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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone this ff is just attempt to try something new. feel free to bash.i just wanted u guys to have a look at this as u all have been very kind to me .just read it and tell me to continue or not. Story of a girl's life .Story of a girl who is simply ,sweet yet complicated and very confused in his teenage. This story deals with the dramatic twist and turns that change the girl from innocent to clear and from simple to confident. and then how her life goes on.
MY LIFE

characters:SANYUKTA:Main lead.simple, sweet ,very innocent,talented, beautiful,loves her family more than her, dont know how to deal with outside world.
RANDHIR:sanyukta's chrush .Good at heart, handsome,not so talented ,sanyukta's friend,only one bad pt easily influenced by others.
PARTH:Randhir's best friend.genious.hates sanyukta.
KAUSTUKI:sanyukta's sister.
other characters will be revealed as the story goes on.
VIDHUSHI:rank no1. slim ,good looking ,arrogent


Prologue
April 2001

HI I am Sanyu, oops sanyukta, today i am going to a new school to start my 4 th class. Really very excited ,new teachers ,new class,new books and above all new friends.This time i shapat no foolish activities,no banging with pillars and no freezing infront of boys.Taking this pleadge in mind ,and saying bye to dad i took the first step in school.
CHAPTER 1

Afternoon

woooh yeeeh eeeks what type of school is this .. GOD! I am in 4th is this u show children of this age. cheee meri table par LOVE LETTER...


FLASHBACK
Morning 8.30am

Her entered the school gate .Her bua was one of the office staff so she was easily guided to her class IV-B.She was welcomed by the class teacher .Then introduction same My name is sanyukta agarwal.i have done my 3rd from C.M.S.i stood third in class..my hobby is drawing...etc.etc..and as same no one was intrested in it.she finished and sat down taking his teachers permission like an obedient child.

she was made to sit with jiggy and yoyo.these were just random boys of class.but very friendly and sanyukta very soon got mixed with them. But as usually due to her shy nature satisfy hersellf in her this sweet happy family as she was very shy to approach other girls or boy. everything was gd till clock struck 12 that is

LUNCH TIME

whole class got divided into 2 groups :Boys and girls.One team was headed by PARTH ,a perfect cute boy and on other side was VIDHUSHI ,arrogent ,jerk ,but sanyukta 's bad luck beautiful ,talented and rank 1 of this class. the arragement was so perfect as it seemed they are going to play antakshri but reality was different. in no time started fighting like cats and dogs.Sanyu bewildered by the situation was sitting on her seat when vidhushi slapped a guy and the paper which he was carrying fell on sanyukta's table and it was a LOVE LETTER😆. As soon as Sanyukta read it started crying whole heartedly as for her it ws nothing less than a sin to read such content .her parents has kept her totally away from such things and they were quite successful.


the rest of the day was spent crying by sanyu and other students watching her.


BACK TO AFTERNOON

thinking what happened she hid her head in her mothers lap and started crying again.










part 1: above

part 2:pg 2

Edited by sweetastha - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
Loved it
Would love to read it
For sure continue it

Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Nice story
Loved it
Would love to read it
For sure continue it

Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling




newmoon love u

u always comment .

it was very different concept so i was not sure that u all will accept it or not

u comment made me relaxed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gud going dear ...
nice & fresh concept ...
pm me sweety
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: holysoul

gud going dear ...
nice & fresh concept ...
pm me sweety


Thankyou.

will pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: HARNIM

NICE STORY

PLEASE UPDATE SOON




thanks harnim.


will update soon..


but not with these no. of likes



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice cncpt
Cntinue soon n do pm me
Btw m also writin a stry LOVING AN ANGEL plz do give it a trt
Luv vrinda
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Posted: 10 years ago
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YOU ALL APPRECIATED MY ALL WORKS BUT NO ONE LIKED IT I GUESS .SO I WOULD WIND IT UP ASAP.TILL THEN PLZZ TOLERATE IT.


CHAPTER 2


Sanyukta did not told anything to her mom ,it was not that she wants to hide things from her mother but because she finds it unnecessary to bother her parents.Although young sanyu understands the financial limitations of her family and knows how much her parents are struggling for providing her the best of education.So she never wanted to give her parents even 1% of extra worry.Hence she got up and went to her room and her mother thinking that it is just hangover of first day went busy with her cooking.

Sanyukta was very much loved by her family but her parents were never friend to her .They were strict,disciplined and cultured .Her mother was a house wife so had time but wants her daughter to spend most of her time studying .And her dad had high hopes that her girl will reach the hights of success were he was not able to reach.But they were not realizing that it was creating pressure in their daughter's young mind.

Rest of the day went normal .She completed her homework and went to sleep .Hoping a new day will bring new hope ,new light...and yes it brought it.

Next day her teacher made anew sitting arrangement and she was made to sit with RANDHIR..😉😉.

A/N:this might be its end if likes do not come this time.Sorry no pms this time.i posted this because it was there in ff forum but now no part so no more updates.

Edited by sweetastha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was nice yr
Don't discontinue it plzz

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