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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ArshaParsh
Omg i never eer read this FF before but now that I read it its awesome man...!!!
Cant get over it too good update quickly

Prishi

Thank you so much

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.
The update is So sooo splendid tamanna

Luv it to the core...

Phew.. They both were safe...!!!
Waiting for the next part eagerly...

Post it sooon <3

Love
Chandu

Thank you so much
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85

Luvly as ever..👏👏
Finally..
they r safe..
but y is Sanyu so rude??
hope things get well soon..
do update next ASAP

Thank you so much
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Part-20

Sanyu took proper care of randhir & ehsas in hospital ...

after two days,sanyu completed all the formalities ...

She picked ehsas in her lap and made him sit in car .. vardhan was waiting for them outside hospital gate .. sanyu told him to come as she can't handel two injured people ... she went near randhir to take him with her .. he put his hand on her shoulder and she took him to car ... vardhan talked to them a bit ...

They reached home ... Sanyu took both of
them to room ... Sanyu took their proper
care ... She used make food for him and feed him ... sometimes he uses to act like a child but she forecfully makes him eat food ... he was liking the care and attention ... he was loving his family ... but some where in his heart he knew that sanyu will not forgive her .. but may be .. there was a hope too in her heart .. but he
can't say anything about future .. when he did too wrong with sanyu ...

AFTER 20 DAYS

S- randhir tumne kya socha h???

R- zruri h kya sanyu???

S- i think tum bhul rhe ho k tumne promise kia tha .. still u are saying this

R- yaad h mujhe par mujhe laga k shayad tumne mujhe maaf kardia h

S- tumhare lagne se kya hota h randhir .. tumhein kya laga k ye 1 month wo 3 saal pehle wale 1 month ko bhool jayungi .. no
ways ...

R- okk mein chala jayunga par ek bar
sab purane frnds se milna chahta hoon aur chahta hoon k tum bhi sabse milo sab bht miss karte h tumhein

S- okk fine mein bhi milna chahti hoon sabse ..

R- mein sabko inform kar deta hoon bas uske baad mein chala jayunga ..

S- okk .. par jaldi plz ..

R- okk

He informedbeveryone about get to gether ...

After two days there was get together in FITE bcz he wanted to remember every thing ... he was hoping that may be by doing so,she will forgive him ...

She was getting ready to go to FITE ... to meet her friends and her teachers ... She wore a cream net saree with marroon border .. she wore long earing and did a little makeup... she was looking very preety ...

Randhir entered inside room,he.was wearing his blue jeans and white t-shirt
with standing coller .. he was looking too
handsome ... sanyu's mouth was in perfect 'O' shape ... randhir closed her mouth with his index finger

R- don't be shocked sanyu i know m
looking hot ... and winked at her

S- ughhh .. hot .. my foot .. 1 no k play boy lag rahe ho ..

R- huhh ... why do u care ..

S- i don't care ... she said with full attitude on her face...

R- okk chalo ab chalna nhi h kya ???

S- aa rhi hoon

Meanwhile ehsas entered ..

E- mumma papa ap kahan ja rhe ho

R- mein aur mumma .. oops apki mumma hamare collage ja rahe h sabse milne

E- ohh to kab aaoge

R- apki mumma to sham tak aa jayenge aur mein thode din k liye out of town ja raha hoon business ki vajah se ..

E- to kab aoge

R- kaafi din lag jayenge aur aap apna
aur apni mumma ka khayal rakhna ... he said kissing his cheek

E- par papa i will miss u .. he too kissed his cheeks

R- mein bhi apko bht miss krunga beta .. par pehle bhi to ap mere bina khayal rakhte the na aur ab bhi rakh lena .. aur
apki mumma aur vardhan sir to h hi apke
sath ... his eyes became moist

E- oh fo papa ap to aise kar rhe ho jaise hmesha k liye ja rhe ho .. take care aur jaldi wapis ana ..

R- haan beta .. ap bhi apna khayal rakhna ..

Sanyu was looking at them,her eyes were too moist .. she cleared her throught to get attention

S- chalna nhi h kya?

R- haan haan,chalte h ... aur ehsas ko school chod ate h school ..

S- haan ...

They dropped ehsas to school and randhir started the car ..

