Rishbala SS: Awaari-- updated Part 3 (9/03/2015)

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Hey guys Its my first story and I have this Insane urge to post it. Hope you all like it. I'll finish this within a month. Its a promise to all. ENJOY

PROLOGUE:
She was dumbfounded, her every thought became naive when she saw him kneeling before her declaring his love for her and when he prompted her for an answer she became aware of her situation and suddenly a perfect answer popped out of her mouth...
"YES"

Madhubala Malik accepted the marriage proposal of Rishab Kundra not because she loved him but only because he had left her with no choice and because she hates him as much as she hates herself for loving him!!!

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Somewhere in Delhi. In a well known university.

""""I LOVE YOU RK"""
I Love you and I am your biggest fan.

RK was stunned to hear her voice, he had heard many more voices among his fan's crowd but this voice gripped his heart. She was here and he was going to make her his. He is not going to loose her this time...



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Hey guyz thanks all for liking and commenting.
Here is the new part..

Part 1


It was a matter of fact that she hated him, not because he
knew that she knows everything and even then he had the audacity to propose her
but because he was using her for his wishes.


Rishab Kundra was her friend, no not only friend but for her
he was love of her life but for him she was a mere friend. She never told him
about her feelings because for her love can't be spoken it can only be
expressed and he was fool enough to not understand her love or maybe he was
smart enough that he was using her love for his purpose.


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"Di, Baraat has arrived. Look RK bhai is looking awesome"
Trishna suddenly intrude her thoughts. For a mere moment she gave her a smile
and then went more deep in her thoughts.



"What a shy bride..." she heard her murmuring but she didn't
care.



What made her sit here in this bridal attire waiting for him
to come and mark her as HIS even though she very well knew that he doesn't
reciprocate her feelings, for him she was a FRIEND and will always be...



"Madhu put the ghoongat down, it's a ritual that Groom
should not see Bride's face before Marriage rituals" Padmini shake her out of
her thoughts.



She silently pulled her dupatta on her face making a
ghoongat.


Perfect, now nobody can see my face. My face will not give
away my turmoil. She thought to herself.



She was carried to the mandap by her family, everything
happened in a haze, she was in a world of her own seeing some other person
marrying to RK and the scene was blurrr for her because she had tear in her
eyes...



"Pheron k liye khare hojayey"


"Vadhu Var k aagy aajye"


"Mangal Sutar pehnaiyey"


"Sindoor...


Pundit Ji kept instructing and she followed that is how
Madhubala Malik became Madhubala Rishab Kundra.



Their marriage was not out of love...


It was out of helplessness from her side..


It was out of need from his side...



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Rishab Kundra wanted to be a STAR, he had always wanted this
and she had known it since she had befriended him. Eventually his naughtiness
and care made her fall in love with him. It was not her decision to love him,
It happened and she never cared that he didn't love her back because it was not
his choice to fall in love. So she was silently in love with him when she came
to know that he wanted to go Mumbai to fulfill his dreams and his parents are
not allowing him this. That day they were sitting on their favourite spot when
he had told her...



"I am tired yaar they do not understand me. They are saying
that I will marry some random girl there and they will be ashamed before whole
village. For Lord's sake who will give a chance to a married man in this
industry"


"YOU ARE A KUNDRA YOU SHOULD MARRY A GRACEFUL LADY"


He poorly imitated his father's voice.



She laughed hard saying "Poor RK, Superstar can't tame his
father, make some deal with him regarding your marriage, he will let u go. Now
lets go I m getting late, Mom will sue me for not cooking, today is my turn"



"Yup, come let's go" said Rishab.



Whole way RK was lost in his thoughts; she never thought
what he was thinking that day later she came to know that he made deal with his
parents.



"Your idea was superb Madhu, I will marry and then leave and
I will keep this marriage a secret so it will not harm my career" said a
cheerful RK



"And who will marry you on these conditions?" She had asked
and he had went away promising her that he fill find a suitable girl soon.



