Abhigya SS: Proposal & Its Effect Part 6 pg 17 Updated 10/06/15 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you, kubare!!! Love what you did with that scene ... especially Abhi's reaction 😆 !!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely krishna!

Waiting to see how this goes!!! Abhi's reaction is LOL priceless!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow i love this story ❤️
lol pragya's plan was amazing
Omg Abhi's reaction though
i want to find out soon now plzzz
update soon.
do pm me 🤗 🤗



Edited by PerfectHarmony - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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krishuuu where is the rest - have read this eight times love the start but more more more please 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Trish darling so happy for you girl *hugs*...a Very Happy Birthday darling...God Bless.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diahh

Krish Krish KRISHUUU!!!!!

First of all I must say how happy I am to read stories from you!!!!

Seriously!!! So happy!!!thank you!!!🤗

And coming to the story!! I love this Pragya!!! 😛 So straight forward! Intelligent!! Smart!! Everything that we want her to be!!

Abhi!! Uff!! DB!! 😆 Waiting to see how this plan goes!!

Krish love it!! Waiting for more!! SOONN!!! I am waiting (im)patiently!! 😉



No Diah darling *grizzly bear hugs* Thank you for reading and commenting dear...and I am glad you like this Pragya..because this was the Pragya e had in the show before who cleverly got Akash to confess his paternity truth to all...this character trait of hers was killed ...which would have made for great or better drama...but alas...

Am posting now...hope you lie what you read...😆because its going to be a roller coaster ride...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, kubare!!! Love what you did with that scene ... especially Abhi's reaction 😆 !!!!


Thank you so much for reading dear and liking it ...and we do love to see Abhi sweat dont we because he was no made to do it till now...😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: deefan

Lovely krishna!

Waiting to see how this goes!!! Abhi's reaction is LOL priceless!



Thank you so much Dee daling...you will soon find out...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you one all all for reading, commenting and hitting the like button...


So here is Part 3 in parts itself as its too big...😆


Hope you all like it...and enjoy.😃

Once again comments Good & Bad all welcomed...😃





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Mayhem & Circus
Part A.




Abhi just couldn't believe his luck...



Abhi: App saab yahain? / You all here??



Dadi: Kiyu nahin aah saktey hum yahain?? / Why can't we all come here??



A: Nahin...Mera matlab hain nahin app saab asak te hai.../ NO...no I mean all fo you can come..




Abhi because he was so distracted, he did not notice his dadi's annoyed tone of voice or the look of disappointment on her face...




He couldn't see Fugy anywhere too..who told him she would handle all...was this her handling...sending all inside...
And where was Purab when you needed him...




God Tanu ...and her God Damn parents...Aliyah was good for nothing either...couldn't handle her friend.



Dadi was very very angry and most of all very very disappointed in her grandson...she knew how Aliyah was but...Abhi was different...where did she go wrong in her nuturing and upbringing...how couldn't she see he had changed so much...her heart still told her Pragya was the right girl for him...his true mate...but it was for him to realize or for them to make him realize this fact...



Thus she along with Indu and the conscent of Pragya's family have come up with a plan of their own...



Pragya's plan was good but every good plan needed back up...and they would provide that...all happy shappy inside with her thoughts.



Suddenly Tanu and Aliyah entered with some couple...



Tanu calling out..."Abhi Abhi look who has come..."



Abhi didn't know which rock to hide under as everyone on her shout looked towards the door



On entering Tanu and Aliyah were left shell shocked... they did not expect to see the whole family gathered in the hall...their smiles faltered and looked at each other in panic..



Tanu's parents complete unaware of the drama their entry and arrival had caused marched forward...happy to see all gathered..



Tanu's Mom (TM): Tanu, TANU!! Wont you introduce us to all? and especially your Abhi you keep telling us all about.



Abhi was looking here and there...not knowing where to go...as everyone in the hall he knew heard it as Tanu's mom was quiet loud saying that...He peeked a look at ddi...who was smiling...and



Dadi: Yeah log kaun hai Abhi?? /Who are these people Abhi...? Saab say milauo nah/ Introduce them to all of us .



Indu dassi (ID): Hain Hain...saab say jaan pechan karo nah.../Yes introduce them to all of us so that they get t know us.



Rockstar dadi (RSD): Hain bhia...Abhi yeah koon log hain...bahar tu nahi dekha in ko? /Yes Abhi who are they ..didn't see them outside.!!



