Kriyaansh an incomplete love story

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Pata chal gaya rey ko kitna duffer hai na woh tho hamesha karti thi isko ehshas nahi hua

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Wow nani ne coll chod diya
Kriyansh moment cute

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Superb update kriyansh ka cunfesion wow i m dead
Love it so much

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perfect_arsha

@perfect_arsha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

wow...👏
read this ff in a go...amazing one...👏
loved it...kria aa gayi at the right time...dance fest

all the chaps were awesome👍🏼
chabilal returned...missed him so much😭

so finally kria told everything to swayam...bffs for ever😃...

gang ka plan...😃

but sab ke beech ye nani...😲 😡 😆 🥱

so rey realized...😛
last part was fab...👏

kr scenes😳...their confession😳😳😳😳...

kria wanted to tell rey her feelings and was playing with her😆...rey ka revenge😆
rey is naughty😳...

so finally our kria and reyaansh turned into KRIYAANSH❤️...☺️
lovely story...loved it...⭐️

thanks for pm...😊

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Srishti Prakash

@___SAD___

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Nice start...

Loved the beginning

Getting excitment

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Srishti Prakash

@___SAD___

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Wonderful FF

Felt Real

I could literary see the scenes with open eyes

Read it in one go and couldn't take my eyes of till the last line

I got addicted to this story

I hope that u understand what I am trying to say

Such a lovely FF

Totally wonderful and mind blowing

Heartwrecking and breathtaking

I felt as if I could see everything

It felt as if I was watching d3 on channel V

That's more than a complement

U r such a talented and god gifted writer

plz PM me ur write-ups from next time

I would certainly read urs by hook or by crook

Love ya doll...

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Its wonderful!!!

It just felt so real!!!
U r really an awesome writer...
Kriya ki entry pe kisine badly behave nahi kiya!!
Well dat itself was a high point!!!
N starting me taani rey k har move pe...she was keeping an eye!!! It was just dat i felt lyk dat!
N kroyansh ki just frndshp phase bhi awesome tha!!!
N swaron n gang ne kya plan kiya hai!!!
N kriyansh confession was so so...grt!!!
N sharon ne sabse pehle usko support kiya!!!
N swayam ne usko thappad nahi mara!! Maine wo bhi expect kiya tha!!
N rey k bhi utne zyada nakhre nahi the!! Dat was really nyc!!
Lolzz!! Usne taani ka call cut kar diya!!!
N he even asked for sm space!!!
Unka break up was shown widout much fuss!!!
N taani left widout ny emotional drama n ol!!
Its just grt!! I cud actually visualize d parts!!!
It was awesome!!!
Plz pm me for ur further works!!