Two days later, in their garden he said to her,



"Madhubala Malik I want to say something important, listen
carefully, you are my friend, my advisor, a symbol of purity for me and will
always be, for me do consider this, plz I will leave as soon as this happens,
I'll never tell anyone that this happened only our family members will know, I
know I am asking too much but plz understand I need my friend right now, its
only for my need of the time. Marry me." Rishab said in a low tone making her
stumped. His proposal was not because he loved her but because he needed her.
He never thought how it will effect on a girl's heart that the person whom she
loved dearly wants to marry her because of a need. She left him there alone.



<p>Three days later he proposed her in front of his and her
family again and this time on three words follwed by four more..."I LOVE YOU. WILL YOU MARRY ME?" for a moment
she thought that he meant it this time but his lowering gaze told her that he
doesn't want anyone to know his real proposal and she said "YES'

Not because she loved him but because she hated him for
using her and hated herself for loving a person like him who uses his friend
like this. He gave her no choice knowing full well that his father dearly wants
her to marry as soon as possible he appeared as a gem in front of all and
proposed her not giving any importance to her decision, she would have said yes
to him if he would have asked her again because he needed her and she was all
for him but he used the situation to make her agree for this relation. She
wouldn't want to marry anyone else in her whole life so it was a perfect answer
for her but she didn't agree for this relation for all the right reasons
instead there were all the wrong reasons which led them to this marriage.

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So how was the first part do like and comment. 2nd part will be updated soon.


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Edited by stay_on_waves - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you guys for liking and commenting. Love u all lovelies.Here is another update..

Part 2

After the Bidaai ritual she was carried to
her in-laws house. There Rk and she had to do some pooja and then her
mother in law settled her in her new room which was decorated with
flowers. " Madhu beta I hope Rishu will always keep you happy. It is
true that he never wanted to marry so soon but we were adamant that he
should marry someone before leaving to live his dreams. Deep down in our
hearts we always wished that he should marry you and your kundali has
some dosh Shamsher told us that he is worried if he couldn't marry you
within 40 days you may not be able to marry whole life as whomever you
will marry, will die, when I told Rishu to marry you he denied
instantly, he kept himself distant then we told him about your kundali
and Shamsher's worry for you and after few days he told us that he would
marry you. We were very happy because we know that he respects you a
lot he will not hurt you and he will always respect your decisions. We
have seen how much he cares for you, you are his only friend here in
Motihari. We thought that if he can manage a relation on this level then
it can only be with you. We trusted you with this decision beta. He wont announce this relation soon and even then
you agreed to marry him. We are very grateful to you for this. You are a
daughter to us now always has been a sweet daughter for us. I wish you
all the best for your new life and haan Wife should know how to deal
with his husband. Keep him in your control. I know Padmini is old
fashioned in these matters. Consider this as an advise of your modern
mother." Said Radha and then left cheerfully burdening her with
responsibilities.

She knew that he knows about her
kundali, she had told him all that herself complaining that she doesn't
want to marry so soon and her father is worrying for nothing, she
doesn't believe this kundali crap and he himself had promised her that
he will talk to his father to talk to Shamsher Uncle as they are friends
and His Dad also don't believe on this crap.

