'MOVED ON' [Sandhir OS]- Precap based

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is based on the precap. As you all are disgusted from Randhir. So lets take a small Revenge from him XD.

'MOVED ON'

He moved closer to that Saavali Chipkali and there Sanyukta had a mind wrenching sight infront of her. He kissed Saavali Chipkali on the cheek and quickly turned away.

Sanyukta closed her eyes but didn't let her tears fall down for some pathetic loser. She was too determined to take revenge this time.

Revenge Makes a person Blind and empower the soft feelings from inside out.

She left from the scene and here that Saavali Chipkali tries to come closer to him but Randhir shoved her away on the floor.

He was angry on Sanyukta for not getting affected by the act. Randhir poured his anger out on Saavali Chipkali.

'You desperate bitch.. Stay away! Did you ever saw your face in the mirror. You look like a Cow.. Oh my god! Mene Cow ki bhi insult kar di.. Stay in your limits!' He shouted in high-pitch and left from there.

That Chipkali was sobbing silently on the ground disgusted with herself.

>>>>>>>>

Here Sanyukta was leaving for Factory early in the morning when she saw Raghav injured laying on the ground. She widened her eyes and rushed to him.

'Raghu.. Raghu.. Are you okay?' Asked Sanyukta slightly panicking. She kept her stuff aside and inched his head in her lap.

'God! Yeh toh unconcious hain. Help! Anybody help!' She shouted for help when Randhir stopped his bike passing by from that area. His eyes were bloody red when he saw Sanyukta caressing Raghav's hairs.

'What the hell are you doing here with him?' Randhir jerked her a little but Sanyukta pushed him.

'Dont you dare touch me with your dirty hands.' Yelled Sanyukta gritting her teeth.

'Dirty hands? Haath tumhare gande hue hain Sanyukta.. Iss.. Raghav ko chuke..' Said Annoyed Randhir.

'Where am I?' Moaned Raghav while trying to get up from the ground with the heavy head.

'Hey.. Are you okay?' Asked Sanyukta giving him support to stand.

'Sanyukta.. Randhir ? Tum dono yaha?' Raghav chided confusingly.

'Step aside Sanyukta before I knock him down.' Angered Randhir witnessing Sanyukta near Raghav almost in his arms.

'Go to hell, You freak. I wont step aside.' Declared Sanyukta moving more closer to Raghav.

'What is going on?' Asked Raghav.

Randhir's heart was breaking every second when Sanyukta was moving close to Raghav. He was losing his patience.

'Fine! I'll help him, now step aside.' Growled Randhir.

But Sanyukta ignored him and led Raghav to the auto in which she came.

'He said he will help me.. Then why are you doing this?' Asked Raghav while sitting in the auto.

'I want him to be shattered.' She whispered blankly sitting beside him.

'Why?' He muttered.

'Close your eyes.' She added.

'What? Why?' He wanted ask her further.

'Just do as I say.' She breathed out and sighed.

Here Randhir was numb. He couldn't register what was happening.

'I dont trust him with my Sanyukta.' His heart spoke to him and lead his way towards the auto to witness what shattered him completely.

There Sanyukta cupped Raghav face and kissed him on his lips while tears came out of her tears. Raghav was taken aback, so he jerked her away but softly.

'What the..' He couldn't complete.

'Shut up!' She closed his mouth with her palm.

Randhir was weak on his knees. His Sanyukta was kissing other guy infront of him. He couldn't take it anymore so he rushed towards them.

'Is he coming?' Asked Sanyukta.

'Randhir? Yeah. He is looking angry and.. Sad.' He paused for a bit.

'First kiss completed.' Said Sanyukta with smirk on her face.

'What!' Raghav exclaimed.

Randhir pulled Sanyukta gently from auto and informed the Autovala to take Raghav to the hospital. The auto left.

'What do you think you're doing?' Sanyukta enquired while freeing himself from his grip.

'Why?' He shouted like a maniac.

'What why?' She simply questioned.

His heart burned to hear Sanyukta's simple answer.

'Why.. Did.. You.. Kissed-him?' He choked while tears came out.

'Meri marzi.' Laughed Sanyukta.

'Sanyukta.. I'm serious.. Are you that desperate..or..' He couldn't complete further. She slapped him on the cheek real hard.

'I'm not desperate. You're. Well, you cheated on me. You kissed that Ishika because I denied to share that level intimacy with you right?' She spat venom on him.

'Shut up!!!! There's nothing like that.. Do you get me? I always loved you..' He declared.

'Tch.. Tch.. Tch..!! I love you Randhir. I still do. But You have to face the pain that I have gone through. So.. Good day Mr. So desperate.' Sanyukta smiled evilly while leaving the Shattered Randhir behind.

Randhir was just confused and felt betrayed. His eyes were red and puffy with the tears.

>>>>>>>>

Randhir entered inside the factory to witness Another kiss. This was a limit Randhir could take. Here Raghav kissed Sanyukta on the cheek.

'SANYUKTA..' He rushed towards her and took her wit him inside the changing room.

All the way she was smiling like an idiot. Randhir couldn't bear any more so kissed hard on her lips getting no response.

He picked her lips with his dry ones. Randhir slides his hands around her waist and kissed her eyes one by one.

'I'm sorry.. I'm sorry..' He was muttering while Sanyukta was just enjoying. Randhir caressed her hairs hairs with his fingers.

'Usse bol Dena.. Voh kya bolega me usse mar da lunga.. Agar usne tumhe vapas Chua bhi hain toh..I'm sorry for every f**king damn thing..' He cried loudly kissing her cheeks one by one.

