CID Written Update 01/31/2015: Khatre me Milly aur Tina
( love the title โค๏ธ why always Daya should get the privilege of being in danger๐)
At a restaurant,
Valusha and Ketan discuss and argue about a deal and a mysterious parcel. Valusha stresses Ketan to accept her conditions, ketan is not ready to do that. Their food ( pizza ๐ค) arrives and Valusha eats a slice and arguments heats up. Valusha leaves and Ketan thinks his wish will come true.
At a home,
A small girl leaves house in mid of night after leaving a note that she is leaving house to help her friend.
Outside an apartment,
Maid and neighbors try to wake up the occupants of a flat, who is neither opening the door nor answering the phone. Watchman informs that man of the house(Rohan) didn't return home last night and lady of the house is alone in house. They break open door ( awe Yellow shirt guy,๐ฒ ye gandi baat hai,๐ bechari darwaza ko Daya ka intezaar tha๐๐โค๏ธ). They find a lady hung from ceiling and it is none other than Valusha. (thathattataaan BGM ) CID team ( ACP sir, Freddy, Sachin, Purvi and Jaywanthi) ( arrey, am I dreaming CID in after 5 minutes , Good job script writer๐). Team observes no signs of fight, victims neck bone broken which indicate possibility of death by being hung. ACP sir observes ceiling fan is at least 10 Ft high and Valusha is about 5 Ft 3 inches to 5Ft 4 inches. Freddy raises a point that there is no furniture around using which Valusha could hang herself. ACP sir declares that is the biggest mistake of the murderer. Rest of team searches for finger prints and other evidences while ACP sir interrogates neighbors. Watchman and maid inform that Rohan didn't come home last night and also his mobile is not reachable. Purvi finds Valusha mobile where last message is from Rohan at 12:30 AM that says he would be home in 30 minutes. CID team wonders where Rohan could be. Freddy informs that no finger prints are found in house. Jaywanthi informs all things in house are in their places and all doors, windows are as is. Further investigation reveals that the couple moved in just last month and a man, his wife and their daughter came to meet Rohan and Valusha a day before.
Flash back:
Milly ( little girl who left home in previous scene) comes to Rohan and Valusha flat looking for her friend. Rohan and Valusha deny any little girl living at their flat. Milly was quite sure that the flat which had many flower pots in balcony had a little girl who was beaten by some lady where as Rohan and Valusha deny having any girl in their flat.
Present:
ACP sir suspects gudbud ๐๐and proceed to Milly house.
At Milly house,
CID team Sachin, Karan and Jaywanthi ( ye Karan kaha pe tha? achanak aagaya is scene mei, Also didn't he leave ๐ฒ) arrive at Milly house where Milly's parents are very tensed since Milly left the house. CID team assures they would find Milly, informs about Valusha murder and question about the mention of mysterious girl by Milly.
Flashback:
At, Milly birthday party, all kids act some roles. Milly acts as her brother Bunty. Her brother has passed away due to accident and Milly doesn't know about the death. Milly happen to overhear the conversations and learn that Bunty will never return. She locks herself in room out of anger and after she opens door, she complains that she saw some shadow lady beating a little girl ( whom she addresses as her friend) at the flat that has flowers in balcony. Parents don't find any girl in the balcony and conclude that Milly made an imaginary friend in place of Bunty.
Present:
Sachin concludes Milly left as no one was believing her. Sachin reads the letter written by Milly and assures that CID shall find Milly as soon as possible.
On Road, In car:
ACP sir, Freddy and Purvi search for Rohan by tracking his mobile and find Rohan in a car which met accident. Freddy finds Rohan mobile and last activity was the SMS sent to Valusha ( hayee , no one locks their phone in CID, so that cops can easily access call records ).