But
after some days he himself used her situation in his favor. She is not
going to mourn her all life for his betrayal, she will confront him and
that too tonight itself.
After a sound of click and some
footsteps he was in front of her. "You didn't change?" he said in
surprised tone. "I thought we will talk first" standing in front of him
she glared at him furiously. "Don't look at me like this you are burning
holes in my skin with that murderous glare" he said while looking here
and there.
"You know very well what you did to me, you
didn't asked me first. How could you? This is your friendship?" She
accused him. "Hey! calm down, u r so dumb I did this for us, think
smartly, I solved both of our situations in one go, now nobody will
trouble us to marry, neither my parents nor yours!!" said he in a calm
tone. "That doesn't make sense Rishab Kundra we married so that we don't
have to marry?? Is this ur plan to help ur friend or to help yourself?
Didn't I told you that I don''t want to marry?" Nothing was making sense
to her, she was furious enough to kill him. "Listen Madhu I don't
regard this marriage as a marriage, you don't have to fulfill any wifely
duties, we will be friends always, U just have to act as a daughter
which you always had been to my parents and after some time we will make
it clear to our parents that we married for them only. We will live
separately, no one will force you into this relation. As long as you
don't want we won't get divorce either. I will respect ur every
decision, just consider it with calm mind, it's a good deal, you just
need sometime then u will understand my point" He stated in an obvious
tone and then left for change. She was left speechless what was she
thinking, he had many words to justify his act, if he had this many
words how couldn't he explain this to her before marriage. The fact was
that he took decision for both of them either it was good or bad it was
solely his decision and he was obvious that she will find this decision
good for her. He is calling her a friend and forcing her in a deal at
the same time. Do friends make deals? If they do then do they regard
other's choice before deciding for other one? Maybe it would be a good
deal but problem occurred where he neglected her right of choice and the
fact in her heart that because of her love for him she felt betrayed.
Maybe a friend would not have mind his acts as much as she had felt
hurt, if this makes her good then she will assure herself again and
again that she is her friend only.
But only time will tell what she
will do if she accepts his deal or not, if she forgives him or
not...His this act had marked her heart and she was never going to
forget it.
"You still wondering? Come on Madhu just give
it a thought" said he "Ok Rishabh I am going to consider this but you
have to give me some time you forced your decision on me If you would
have considered me and explained me earlier it would have been much
easier for me." she said in a expressionless tone. "Sorry, but I never
had time to wait, you were taking so much time, and I had to leave
tomorrow itself as my audition has been confirmed in Sitara studio" he
told her.
"You are leaving tomorrow itself!! do your
parents know?" she was surprised that she was unaware of such big thing,
forgetting every other thing she wondered how her parents would react
to such news. "You don't worry our parents know this and yes I have to
leave so go, change and sleep. I am sleeping on couch, you can sleep on
bed, some days later We'll sort out something and u can have ur own room
then" He said in hurry and went to sleep, she can hear happiness in his
voice when he said that he has auditions tomorrow. What was she going
to do with her life now, he didn't even have time to make her swallow
the situation, so she decided to take one thing a day. She changed and
tried to sleep. Sleep which didn't touch her eyes that night.

NEXT MORNING
She
couldn't sleep so she left the bed early, got changed into an anarkali
and then left the room. Downstairs Radha welcomed her by a hug. "How was
ur first night in our home." asked Radha in a motherly tone. "It felt
like home mumma." She lied conveniently. Radha must have read her unsaid
words so she advised her "Give ur relation some time Madhu, sometimes
Rishu does immature things but if u ignore them ur relation will blossom
like a fresh flowers. I know u r upset with him going away the next day
of wedding, but u have to believe u r his wife, marriage is a sacred
bond wherever he will go, he will return to u."
What
marriage, what bond. I m only his friend which he had remembered when he
was in need. She thought to herself and the replied Radha "I understand
him mumma u don't worry I have no problem with it."
Radha
seemed satisfied when Rishu called her "Mom keep my breakfast ready I
have to leave in half hour" saying that he went back to room. She stood
there numb when he left happily promising her that she would be happy
here and he would call her. She didn't have any words to say to him
expect a short and honest "TAKE CARE"

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He was back here after so much time but being here was hurting him like hell. He never wanted to come here but last days he felt that its his punishment to come here and bear this hell..

Three
years and he still regretted for what he did to her. She was not worth
it and He was a monster to her. He was so selfish that he never tried to
understand her, He always had made his own choices and never considered
how would these choices will react on her. How much could she bear. He was not worthy of her definitely and he had hurt her immensely and so she had left him...