'I'm sorry for kissing that ugly bitch..I'm sorry for cheating on you.. I'm sorry..but I still love you..' Sobbed and hiccupped Randhir while joining their foreheads.

Finally Sanyukta cupped his face and kissed his tears away. She looked inside his eyes and smiled.

'Its okay to accept your own mistakes.' She whispered.

'I love you..' He muttered.

'But.. Its too late Randhir Singh Shekhawat. I got what I wanted. Yeah I still love you. But its time for me to move on.' She pushed him away and smirked.

'Never ever cheat on any other girl in your life. You may think she is broken, you saw her weak and loving side. Today you saw her dark side that never forgives for the sins which tear her heart away. Its too late.. Good bye!' She proudly linked everyline in his mind. She has became a complete and a tough woman today.


Sometimes you need to be selfish to keep yourself from falling apart

That's exactly Sanyukta did and I'm with her. Are you?

#Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved this.
I hope something like this happens except Raghu has genuine feelings for Sanyukta and Randhir is aware of it.
Loved Sanyukta's reply to him waisey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mind blowing
Zumi I so wanna hug u rite now
Really u penned it perfectly
I so loved it
I alwz want sanyu to be strong
Not roaming around rd n teach him a lesson
To give him a taste of his own medicine
U rocked it totally

It was superb
I liked the ending most
Finally she stood up for herself
I really believe that we should fall in love bt we sholudnot fall so low that we cnt face ourself in mirror
We should never lose our self respect



I just hope serial me b kuch aesa ho
Rd badly needs a jhataka

Love u
Muuuaaahhh
Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome superb yar
really i am wid u
i was very eagar to see dis type of strong sanyu
rd have to face his deeds
keep writing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Girl54

Loved this.

I hope something like this happens except Raghu has genuine feelings for Sanyukta and Randhir is aware of it.
Loved Sanyukta's reply to him waisey!



I hope so too. Lets hope for each other. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Mind blowing
Zumi I so wanna hug u rite now
Really u penned it perfectly
I so loved it
I alwz want sanyu to be strong
Not roaming around rd n teach him a lesson
To give him a taste of his own medicine
U rocked it totally

It was superb
I liked the ending most
Finally she stood up for herself
I really believe that we should fall in love bt we sholudnot fall so low that we cnt face ourself in mirror
We should never lose our self respect



I just hope serial me b kuch aesa ho
Rd badly needs a jhataka

Love u
Muuuaaahhh
Keep smiling



>Hugs you back tightly<
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
I so want this sanyu in the show...desperately LOL
Tough and confident sanyu is somewhere lost between these revenge and all things..
Though i too want sandhir but not at the cost of her self respect and dignity
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hat's off to you for taking up the courage and writing something wonderful as this..
The extent to which Randhir has broken Sanyukta is really irrepairable and it is an unforgivable offence...
Randhir definitely needs a taste of his own medicine but I definitely don't want Sanyukta to do THIS cause if she kisses someone else then what'll be the difference between her and Randhir?
I want her to be indifferent towards all such disgusting acts of Randhir and act nolchant rather than being affected.

Coming to this OS... This is awesome!!
I just loved it how you made Randhir repent and relent over his wrong doings... He was literally guilt ridden, the way I want to see him in the show as well.
That remorse that'll cloud him once the mist of revenge gets cleared has been so well described.
Everything is so aptly set...
According to me, this is so-far your best OS.
Well I am a sadistic person and so I love the heartless Sanyukta here.😆
This is flawless and exquisite piece of mesmerizing work.
Good job done!!!!
I want to read more of it!!!
Do write another OS soonish!!

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic! Superb! Amazing!

👏

I love this strong Sanyukta! 😊

And for the first time ever, I felt bad for the chipkali. :(

No girl deserves to be used like this for revenge and jealous reactions.

Great work! :D

xoxo
Amreen 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Hat's off to you for taking up the courage and writing something wonderful as this..
The extent to which Randhir has broken Sanyukta is really irrepairable and it is an unforgivable offence...
Randhir definitely needs a taste of his own medicine but I definitely don't want Sanyukta to do THIS cause if she kisses someone else then what'll be the difference between her and Randhir?
I want her to be indifferent towards all such disgusting acts of Randhir and act nolchant rather than being affected.

Coming to this OS... This is awesome!!
I just loved it how you made Randhir repent and relent over his wrong doings... He was literally guilt ridden, the way I want to see him in the show as well.
That remorse that'll cloud him once the mist of revenge gets cleared has been so well described.
Everything is so aptly set...
According to me, this is so-far your best OS.
Well I am a sadistic person and so I love the heartless Sanyukta here.😆
This is flawless and exquisite piece of mesmerizing work.
Good job done!!!!
I want to read more of it!!!
Do write another OS soonish!!

Regards
Keya



Dear Keya,
The point you are stating is absolutely right.
There's no buts and if's.
As Randhir is blind in taking Revenge, in this OS Sanyukta is just too blind to take Revenge.
As they Say Revenge overpowers every damn emotion in your hormones
I always read FF which made SANYUKTA LOOK WEAK AND BICHARI TYPES..
But I SWORE That IN MY FF'S SANYUKTA WILL NOT BE A BICHARI.. SHE WILL BE A FAR INTERESTING CHARACTER AND A STRONG ONE INDEED.. THERE'S NO FF OR ONESHOT IN WHICH I'LL MAKE SANYUKTA WEAK.. THATS MY POV.

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