Taarey ss: True love never ends, but.....(discontinued note on pg 4

Hi guys, how r u all? I'm also a taarey fan. And know that we all r depressed when taani got engaged with vishesh. So, I thought about writing a story on taarey. This story is inspired from a telugu short film. The concept is lil similar to show's track. I'm posting the prologue now.

PROLOGUE OR INTRO

In Jodhpur

A sweet voice is lingering in the small but beautiful house surrounded by lot of greenery of garden. The sweet voice is of the female singing a sad song. You can feel the pain the voice if u listen carefully. U may wonder, is it just because of the sad song or something else. Just then a car came and stopped before the gate of the house. A girl came out of the car and went into the house. A middle-aged man(servent) came to her and greeted her. She replied back with a polite smile and went towards a room. She stopped at the entrance of room and kept staring smilingly at the other girl who is singing and playing keyboard with her eyes closed. After finishing the song the girl opened her eyes and saw the other girl staring at her.

"Areey di, aap wahi kyun khade ho gaye, andhar ayiye na!" Said the girl smilingly

"Taani, tum itni pyaari ga rahi thi ki mein bas tumhare gaane mein kho gayi aur wahi khadi hogayi" Replied the other girl smilingly.

Both girls went to balcony and sat on the chairs there.

"Kaise hai aap di ?" asked taani

"mein teek hu, tum kaisi ho?" asked nupur, taani's sister

T: Mein bhi teek hu di

N: Bahut din hogaye tumse mile hue. Ab toh mein bhi kuch dinon Mumbai shift horahi hu toh waise bhi milna kam hojayega na! Isiliye socha ek baar mil lu.

T: Acha kiya. Toh sab kaise chal rahe hai di? Saare tayyariyan hogaye?

N: Ha, lagh-bagh sab kuch hogaye hai. Waise ab mein yaha ek hafta hi rahungi toh ek baar hamare ghar aaona, sab ko accha lagega.

T: Hamesha se wahi toh kiya hai na jo sab ko pasand ho. Lekin ab nahi. Mein nahi aaungi.

N: Shaadi ke char saal ho gaye hai aur taiji ki gaye 3 saal! Abhi tak hum sab se gussa ho?

T: Mein gussa nahi hurt hu di.

N: Taani, ye tum kya choti si baat ko itni badi kar rahi ho? Ab chodd bhi do un sab yaadein.

T: Dekhne walon ko kuch cheezein bahut choti lagte hai di, lekin jin pe beet ti hain wahi jante hai. Mere wajah se kisi ki life spoil hui hai. Ab chahe koi kuch bhi karle koi fayda nahi

N: taani tum aise apni life ko ignore kar rahi ho. Mujhe tumhari phikar hai

T: Aap ko meri fikar karne ki zarurat nahi hai di. Mein apna khayal rakh sakthi hu. Aur mere bare mein sochne wale bhi hai, toh aap sirf apne bare mein sochiye jaisa hamesha karte hain.

N: Tum kehna kya chahti ho, ki mujhe tumhari fikar anhi hai?!

T: Di, mein ab is baare mein baat nahi karna chahti.

N: Ab is maamle mein baat karke koi fayda hi nahi hai. Tum kuch samajna bhi nahi chahti toh kya fayda! Mein chalti hu. Said nupur with hurt voice and left from there hurriedly.

Taani kept looking out her room window with tearful eyes.

In Mumbai

At a Beach,

A Handsome Man sat near the shore, lost in his own thoughts. His eyes held lots of pain and surrounded by dark circles indicating his sleepless nights.

A beautiful girl came near him and tapped on his shoulder.

The guy came out of his thoughts and look at her and stood up.

"Hi rey," said the girl with a smile.

"Hi riya," replied rey with a slight smile.

Ri: Kaise ho?

R: Bilkul waise hi jaise pichli baar mila tha.

Ri: Us baat ko paanch saal ho gaye hai, lekin abhi bhi usiki baarein mein soch rahe ho?

R: Just laughed a lil bitterly and asked, tum bolo kaise aana hua?

Ri: Woh, jis academy mein mein kaam karti hu waha ki students ki ek bahut badi dance competition hai. Unhe bollywood aur freestyle mein meine train kardiya hai. Ek round Lyrical hip-hop ka bhi hai. Aur tum se behtar dancer hume kaha milega! Agar tum unhe train kardogi toh unhe bahut help hoga. I know tumhe dance chode hue bahut saal ho gaye hai lekin unhe bahut zarurat hai isiliye, please maan jaao.

R: Sorry riya, Ye toh tum bhi jaanti ho na ki, taani ke jaane ke baad mein ne dance bhi chod diiya. Toh please mein nahi karsakta.

Ri: Foolishly behave mat karo, rey! Kisi ladki ke liye tum apne passion ko chod dogi?

R: Jab pyar saath nahi hai toh passion kaise rahegi, riya? Isiliye mein ne dance chod diya. Ab mujhe convince karne ki koshish mat karo.

Ri: Teek hai, who chodo. Mujhe tum se kisi aur cheez ki baarein mein baat karni hai.

R: ab kya sikhana hai? Joked rey.

Ri: I'm serious rey!

R: Teek hai bolo said rey with a smile.

Ri: Woh...woh... hesitated riya

R: Woh ke age bhi bolo!

Ri: I want to marry you rey, she said in one go.

Rey looked at her shokingly and riya continued.

Ri: Tumhe apne life mein kisiki pyar aur dosti ki bahut zarurat hai. Hum sab ko dikhta hai ki tum kitne akele ho. Apne puri life spoil kar rahe ho. Mujhe tumhari fikar hai isiliye keh rahi hu. Hum donon shaadi karlete hai. Ek baar socho. She pleaded.

R: You are great, riya. Mere life mein taani ki aane se pehle tum ne mujhe propose kiya tha. Abhi bhi wahi feel karte ho? Lekin mein taani ko kabhi nahi bhul paunga. Sab tak zinda hu usse pyar karna nahi chod sakta. Aur mein usse bhulna bhi nahi chahta. Uski who baatein, uska bachpana, uska innocence, uski eyes, uski hasi, uska chehra, uski yaadein... kabhi nahi bhulna chahta. Kyunki uski yaadein hi hai jin ke sahare mein ji raha hu. Ye kafi hai mujhe is zindagi mein. Said emotionally.

R: Toh please, tum kisi aur se shaadi kar lo.

Ri: Rey, pagal mat bano! Uski shaadi ho chuki hai. She has moved on aur tum usiki...She was cut short by rey saying

R: Riya, mujhe late ho raha hai aur shayed tumhe bhi! Said angrily

Ri: teek hai, mein jarahi hu. She said and walked two steps and then turn back and said to rey

Ri: You are a true lover, rey. And taani is very unlucky but I'm not. I know you will come to me one day rey. I'll wait for that day. I'll wait for you rey. She said and went away leaving rey with his thoughts.

Toh kya rey riya se shaadi karlega?😲 Agar usne riya se shaadi kar bhi li toh kya woh taani ko bhul jayega?😕 Kya hoga agar ye old lovers phir se aamne-saamne aye toh?😉 Jaanne ke liye...Stay tuned!😊

Phew! It's over. I know its long. But I don't know where to stop it. Let me tell you guys, I have only written one os on mohan-nanhi of nbt. And haven't written anything prior to it. And this is my first attempt to write a story. So, please be honest and feel free to tell me how is it. Criticism is welcomed. And please do tell me how do you want this story as a ff with many parts and details or as a ss with less details and scenes. Choice is yours.😛

Thanks for bearing me.😊

nice prologue waiting for updates continue soon

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nice prologue waiting for updates continue soon

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interesting prologue

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Awesome prologue

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Awesome prologue

Wht happened btw Taarey??

Eager to read further

Continue soon

Hi all😊. As the response is very low, I'm planning to write the story as ss. If I get more response I may change it to ff. I'm posting the cs now. And yes, the major part of the story will be in past. So, I'm posting the cs as per the past. Here u go

Character Sketch

Kunwar Amarjeet singh as Reyaansh Singhania: 19 yrs old. His father is a very rich business man and wants him to join him after finishing his studies. But his passion is dance. A very talented dancer. Wants to make his career in dance. Studying in 2^nd year in st.xavier's college of mumbai. Part of the college dance team D3. Heart throb of every girl in college. But he is waiting for his princess.

Vrinda Dawda as Taani shekhawat: 18 yrs old. Stays in jodhpur with her mom and her chacha's family. Her father left her and her mom when she born. Her Chachaji supports them financially and emotionally. So taani respects him a lot and never says no to him or go against him. Wants to study well and get a good high paid job to support herself and her mother. She wants to be independent. That's why she took scholarship test to join the st.xavier's college in Mumbai without telling to anyone. A example for beauty lies in simplicity.

Rithwik Dhanjani as Arjun Shekhawat: 19 yrs old. Cousin bro of taani. Has lots of attitude. He is also a great dancer and is the captain of college's another dance team dazzlers. Doesn't like to lose. That's why he hates d3 team especially rey as d3 is a step ahead of dazzlers. He and rey are arch enemies. Their rivalry is the never ending topic in college. But he is not a bad guy. It's just that he and rey can't get along well and their huge ego makes the things much worse. Treats taani as his real sister. He doesn't express much. That's why many people misunderstand him often to be a "sadu"

Nia Sharma as Riya Anand: 19 yrs old. Sweet and bubbly girl. She is a straight forward and free spirited girl. Has a bad temper. And sometimes behaves egoistic. Hates losing. Has a solid crush on rey from the first day of college. Waiting for the right time to propose him. Part of d3 team.

Shantanu Maheshwari as Swayam Malhotra(yup! He is not taani's bro) : 19 yrs old. He is also from jodhpur infact he is taani's senior in her school. They are friends. Fallen in love with shoron. Waiting to confess his feelings to her. Part of D3.

Vrushika Mehta as Shoron Rai Prakash: 19 yrs old. Perfect combo of beauty with brains and attitude. Captain of d3. Nick name is Siren given by swayam secretly. She is The Boss. Everyone in college scares from her anger. But she is a total sweet heart for her friends.

So, here is the cs of main characters. The gang is also there but in different teams. Here is the list.

D3 :- Sharon, rey, swayam, riya, aashi, Vicky, nil, simmi.

Dazzlers:- Arjun, neha, amar, rinni, etc..

The story is all about taarey and will not have any other couples. Will just have few swaron scenes. I hope u guys don't mind.😊

As I said. The story is about taarey. How they met, how they fall in love with each other, Their lovely moments, what they meant to each other, what impact or changes they bought in each others life. How and why they broke up? Will they ever meet again? And most importantly, will they unite? Will they stop loving each other or get their happy ending?😉

To know the answers stay tuned to the SS: True Love never dies...But will the lovers unite?

Ok now I will end my banter. Thanks for bearing me.😊

Note: Guys, I only got 4 comments😔. So, I think my story is not good enough😕. Now as I posted the cs too read it and give ur opinion. If u guys don't like it and I get the low response again I'll discontinue the story. Please be honest and tell me should I continue or not. I promise, I won't feel bad but please tell me.😊

nice character sketch arjun was taani brother its new and i like his character to and do continue this story iam waiting to know what happenbetween taarey iam waiting for updates