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So how was this part. Do like and comment and criticise, whatever u feel is welcomed dear lovelies

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Edited by stay_on_waves - 10 years ago
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Nice start... continue soon😊
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I have to clear this one thing that the past is narrated by Madhu and present is narrated by RK. Its high time I should mention year while narrating b/c most of you are confused about time here. Thanks all for liking and commenting.

Here is new update.

Part 3

Present-Year 2014 Motihari

RK has come back to his home only to feel hell, A hell named guilt, which he himself created for him. Past was haunting him too much now a days. He was restless, he had saw her after three long years and she had denied his existence, she had neglected his presence, she was avoiding him clearly...He had earned this, last three years he had stopped himself from coming here as coming here was only making life worse for him. He can't change past so he decided to live present with dignity. After Madhu he had came here two times, both the times he left in a vulnerable state, even when he stopped coming here, the memories belonged to her haunted him so much. This place holds so much memories of his parents and his Madhu, No one was with him now, His parents died one by one and Madhu also left him. He deserved this loneliness. Initially after Madhu left him he came here twice to soothe himself but whenever he came here he felt ashamed of himself that what had he done to his family then soon the shame changes into his self allegations; memories of his past deeds, his parents orders, sometimes in request sometimes in anger and Madhu...Madhu's accusations, her anger, her hurt, her soothing voices on his loss, how can he forget anything regarding her, regarding his parents and regarding his callous behavior towards them. How did he make his life hell... how...???

