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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys! How u all doin? Dis is the
1st time'm writing a OS.I'm not very good at writing bt
I hope you guys like it and if
you don't I'm sorry . Feedback will be taken with open hands
and will be greatly appreciated. 😊

'I miss her'
He said as I looked up at him arching my
eyebrows,
Randhir? U miss her?
N dere he iz the Randhir Singh Shekawat
Cryng hz heart out in frnt of hz roommate Parth.
'Yeah Parth I do'
He said looking away,
'But u were the one who cheated her'
who broke her trust n heart into million pieces..
I reminded him. I hated him because he broke a
innocent soul,
'Yeah...m guilty of that.
Bt shz olso did wrng wid me
jb mujhe uski sbse jyda jarurt thi tb wo mere sath nii thi
chli gayi mujhe chod kr apne dream ke liye.
'But there is no use repenting over it'
'Please Parth help me'
'Help u in?'
'I want her back'
That was the limit. I looked up at him as he
gave me a pleading look.
He knew that would melt me but I wasn't ready
to destroy her life once again with him,
U thnk Sanyukta ne tumhe choda hunhh
Itz you jiski wajh se tumhra or sanyukta ka relationshp tutaa.
tumne usse tb choda jb usse tumhre support ki jarurt thii.
'Sorry dude,but I won't. Even if I can I won't' I
said and walked away,

...Because trust once lost,it can never be
formed again...

The End..
soo guyz if you lyk itt HIT LIKE & LEAVE COMMENT 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A really mind-jostling OS with a great message.
Parth did a really great job by making Randhir see the truth and by denying him the help.
Trust once broken can never be repaired.
Great job done sis.
You did a brilliant job work in this first OS of yours.
Eagerly waiting to read more.
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's short but it gives a great message. :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one
Loved it yr
Keep smiling

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