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mansi

@mansi1219

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

I just came across your story!! It is amazing!! So different from all that i have read. I am so very glad you are continuing it again. 😊 i am excited to see where it goes moving forward. Its so sad to see them go through what they are right now. Cant wait to find out!!

P.s. Do you have any other stories as well that i should catch up on??

Thanks again for write such wonderful work and sharing it with us

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Zeehana

@Zeehana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

I found this story today

And couldn't stop reading it

This story is mysterious intense and addictive

It is really good

Waiting to read more of it!!

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

i really wish khushi soon gets to tell him why she had to leave him..i cant see arnav being this rude to khushi..

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Ouch! That one really hurts. I knew it was payback time but still the blow was so harsh. While inflicting pain, he is trying to teach her a lesson that will not be forgotten easily and for her not to take him lightly. I think he wants to make sure that she will never abandon him again, no matter what happens. Hence the punishment is very harsh. Devi that was cruel girl.

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55555666666

@55555666666

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Posted: 10 years ago

#575

Wow. Simply amazed.
I've never read a story quite like this one. The way you write really makes me feel like I'm there in kerala in person. Khushi past is such a mystery and its probably connected to Arnav's which is intriguing. The bond that kashi and Arnav have is eternal love. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#576

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#577

Very Well Written..Good Update...👏

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#578

That was as amazing as always, Devi!
Just what on earth is going on in Arnav's head!
How is Kashi going to try & resolve this issue between them!
This story just gets curiouser & curiouser!

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redpetals123

@redpetals123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#579

Wonderful I always love your Malayalam dialogues it gives me a sense of belonging. Marriage is fixed but there is no emotion or excitement in both. Khushi becoz of his ignorance and for arnav it's the way she left him all alone.

As pallsvi said she really need to tear apart her heart in front if him. She needs to open her feelings for him to make him realize what he means to her. May be arnav is also waiting for her to know that they r special to each other and are meant to b together.