Life was good for him always, he was the only son of Mohan Kundra the biggest and the coolest landlord of Motihari, he didn't know that there is a stubborn Zamindaar within him who was very much concerned about the ancestral values of family, he never knew it before..
He remembered very well when he had said that he has sent his photos for auditions which were going to be in Mumbai, He expressed that once he go to Mumbai he will return only when his career will gear, his father had immediately told him to marry before leaving, at first he thought it was a joke then after he came to know that his father was very much serious regarding his marriage. He had protested stating that no one gives a chance to a married man in this film industry but his father was adamant, "I don't want any random girl to step into my house with my son claiming her as my Daughter in law, I know very well the lights of Mumbai can make anyone blind, I want you to marry a graceful girl, a girl who is educated yet civilized, a girl who can give good upbringing to my grand childs, a girl who loves this land, who loves us and who will protect our name and honor here, you do not want to be a zammindaar, she will help you to look after our ancestral land, honor and values, You can do whatever you want to do with yourself but I want you to married and settled in Motihaari, this acting is your passion for somedays after that you have to return back here if not for your wife then for your child, I won't allow you to abandon our land" "But Dad I am not leaving Motihaari, regarding Zammindaari what is all in land, it can be looked after by your loyal people too" Rishab argued but his father said his final words dismissing him that "Look here Rishab Mohan Kundra, I am old now, many people work on my land, they are loyal to us from generations, I did a big mistake by sending you in a boarding school, you have not attached with this land in a way we did, and then I did my second mistake by keeping you away from any kind of responsibility, here people respect us, they come here to take help and suggestions from me, I am thinking of them, when I say bahu then I mean a future Zammindarni who will bear all my responsibilities, I am not forbidding you to live your dreams, I respect your dreams, you should respect my dreams too. I love Motihaari and people of Motihaari, I want Motihaari to progress and Prosper more, I am not going to listen any other word regarding this, If you love me then marry a girl before leaving."
That day he thought much he was not ready for marriage but he loved his father a lot, he discussed it with Madhu, she gave him suggestion of making some deal out of it which can be acceptable for him and for his father at the same time... after thinking a lot he had put his terms and conditions for his marriage, proposing a secret marriage, his father seemed to ease at his approval for marriage then he suggested that RK should marry Madhu as he always wanted him to marry her and only she could bear such conditions b/c she is his friend too. He had never thought about Madhu in that way, for him Madhu was a very pure soul which deserves much better person then him. She was always calm and propose better solutions for any problem but how can he share this with her that his parents want him to marry her. Instead he told her his plans and she challenged him that he can not find a girl who can marry him with such conditions. He couldn't find a better solution to his problems and then he accepted that his father's suggestion was right only Madhu could help him out of this but he promised he would not let her suffer, he would respect her every wish, whatever she would want from him, he would give that to her, they will be good friends after marriage too, so he proposed her. He knew that her father also wanted her to marry soon and like him she was also not ready for such big committment so he thought she would say yes to him easily as it was a good escape but he was wrong after listening to him she walked away quitely. He was so consumed with his problem that he didn't explain her the benefits they both would get from this marriage while proposing her. After some days he made the first mistake in their relation, he proposed her in front of their families and this time he knew for sure she wouldn't dear to disagree in front of her father and as he had thought, she agreed,Their marriage happened in hasty only with counted family members and he could feel a silent Madhu beside him performing every ritual as a lifeless body and it scared him. He got scared that he will loose a good friend in her so he readied himself to face her, he decided to acknowledge this marriage as nothing, knowing her he knew that he had to face her wrath, he did his best by explaining her every bit of his plan and then avoiding her anger and disapproval he slept to give her space so that she may come to the real terms of their relation as soon as possible, he behaved with her as nothing had happened and left her the day after their marriage for the auditions, it was his second mistake...
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After reaching Mumbai he got so much stuck between the auditions and grooming sessions, he would call home and talk to everyone as often as possible but his parents was always complaining that he forgot them so easily and he doesn't miss them, only Madhu seemed to understand b/c he discussed his worries only with Madhu, she would console him, suggest him better ways to gear up his career, apparently she had accepted their deal and soon she started to behave much like the old Madhu only that she was much more mature now, when he would say that he is loosing faith on himself she would soothe her, her voice had magic after talking to her he always amused that he feels better and energetic again.
After four months he got his first movie and he shared this news with Madhu first, she was happy for him and then his calls to Madhu became less day by day as he became super busy with his movie and yes with his heroine Deepali Bhatia, she was a magnificent lady, daughter of the producer of movie and after spending one month on the sets with him, she declared that she has fallen in love with him, He liked her also but he didn't love her, so he told her that he is not interested in her but she ignored his disapproval, she started to declare her love more often and he started to talk about her with Madhu, at first he was irritated by Deepali's constant persuasion but later his irritation changed into liking and he shared this too with Madhu, this was the third mistake, gradually he started liking her more, his talks filled with her antiques for him and of course she was all for him, always reaching him for help, for party and for love, they were becoming more then friends day by day, their movie was completed within six months and he decided to visit Motihaari before commencement of promotional campaign as he was missing his parents and Madhu...