Abhi looked at Tanu and Aliyah with anger and desperation...but there was nothing to be done then to carry on...hoping Tanu's parents don't blurt out why they were here in the first place.



Tanu: Mom, dad yeah hai Abhi. Abhi mere mom dad/ Mom dad this is Abhi and Abhi my mom and dad.



Abhi: Nice meeting you..please come in sit...



The only place empty was the sofa facing dadi ...dassi and RSD...which was just unoccupied by Purvi , Janky aunty who shifted to the other sofa at the back.



Aliyah: Dadi yeah Tanu kay parents hai...aaj hi Delhi say aye hai?/ Dadi they are Tanu's parents who just today have come from Delhi. Making the introduction..



Just then Pragya entered the house with Aakash, Purab & Bulbul.



Bulbul was literally being held back from bodily harming Abhi and Tanu by Purab who had a strong grip on her upper hand


Purab: Behave...


Bulbul giving him killer looks..and if looks could have killed Abhi Tanu would already be dead meat.



Purab whispering from the side of his mouth, " You know the plan...now smile and act normal..for Pragya di"



Thats all that was needed to make Bulbul behave...she took a deep breath and pasted an artificial smile on her face and entered...


Abhi say Purab and breathed a sigh of relief...Purab would help him out...get him out of this mess...


He walked towards Purab an pulled him aside not noticing the killer looks Bulbul passed him...


Abhi: Tum kahan they? /Where were you? what kept you so long...



Purab: Bhai I was taking my pheras with Bulbul around the Lohri fire...kiyu kiya howa? /Bhia(bro) I was busy taking the rounds around the Lohri fire why what happened..


Abhi opened his mouth to tell hi what..when he heard dadi ask...



Dadi: App log yahian kaise...Birthday tou thore in phele hi tha aur app aye nahi.../ How are you here...Birthday as a few days before and you didn't come..



Then before he could intervene...or stop Tanu's mom from opening her mouth she said



TM: Hum yahan Tanu ki rishtey ki baat kaar ne aye hai / we have come here to talk about Tanus marriage proposal.

Dadi: Acha koon hai larkha? Who is the boy


TM: Ji woh...being stopped mid sentence by Tanu...


Tanu: Mom we can talk about that later nah...



ID: Tanu beta...jab do barey log batein kartein hain un ka beech main bolte nahi/ Tanu when two elders are talking talking in between them is ill mannered.



Dadi: Ji app keh rahi thi...



In the mean while Pragya is given killer looks by Abhi... who just shrugs saying not my fault..with her eyes...and moves herself to dadis side...


Akshay can't stop smirking thinking bhai deserves all this...for what he did with Pragya Bhabi...


Robin was busy planning something too..to add to the plan..as he too like dadi believed in back up...



Abhi has his head in his hand and tells Purab all...waiting for lighting to strike him as he truly was a dead man...and the worst thing was his dadi would know all...and he would be whole and soul responsible for her health condition this time no blaming Fuggy...or maybe he could...this was all her fault ...if she went into a coma again...nahi...thinking that he moved forward...trying to handle this...but it was no use as the bullet had already left the gun



TM & TD: Ji hum Tanu ki rishtey ki baat karne ayae hai app kay pote Abhi kay saath../ We have come to talk about Tanu's proposal of marriage with your grandson Abhi



Dadi acting all shocked...: Kiya??/What.



Sarwami Dassi: App log mazak tu nahi ker rahe/ Are you people joking



Sarla and RSD: Yeah nahin ho sak ta!! This can't be!!



Tanu parents all shocked: Why not?



Dadi: He's already married!!



Tanus Parents: Yes we know...but do you know that he was forced into this marriage and he still loves our daughter...our daughter and Aliyah your grand daughter told us all...


Pragya could stop herself from hearing that Abhi was forced into the marriage and sarcastically said : Oh Really??!! shooting annoyed looks at Abhi for his balant lie...


Indu dassi: Acha you know all...that good...



Abhi hearing Indu dassi's comment was shocked and looked at her ...with surprise and shock..and disbelief and on hearing what else she had to say after that, left him speechless...confused and bothered...and his mind was screaming only one word over and over again "Nahin" / No



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The next part will e uploaded soon too hopefully...Hope you all liked and enjoyed reading...Hope it didn't bore you all..

Once again thanks for reading...

Edited by kubare - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm updates
just read all so far
loved it
continue soon

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