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shravani_2311

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awseom yar...

imagining mihir and mihika...raman and ruhi is so cool...

loving it...

update soon...

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harinikrishna06

@harinikrishna06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Anjelica.Karan
Sorry, I don't know how to send pms so I might not be sending one..Thanks for all who are reading my story, thanks for ur support...

Part-3

Raman, Ruhi, Mihir, Mihika land in the Vishakapatnam Airport.
From their there they have to go to a village.
Since ruhi wanted to go using the water ways as it was the 1st time she would travel using a boat. All 4 of them use the boats to go to the village.

Ruhi-Papa, If their is a hole in the boat how will the water go out.
Mihir(in his mind)-Aldready I'm geetika scared in this boat and ruhi is asking such dangerous questions.
Mihika (wispers)-don't shiver otherwise everyone will come to know.
Mihir-Muje kisse cheez se daar nahi lagta.(I don't get scared of anything)
Mihika-Ya I know...
Raman who was thinking an answer for his daughter s question answers...
Raman-We will make another hole.The water which enters from one hole will go out from another hole.
Ruhi and Mihir get satisfied.
Later after 5 mins Mihir realises what raman told and gets even more scared.
Mihir-See u might fall into the water catch my hand tightly.
Mihika-I won't fall keep ur ego aside and catch my hand if ur getting scared.
Mihir-if I will be alive I will do anything...catches her hand.

They reach the village.
An elderly man was observing these silly talks.
While getting down he asks Ruhi her name and then speaks to her.
Later he asks Raman as to whose house did they come.
Raman-The Iyers house sir.
Elderly man-why?
Raman-The Iyers are my In-laws so just dropped in to meet them.
Elderly man leaves immediately.
Mihir-Arey,he was asking questions and left so rudely.
A worker said-"he is Mr.Iyer, u came to visit their house only sirji"
Mihika-Oh, see the way we are treated.We left everything to meet him and he is acting so rude.
Raman understand's the reason behind Mr.Iyers behaviour.
They call a taxi and leave to the Iyers house.

Precap:Raman reveals his flashback to Ruhi while all the Iyers listen.

(This part is almost like a filler.U might not get Ishita's entry in the next part also.sry but ishita ka entry will surely be a good one.)
Might update the next part today itself.Thanks.

hello :) awesome story...my favorite movie..i watched it countless time...waiting for ishu entry :) thank u fr the superb ff 😊

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Anjelica.Karan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Ok I'm updating another part now.

Yes my native language is telugu.

And as I already said this is written inspired by my favourite movie Santosham.

Raman Ruhi and Mi-Mi reach the Iyers house.

Ruhi gets down from her father's lap.

Ruhi-Papa such a big house.Wow flowers and butterflies...It is be..be..be..

Raman-beautiful??

Ruhi-ha... (yes)

As they enter the house they meet a person.He looked like he was 40-45 years old.

A lady come running and says-Mani ur bag.

She sees the Raman Ruhi and mimi and goes inside.

Mihir and Raman-Hello..

Mani-U are..

Raman-I am Raman.Raman Bhalla.Shagun's husband.

Mani-stares at them and leaves without speaking.

Mihika-I'm awestruck they are Sooo kind.(Sarcastic)

Mihir-Mihika?

Mihika-What? I'm not gonna keep quiet now ok.

Raman-Mihika it's ok.Don't act as a kid.

Mihika-U always make me shut my mouth.I hate u both.

Mihir and Raman - but we love you.

Mihika-smiles faintly acting to be angry.

Ruhi-(giggles)

Just then another person enters.

"Hello I'm Bala.I spoke to u over the phone that day".

Raman-hello Bala.

Mihir and Mihika shake hands with Bala.

Ruhi then pulls Mihika's dupatta.She gives a look saying that u all forgot me.

Raman carries Ruhi.

Raman-Ruhi my daughter.

Ruhi-Hello uncle.

Bala-Hello beta.

Bala-Raman sorry Mani ne..Woh...actually...

Raman-I know he is upset.

Bala-Sorry.

Raman-its ok.

Bala-Come in I will introduce u to all.

Bala-This is Sowmya.Mani ka wife.and Mani is Shagun's eldest brother.I mean..

Raman-ya 1st mani then you and last mein Shagun.

Bala-Yes ur right.

Bala-This is the bride-Simran. Simmi.

Mihika- in the mind-- I think her parents passed away in accident. Shagun was saying about her.

Bala-Romi yahan aao(come here.)

Romi- Hello

Raman-hi.

Romi-aap Raman na.Heard a lot about you.

Raman-shagun Ne bola. (Did shagun tell u)

Romi-Ya but other sources also.

Raman-Hmm..aa..

Bala-Raman Amma.

Amma-Namaste

Raman-Namaste.arey I thought ke app tamil me vanakam bolenge.(I thought u would tell vanakam as in tamil.)

Amma-smiles.

Ruhi-hi

Raman-Ruhi Patti.(Signing here to call Amma as Patti. I.e grandmother

Amma-come here beta.

Ruhi goes near.

Amma kisses her on her cheek and ruhi rubs her cheek immediately.

Raman-Amma she doesn't like anyone to kiss her.

Ruhi-haw papa lies.I allow u to kiss na.

Amma-ya I know.Shagun also used to do the same thing.

Amma sees Mr.Iyer who came back home then only.Vishwa see she is just like Shagun.

He walks away.

Amma-smiles and leaves from there.Thinking about Ruhi and Raman.

Bala shows them the house and gives them 2 rooms in the next floor.

Mihika-so arrogant.that uncle acts soo rude.

Mihir-arey unpack the bag na.

Mihika-u don't listen to my views na.I was unpacking the bag and just saying.Now unpack this luggage ur self.

Ask me anything and I will kill u.

Mihir-sorry.

Mihika-its not ok.

She leaves from there and Mihir looks around the bed as removed the clothes and threw the on the bed.

Mihir-India me bhi jorru ka gulam. (Even in India Im only the servant.)Why did I speak?Look up and says- it's not fare God.

Mihika goes to Raman's room.She sees Raman wiping Ruhi as he gave her a bath just now.

Mihika-Raman I getting bored.

Raman-why ur husband is not entertaining you.

Mihir-ya from when I got married to her I'm doing only that work.both brother and sister use me.

Mihika-whatever.

Ruhi-its ok Mihir chachu.

Mihir-It has to be ok otherwise I will be killed na.

Everyone laugh while Mihir makes an annoyed face.

Raman-We will go down now there is some puja.

Mihika-not again.

What were the sources Romi was talking about? Within few updates it will be revealed.

Precap-Raman and Shagun's love story.

Sorry couldn't post the flashback in this update.

so sorry.

next update me pukka.

Thank you.

Edited by Anjelica.Karan - 11 years ago

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Mimi's convo was so nice...

Raman saying i tought you will greet me tamil is so cute...

Nd ru allows nly his father to kiss... Such a sweet momnt... Loved it...

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veena8

@veena8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

nice for ur writting

why u r updating so short???

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cutie782

@cutie782

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Wow superbbb buddy my fav movie !!!! Just love d songs, cast everything and while reading d story I was getting d background score , songs of both santhosham and yhm!!!! And plzz make sharam love story short and ishra's long... update soon and if possible PM me!!!!!