His visit to Motihaari was unexpected as he kept his visit as a surprise least did he know that a bigger surprises was waiting for him to happen their...
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"Rishu tu aagaya, terey dad tujhy buhat yaad kar rahy they aaj hi subah mujhse keh rahy thy k tujhy wapas bulaaon, tu khud hi aagya dekh dil ko dil se raah hoti hai, tujhy dykh k buhat khush hojyn gy wo" Radha said gleaming for arrival of his son. "Yeah mom I was planning to visit since many days but I was stuck there, when I got some time I immidiately left for here before any other work can stop me" said Rishab, " tujhy bataya tha na k aaj kal bimaar reh rahy hyn yeh, phir bhi tu ney aany mai itny din laga diye, tu aur teri film ne itna time liya 2 mahiny aur lagata to saal poora hojata, chal ab jaldi se apny Dad se mil ly, tujhy dekhny ko taras rahy hyn" Radha led him to his father and the sight of his father shocked him, he was looking very weak, "Dad, what happened to you?" he hurriedly walked towards Mohan who was startled by his voice, "Rishu, you came!!" he exclaimed in weak voice, "Yes Dad, its real I am here but first tell me what had you done with yourself?" RK asked in complaining tone "Nothing Rishu, these are all signs of aging, I am an oldie now, I am glade you came, I was missing you so much" said Mohan. "No Dad I can sense something is serious, where is Madhu, she will tell me..." On the mention of Madhu's name a silence prevailed among them. "Where is Madhu Mom?" he asked to Radha. "We can tell him now Radha, Madhu didn't mention any thing regarding this, she only said to keep this news from him so that he won't leave his career midway to come here" said Mohan. "Wait, what happened to Madhu, what is the matter, tell me right away.." RK demanded.
"Rishu, actually Malik, Padmini and Trishna left for Delhi 5 days after you left, u know Malik was a heart patient, Trishna got admission in Delhi in college as they were planning to leave Motihaari for better facilities and then they shifted, 2 months earlier the doctors did his by-pass surgery, his surgery was success, in first week he progressed so well but soon after that his lungs failed and he needed assisstance for breathing, a week later doctors did his tracheotomy, doctors didn't understand what happened to him as he is not answering, not moving, just blinking in response, his hands, arms and legs are filled with water and now the doctors are saying that he has some bleeding in his intestine which they don't know exactly where,, Madhu has gone to Delhi last month, she is there and apparantly Malik's situation is worsening day by day. Doctors have lost hope, they say he doesn't have much time to live." said Mohan "So much happened and nobody told me, Oh My God all these days when I talked to Madhu she was in so much stress and she never told me about this all, can this be any worse that I being his friend never felt her stress while she talked to me, I must leave for Delhi now" said RK "That won't help Rishu they are coming back here, Maik always wanted to live in Motihaari, it was his circumstances which made him leave Motihaari, Now Madhu thinks that may be he would be better " said Mohan. "What circumstances??" asked RK "Trishna wanted to study in Delhi, Malik's in laws belonged to Delhi so Padmini wanted to shift in Delhi, Madhu was going to marry you and I wanted her to live here with us but you preferred a secret marriage, people would have gossiped about her if I would have kept her here without any reason, besides Malik also wanted Madhu to live in Motihaari, Padmini may have raised her step daughter like her daughter but her parents are indifferent with Madhu, as Madhu is the most educated girl here I made her my finance manager and so she lived here with us in pretense of job, while Maliks had shifted to Delhi." explained Mohan. so much had happened in his absence and Madhu had never discussed a single thing with me "When are they coming?" he asked "Tomorrow 12:00 noon"...
Next day RK was very eager as he wanted to talk to Madhu, She came with her family, Malik was brought in an ambulance along with his serving staff, he was kept in a well equipped room of his haveli as instructed by Mohan and when RK went to meet him there, Madhu was shocked to see him but she said nothing except a little "hi". He met Malik and he felt sorry for the state of Malik, he knew Madhu loves him too much and he felt helpless that he couldn't be with her in all these days. That day Mohan talked to RK, he wanted to announce his marriage as he felt that Malik is burdened with Madhu's responsibility though he had trusted them but he may feel better if they announce this marriage in front of everyone. That day itself Mohan organized a grand Reception for RK and Madhu and announced in front of everyone that they are husband and wife. RK promised Malik that he would take care of Madhu and never leave her, in all these Madhu was so devastated for his father's state that she didn't say a word and followed whatever she had been told. Next day Malik died as if his soul was captured in his body b/c of Madhu as soon as RK took Madhu's responsibility Malik left for his eternal life.
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It had been 15 days since Malik had died, Madhu had gathered herself much sooner then he had expected, Padmini and Trishna left a week after Malik's death, Madhu was with them all the time, He couldn't talk to Madhu about their complicated life, when finally the were together after ten days of their reception, all he did is to bring life back to normal and he had succeeded much, Madhu was again responding well when one day...
"Hey hero, missed me"
"Heck what are you doing here Deepali???"""
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So how was this part, plz do comment or criticise.
Edited by stay_on_waves - 10 years ago
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Nice prologue
Continue soon dear
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Woww nice start cont soon
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Wow...great start...continue soon !! And Congrats for new story :)
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sounds very interesting... cnt wait 2 read it, do update soon
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nice prologue
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