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Prologue

A lonesome pearl escapes from the corner of her eye. She packs her belongings neatly in a four by four cardboard box.

I realize now how much of an apathetic man I have been. She possesses fewer clothes than a monk. The wedding band, a platinum ring sits on the nightstand. She picks it up, along with our photograph from the altar. Her loving gaze dwindles in favor of indifference. She lays the picture frame top down, the wedding ring on top of it.

"I am going away for a week. I expect you to have moved when I come back. Take the furniture. In fact, take everything but the walls".

She does not face me. She carcasses the window seal and greets the vines climbing up our bedroom walls.

"Zoya", I say and hope she hears me.

Often times I speak but, the words do not come out. My vocal cords are mute and my ears are ringing a deafening noise.

She hears me. Just for a moment, her brows pucker. I have seen no response from her even since the wooed day I betrayed my Zoya.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
First of all I love that you can write in English, I don't understand hindi to the max so its difficult for me to read it, but I can see that you write perfectly in English and at a very advance level as well

Story line seems interesting but I can't say much from the prologue, hope to see an update soon,

Please PM when you update:)

I've sent you a buddy request:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uh oh did Asad have an affair 😲 😆 You've certainly caught my interest , looking forward to Chapter 1 ! x
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Originally posted by: Peeves.

Uh oh did Asad have an affair 😲 😆 You've certainly caught my interest , looking forward to Chapter 1 ! x

No hints. My lips are sealed.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SimplySmile

unres

First of all I love that you can write in English, I don't understand hindi to the max so its difficult for me to read it, but I can see that you write perfectly in English and at a very advance level as well

Story line seems interesting but I can't say much from the prologue, hope to see an update soon,

Please PM when you update:)

I've sent you a buddy request:)

I am being cautious with my thank yous here because prose can be pretty in any language. Given your circumstances, however, I see where you are coming from. I am glad you like my work.
Thank you again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG
I LOVE IT
PLEASE DO PM ME
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
I am always a fan of stories where asya are married
eagerly awaiting 1st part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haila... He cheated on her..
... Interesting... Update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ineresting concept...
continue soon...
thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A different take... I have always wanted to read something like this. Brilliant... What kind of betrayal is what I am wondering about. Nothing is worse than infidelity. Lets see what this leads us to. Amazing.
Do update this one. But update the Royal Affair one first. Coz, a royal story is what i love the most!
This one is bomb too... Just saying. LOL

PLEASE PM!


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