their routine to Jay and Nisha.]

Nisha - Alright so we have judged each of you individually. And within a week the results will be announced as to who made the cut and who didn't.

Jay - And just know if you didn't don't be disappointed. There are still many opportunists awaiting you in life! So keep smiling forever! =)

Nisha - And that concludes try outs for today! Have a great day!

[Everyone leaves]

Jahnvi - Man I love Garba and Dandiya.

Rhea - Aren't we supposed to? We're gujju.

Jahnvi - Lol Rhea. Aight I'll see you later! Bye.

Rani - Bye.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Ah that was a great start Rani. I'm really going to enjoy this FF. I'm sure of it. 😃
Edited by KhotaSikaShreya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
^ Nice start of the story, Rani! :)
Pls continue it asap..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
nice one.but I remember only srk's character's name.so plz write who plays which character
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome !! You Have A Really Fluent Way Of Writing !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nice update. The story seems like it will be interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
the start was great and Karan seems really flirt! Well let us know how Karan played wirh Rhea's emotions and how he fell in love with Jhanvi!
But waiting for Rahul and Rhea falling in love ❤️ My SHAHRANI 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Hey where is the 2nd part of this story? Please update soon..
Edited by Harshida_kp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ahh sorry guys. just started working on monday, hence been busy. will update as soon as i get a chance.

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