They didnot talked much as randhir was
feeling pain in his heart ... sanyu was also
feeling the same ...

R(to himself)- sanyu kya tum mujhe maaf nhi kar sakti .. u knew very well k i love u .. par i will not force myself on u now ..

S(to herself)- now i can't forgive u ... tumne jo kuch bhi kia mere sath wo mein nhi bhool sakti ... They reached FITE ..

SanDhir went to their collage to meet their old friends ... They entered in collage,as there were vactions in FITE so there were sudents of their batch only ,dean and other proffessors ...

When SanDhir entered their classroom, randhir shouted- ssuuurrrppprrriiizzzeee ...

All her friends were confused looking at sanyu ... everyone's mouths were covered by their plams due to amazment ... the reason was no body knew that sanyu is alive ...

Everyone hugged her and started asking questions like where she was,how she is and all ...

S- guys guys stop it ... shant hojao .. mein theek hoon ... kuch nhi hua tha mujhe ... it was all a drama .. now no more questions please .. she made a puppy face ..

K- okk baba,nhi puchenge que ...

P- to ye thi teri emergency be ... humein bataya bhi nhi k sanyu ko la raha h ... parth said looking at randhir ...

R- haan wo sab ko surprise dena chahta tha ... sanyu tunmhare liye bhi ek surprise h ..

S- kyaa

R- abhi nhi baad mein batayunga ... thodi der baad ..

S- par h kya surprise ye to btao

R- are abhi nhi surprise h ..

S- okk ..

R- lets go guys,pura collage dekhte h,purani yaadein taazi karte h...

P- haan lets go

Sanyu's smile faded .. she didn't wanted to remind all those memories ..

S(to herself)- mein kaise wo sab batein yaad krun .. par un baton ne to hmesha
khushi di hai mujhe to un sab ache movements ko randhir ki vjh se bura nhi bol sakti

R- khan kho gayi sanyu ..

S- khin nhi chalo

He holded her hand ... sanyu looked at rd ... rd looked at her with pleeding eyes .. she noded ... they started walking in coridor ..

O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena...
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan...

All their previous memories were coming in front of their eyes .. these all memories were like salt on injury rather red chilly .. she was feeling her heart getting heavy .. but she controled her emotions .. the same with him ..bhe was making up his mind that he have to live alone after it..

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka
Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

They were passing through lab and they
remembered their first kiss ... sanyu looked at rd ... he was already looking at her ... after that they were passing through library which reming them of their hug ... 1st kiss and 1st hug made
them smile ..

Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera
Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra
Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se Kho jaayein..
kho na jaayein humse Kaafila..
waqt ka.. rok le..
Ab se juda na ho Teri galliyan... galliyan teri galliyan..
Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan..

They were walking in collage campus and
remembring all their lovely movements spent with each other ...

K- sanyu m so happy k u are alive ... par 3 yrs khan thi... tune to promise kia tha k u will be in touch to phir .. she said faking
anger

S- awww dear meri majburi thi .. she said
making a face ..

K- its okk sanyu but at last u are happy m happy for u ... finally u guys are happily married ...

She smiled sadly ...

S- chal na kausto kuch khate h canteen mein ..hamari permanent seat par baith kar ..

K- haan haan

They ran fastly and took their seats ... all their friends parth,jiggy,yoyo and all other sat with them ..

They were gossiping... suddenly a voice
shocked them ...

Hope you liked it ...
Press like & comment ...
Nd guys,this story is gonna end soon,only 2 parts left 😊

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago

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Chandy

@-PurplePeach-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Res

Unres

Hihii.. Moi first

Awesome update

Luved it so much <3

Ehsas n Randhir's convo was touching

Awesomely penned

U nailed it

Thx for Pm

Will be missing this ff :'(

Love

Chandu

Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Awesome update👏

Update soon

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Superb updte
Loved it to the core

sanyu taking care of ehsaas n rd both
She's still determined in her decision

Rd still have some hopes
Bt sanyu straightly said she's still determine on her decision

Rd wants to meet their frnds
Sabyu ready

Ehsaas n rd talk was so emtnl

Sandhir both luvs each other bt sanyu is not ready to forgive him

Everybody shocked to see sanyu alive

Yeh b end hone wala h
Going to miss it

Update soon
Wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling