THE LOCKET REPOSTED - COMPLETED - Page 58

Chap 8
Adi is South Indian and pinki is Punjabi girl
Sujal apni behan ke liye bahut concern hai
Avi aapne beautifuly unki story ko likha hai
Adi ko bhi nahi Pata uss night maan ke saath kya hua
Song selection awesome

Chap 9
Loved Sasha dev convo
Loved their friendship
I-star is jealous with pari

Thanks to the readers for their support and comments.😃

Chapter 10...

Aisha aunty 😆

Maan just need a little push to express himself ..
And aisha is too brilliant to make him accept his feelings.
Socho some one getting answers from Msk... who doesn't even talk
She made it all easy for him to confess
She is superb...

She cleared both their problems... And now maan has a friend to talk his heart...
I loved Aisha's words... Be with her. love her always.. and she will be used to you...
Her words are very simple but holds a beautiful and true meaning..

Very nice writing...

Very excited to read further..
Maaneet journey in the past and present... 😊

Thank you for these amazing 10 parts.. And for taking your time to pm us and post this ff one more time..

I truly loved all the update... And your writing is excellent..
Not too complicated... And I love some magic words u use while explaining the feelings... And their monologue's

wowww

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going to read nxt updates :* :* :*

offf to chapter 11


zooommm *going thru plane * :P

Chap 10
Awesome
I loved aisa jis tarah wo apna ko uske pyar ka ehsaas karwati hai
Finely maan ko bhi aisa ke rup me ek friend mil gaya jisse wo apni baate sare kar sakta hai
I loved maan's imagining for geet
I loved the song

part 7

Msk watching Srk movies to know why all the girls are his fans... he he ... the rain sequence with maan and geet is simply superb and their eyelock so sweet..

part 8

i wonder what happen to geet that she didnt came for the farewell... maan became withdrawn after this incident... so sad...

i loved sujal's character... he seems to be a nice person who thought so much for his sister's good future...

i wish adi to get permission soon from his parents... so that sujal will have some good opinion about him...