An Innovative Escapade !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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An innovative escapade .

Bunty got a phone call while he was working on the accounts in his Travel Agency office .

Hello Sagarika , ha .. tell me , where are we going to spend our night together ?

Please Bunty , here the matter is serious , can you come here immediately ?

What happened Saagz ? ---concern in his voice .

Regarding Swara Bunty , come here immediately , to City Hospital , Emergency Ward .

What happened to Swara Saagz ? tell me the truth ---

Come here now itself Bunty , I am scared , can't tell you on phone , and don't inform to our people ---

Bunty already on the road, riding his bike at top gear .

He entered in to the emergency ward with his heart in his mouth , with tension and concern .

Saw Saagz and Swara sitting in a corner of the sofa , highly tensed up !

Saagz came running towards Bunty and hugged him and started crying , joined Swara too .

Please stop crying and tell me what happened ? Now authority dominated in his voice .

He noticed fear in Swara's face , and raised his eyebrows with questioning looks he

enquired Saagz .

She told him what happened in that booze party which was attended by Swara with her friends that evening .

He was scared and asked Saagz ,where is he now , how is his condition ?

Come , they lead him in to the ward . There the boyfriend of Swara lying on the bed in unconscious condition .

The Doctor came and met Bunty and explained him the condition of the patient .

See , somebody battered him black and blue ,my God what strong punches he got all over his body ! It will be difficult for him to recover soon , will take at least few weeks , anyway what happened , tell me the truth . It is a police case , I have to complain to police . It is a criminal offence , and injuries are very deep . -

Bunty was stunned and pleaded him not to complain , an innocent girl's life is involved ! While saving his sister's life ,he lost control over himself and beat that boy --- he bluffed to the doctor and expressed regrets ,said he is ready to bear the expenses for the treatment of that boy .

Doctor agreed and asked a favor from Bunty in return , soon his sister's marriage is there , asked Bunty to supply vehicles in concession .

Sorry Doctor , I can't give you concession , I can give you only on free of charge . Both laughed loudly and the patient opened his eyes and saw Swara in front of him and lost consciousness again with fear .

Doctor did the needful treatment and brought him back to senses ,and said , ok boy, don't misbehave with the girls who have brothers with well built body ! I will send sister to give you a shot of painkiller !

A scary wail from him ---No ..noooah , not a lady , please send a male nurse !

Bunty asked Saagarika how she managed to reach there -

Bunty ,while talking with Swara I realized she is attending to that party , so rushed there to save her , but ultimately saved that stupid boy from Swara's anger in the knick of time !

Later Bunty asked Swara ,--Swara how you managed to smash this boy , do you know Kung fu or

Karate ?

Then Swara hesitantly revealed --

Though I promised to Bhabhi ,will never do wrong things again , I went to that party out of inquisitiveness ,he tried to take liberty with me , scared after saw him excited , ultimately saved myself from this untoward incident by smashing him with my full strength --- she explained to him with closed fists!

Bunty looked towards her amusingly and said ---- your figure and strength saved you from this danger . Don't reduce your weight Swara . Saagz , why don't you become like her ? I will buy extra -large size dresses for you too !

Swara looked at Saagz - see Bhabhi , Bhaiyya is making fun of my hefty figure .

No Swara , your Bhayya is proud of your strength and presence of mind !

Bunty nodded his head with appreciation !

Let us go back to home !First let me pay and deposit some more money in the counter for this stupid's treatment !You both come by an auto and I will follow you !

Meanwhile saw Madhav coming out of the ward after visiting his friend in the hospital and asked him to drop Swara at home !

Swara, inform Amma that we are going to visit Shivji's temple and will have Prasad there , will be late , don't wait for us ,tell her to sleep !

Come on Saagarika , let us go to the bank of River Ganga and spend sometime there .

With her smiling face Saagz mesmerized him and he lost himself in her magnetic looks ! Swara take a sigh of relief for saving herself from that rape attempt and from the anger of her brother .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My God Madhuri what an FF and I am the first to comment. Wonderful yet romantic. Saw the concern of a Brother and Husband. Love it.
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Madhuri , great yaar .😃 Love to read the self defensive measures Swara has taken, while attacked by that lust filled crooked boyfriend !😡
So ,again you brought your favourite word prasaad in to this OS also?😆
Thank you for this innovative defensive measures for the girls !👏Good OS .⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good story. 👏
I love it. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Madhuri, great way of story telling and write more.my fav sentence Bunty entered the emergency ward with his heart in his mouth!😊 Loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great OS, Madhuri 👏⭐️

It has romance (so they'll visit banks of Ganga river, their favorite spot) action, humor, women empowerment 😉😆 Go, Swara...go!!! Great writing. 👍🏼 Love it.
Edited by Sneha...Love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ppp333

My God Madhuri what an FF and I am the first to comment. Wonderful yet romantic. Saw the concern of a Brother and Husband. Love it.

Thank you Padmaja.
These are all our dreams about our man in life !
He must be a responsible person towards every family member !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avyakta

Madhuri , great yaar .😃 Love to read the self defensive measures Swara has taken, while attacked by that lust filled crooked boyfriend !😡

So ,again you brought your favourite word prasaad in to this OS also?😆
Thank you for this innovative defensive measures for the girls !👏Good OS .⭐️

Avi , since the beginning , everything depends on this Shivji's prasaad !
Thank you for praising my OS .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nn027

>Good story.I love it. 😃

Thank you Nado . 😊
Edited by Snehamadhuri - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tulasi14

Madhuri, great way of story telling and write more.my fav sentence Bunty entered the emergency ward with his heart in his mouth!😊Loved it!

Tulasi. Thanks for likeing my story telling way . 😊
Edited by Snehamadhuri - 10 years ago

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