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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fanfic #21!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Guli has no limit!)😆

Betrayal

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Uday Walia: (Pix Above): He has everything a man could ask for!!!! But there is one thing he's dying for... and thats a grandson!!! He has 3 daughters and one Son! All of his daughters and son in laws live in WM!!! They have kids...but... He wants his only son to get married..... so there can be a Heir to Walia House!!!!!

Jai Walia: He enjoys his bachelorhood!!!! He's not all into girls or anything!! He enjoys being himself!!..... he doesnt like the idea of getting married....... but has no choice.....

Bani Dixit: Sweet and simple gal! Her parents dont like her!!.. She cant read or write........ (She's an illiterate)

Uday's 3 daughters:

Jigs, Rano, and Laxmi...

Married to: Adi, Ranveer, and Natu!



Uday will do anything to get a grandson.... One day he finds Bani...... and gets her married to Jai!! Little does she realize.... why Uday got her married into that house.......

**This FF has already been pre written.. and i do go back to read it... so if i make any mistakes..... then i do apologize!**



Edited by *Guli* - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

Uday is in the hospital!!!

Doctor is checking up on him!!!

It turned out that

He had some type of cancer!!!!!!

Jai was stunned like anything!!

He was like what????

Doc is like….

The sooner we start the treatment..

The better it will be for him!!!

Then he can recover it faster!!

It hasn't spread too much!!!!

Jai is like

Wat are you waiting for??

Do it!!

Sooner the better!!!!!!

Uday is like

I refuse to get treatment!!!!!

Jai is like what??

why???

Uday is like

U know what I want!!!!!

Jai: What???

Uday is like

I am getting old!!!!

And I want you to get married!!!

Jai is like

How many times have we talked about this??

Uday is like

You are the last son!!

I want to have a grandson!!!

That's my wish!!!

Jai is like but I don't wanna get married!!!!

Uday is like

You either get married…. Or else I don't do this treatment!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Jai is like come on!!!!

Uday is like no!!!!

Uday is being stubborn!!!!

Jai is like…

I don't wanna to marry!!

I don't want a wife!!!!

I love my life!!!

Uday is like

Do this for me!!

I want an heir!!!

Jai is like ok fine!!!!

I will agree to it!!!

But one thing

After she has the kid….

I will divorce her!!!!

Uday is like fine!!!!

We take the kid

And that's it!!!

Jai is like okay!!!!

Jai is all pissed

He has to get married!!!

Uday tells him

Don't tell anyone about this

This is between

Me and you!!

Uday is like

I will find the girl!!!!

Jai is like okay fine!!!

His treatment gets started and wat not!!

Jai is thinking

I will get married!!!

He doesn't want to!!!

But now he has no choice!!!

His dad wants a heir!!!!


The End!!! (Please comment!!)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i saved

haila uday had cancer and jai ko shaadi karni padegi
chalo hero ne entry maar di
heroine kab ayegi???😆
continue soon ben
Edited by jigna_07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhh i KNOW he's lying.. that gfn uday walia.. i already don't like him😡 im sure he has that cancer.. FAKE cancer.. ughh😡 and Jai.. he's gonna play bani.. get her pregnant.. and ditch her.. dude 😭 that's messed up😭.. awww d same fav. couples.. jigs/adi... rano/ranveer.. and laxmi/nattu.. yay 😃 and bani can't read or write haila.. wat if they make her sign some papers or somethin😡.. but ughhhh 😡 damn it.. plz update soon jaani😳😳😳 and thanx fo starting today😉 loveddddddddddd it 👏

Edited by Mrs. SIR - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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U had to make her illitrate naa...😭 and Jai n Uday...OMG...soooo crapppyyy.....aaggghhhhh...😭

Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Uday and Jai are both mean😡😡😡
i am slapping and smacking both senior and junior
poor jai's wife
how about this get him married to pia and then he can live happily with bani😛
Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guli dear u r back, u r back i was sure u won't be able to be away for too long and will be back to give us independence day gift.

great start dear but i was not able to get what does line "bani not able to write or read" means? is she suffering from some disease?

please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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do do ffs, yaar Guli you really do have no limit. By the way I thought you said you were going to start your new ff next week, why so soon ( 😉 not that I'm complaining). This one sounds more interesting, I like the other one too, oh I can't wait to see Bani get her revenge, I have a strong feeling she will find out the truth and make Jai and Uday's lives hell for treating her like a piece of property.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aaawww poor Bani aur illiterate!!!!! Uffff. Mr Walia Snr, good game, nice way of having your way 😉

And yeh kya???? Jaiiii, aisa nahi karte sweetheart 😳, you will not want to get rid of the mother of your child, you will seeeeeeeeeee

Update soon Guli jaani 😳 😃

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