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aspatel2

@aspatel2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Very nice part. I hope somehow there is a treatment!

Please cont. soon.

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AVC92

@AVC92

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Hope it is Anjali who got the slap. But who might have slapped her? Arnav? I'm guessing it's him. :) Please continue!! It's so interesting! :)

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ariyazaveri

@ariyazaveri

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

as ususal awasome update.i hope it should be arnav who had slap anjali ,it would be more humilitating for anjali not one but three times.😆its high time arnav should take some action against his di and his so called money minded family,make khushi more rude,ruthless and arrogent so that she can give raizadas to the test of their own medicine.its all started because of shyam,so that he should be more punished.and arnav and other raizadas should rot in the guilt of their own crimes as because of them today aryan is blind .and dont let anything happen to aryan .

really loved the bond between aryan,aman and khushi.update next part soon .eagerly waiting for it

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

hello guys, m down with flu dnt know if ill be able to write n upload any time soon. Loads of love. Kashish.

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

get well soon

we will wait

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swtgirl_tina

@swtgirl_tina

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Brilliant update..!! 😃 My heart goes out to Aryan. He is such a cute and well-mannered kid, but suffering due to the mistakes of his father. :( I loved how you described Arnav's anguish. So it was Anjali and not Payal. I was too close to guessing. :P She has become a horrible woman. 😡 Let's see who slapped her. :P I would love it too if it is Arnav, but then that would become kinda obvious. 😉 So now Anjali is going to be on the top of Khushi's hit-list. Oh she is going to pay royally for what she did.. Take care dear and Get well soon. :)

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zebali

@zebali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Very sad to read update.

What the Aryan us blind oh no.

Heart wrenching .

Bcoz of his father?

Khushi wright behaving with rizadad.

Especially with Arnav.

How poor he is .

He is effected by his son.

But all is in vain d.

His the biggest punishment is his son calls him Mr Rizada OMG.

anji what the?

Sick woman.

She always the cause of arna s trubleness.

Khushi red the notice and spit fire at Arnav.

But he was unaware of all this.

In khushi,s eyes Arnav culprit.

But his stare lead the khushi that who did that.

TFS.

Edited by zebali - 11 years ago

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#498

NOTE

Hello guys, please guys pray for my best friend's mother, she is not well, pleasee guys pray for her soon recovery.

Sorry for being late, but as posted on page73, I was down with an awful flu, just getting back on track. Thanks to those who prayed for me. :)

Seriously, guys, thanks a lot for appreciating this story and liking/loving Khushi's character, personally I just love Khushi with every update, how can I love my character so much? maybe because each time, I put a part of myself in the characterization.And now another in the list is going to be Aryan.

You guys made my day, four pages comments and almost 70 likes, I knew you guys can do. We should retain this or much more, if you guys are up for it, are you? :)

As I told previously too, whenever I update a part, I am really nervous but whoever comments and likes make my day brighter. I do forget my problems and tensions when I see my work getting appreciated so, it is a request guys, if you like and appreciate my work please express it, by pressing like or/and even better, leaving me a comment along as well as share the link with you friends. Trust me, when I say it means a lot, we, writers do live on your feedback. I sincerely hope likes and comments will increase, please don't let me down.

NEXT PART TONIGHT OR TOMORROW FIRST THING ;)

Another new OS on Arhi: OS Nahi, Hum Nahi Kareinge! (22/01/15)

-FFs going on Arhi:

New Arhi FF- For All It's Worth-Teaser/Page6 (26/12/14)

New FF- Bleeding Heart-Chapter2BPage6(01/01/15)

Keep showering me with your love guys.

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Kashish

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#499

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#500

Anjali...😡, Good that she is thrown out of house. Shyam will leave her after he finds that she doesn't have any money. What Mami said was so right about her.

Finally Arnav and Aryan have some father son time. I hope Arnav is enjoying his son's antics.

Finally everyone knows the truth. Nice twist with Payal there, She did what she did because she didn't want Khushi to get hurt anymore.

What was the surprise at the end?

Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 11 years ago