Forensic lab:
Dr Tarika and Dr Vaibhav ( Didn't he leave? ๐ฒ)perform autopsy on Valusha ( with no masks, in open lab even without removing wrist watch ๐คช) cut a piece of intestine and test. The auto detect chemicals machine in lab detects Amine Meta X ( I should write to my pre university and graduation college about this machine. Bachon ko pareshan karke rakhte the ki "find chemical formula of this substance" ๐ก ๐ก). Abhijeet enters in happy mood as Dr Salunkhe is not at work ( beemar par gaye honge aur kya, ๐คaise open o ceiling environment me autopsy vatopsy karne se yahi hoga ๐ ๐) along with Nikhil, Pankaj and Jaywanthi. Dr Tarika informs that Valusha is death is due to poison and her dead body was hung to ceiling fan. Jaywanthi wonders how Valusha ate poison as she didn't find any poison in Valusha house ( Does this mean she put all edible things, groceries from Valusha house in to that " I DETECT ALL" machine already ๐๐). Dr Tarika declares Valusha is victim of slow poison and further shows some undigested particles in Valusha intestines that are usually used in Pizza. ( Why that camera when open autopsy is being done ๐). They conclude that pizza had poison in it. Abhijeet asks team to find locations of Valusha phone, the place where it stayed long is where Valusha ate pizza ( good logic, ๐๐ผbut he didn't ask how long does this poison take to show its effect. ๐ฒShe could have eaten something a day before that might have poison in it , why blame poor pizza. ๐ Also doesn't slow poison mean something that is given over a period of time regularly and eventually causes death ๐๐)
Night, on street, at Pani puri stall:
Milly buys two packets of Pakora for herself and her friend Tina. Both kids walk away. Pani puri vendor keeps eye on them and informs his gang that two kids are available to be kidnapped, sets two men behind kids. A man overhears the conversation. Goons follow kids until park where kids decide to spend night. ( I hope that citizen alerts police๐, This part was handled very good showing possible dangers kids can face with no parent supervision๐๐.)
At a Restaurant,
ACP sir, Freddy and Purvi interrogate showing picture of Valusha. Waiter confesses that he mixed some powder in pizza as advised by Ketan. ( How and when did CID team confirm that Pizza had poison in it?๐). Ketan paid bill by credit card, so CID team plan to catch him through the credit card details. Restaurant staff further inform that another man met Valusha as well. Freddy gets a call from man who observed goons following Milly, informs same to Freddy. Freddy suspects if they are Milly and his friend. ( Why? ๐ฒAre they only 2 kids in entire Mumbai who is not at home with parents? ๐Oh script me yahi tha๐๐)
Morning time, Remote village
A couple catch jeep to reach Mumbai.
In Mumbai, on roads,
Milly and Tina get auto to reach bus depot. But the auto wala is just one of the goon who was following kids. ( I like the way Milly says one should never take ride from strangers, ๐๐ผbut why didn't Milly parents taught her the phone number so she can call them as needed. ๐คOnce Milly met her friend, what was stopping her from going back to home or reaching police.๐๐ผ BTW, how did Milly meet Tina?๐ฒ๐๐). Milly and Tina observe that auto is moving out of city and yell for help. Milly and Tina drop bags to catch attention of the motor cyclist behind auto ( good one๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐). Motor cyclist stops auto and saves kids. ๐ณKids ask him to drop them at bus depot.
At bus depot,
Milly and Tina arrive at bus depot and wait for someone. Couple from village also arrive and search for someone. Goons also arrive. Couple are none but Tina parents. Goons fight with Tina father and motor bike wala. CID team arrive ( to finish the fight ๐). While fight is in progress Milly is taken by Ketan in car. Abhijeet chases car while all other goons are taken to CID custody. In car, Abhijeet finds Rohan and Ketan with Milly. Abhijeet slaps both and confession starts. ( I was never so happy about confession scene before ๐ฅฑ ๐ฅฑ ๐ฅฑ). It is revealed that Valusha , Ketan and Rohan are actually members of gang who kidnap and sell kids. They kidnapped Tina, Valusha wanted to take more money, so Rohan and Ketan killed her by poisoning her food. Rohan parked his car in some lonely place and went home to hand Valusha dead body, then came back and created an accident scene. ( So Tina was in Valusha flat that night, Acha watch man hai use ye nahi pata ek bachi aayi thi us flat me, naahi ye pata Rohan came and went back in night ๐). ACP sir delivers phasi dialog. Milly parents arrive at bus depot ( how did they know?, CID ki pichai kar rahe the kya ๐). Tina's parents thank Milly for saving Tina. ACP sir asks parents to pay attention and believe kids.๐ณ ( he didn't tell about any safety measures for kids , like advising kids to remember phone number, take help of police and first of all to be under adult supervision etc ๐ฒ)
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