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Hey you guys i am a silent reader at this forum i started watching this show for a while cuz i would get home early from work... i do miss rashi aka rucha she was just amazing and watching the show with her was bearable... as a ongoing tv watcher once you start a show you just cant stop till the show ends... it gets you hooked although there are some and no matter what you can never get rid off like Iss Pyar Ko Kya Naam Doon the barun and sanaya one off course... that is the closet show to my heart..
Anyway enough off me i am purely writing this ff story or os whatever only for my sanity and peace the ongoing track has no romance or love and this show some how lacks that and thats why i want to write my own version today :) i hope you guys like it So here goes
Starting from where the epi ended 2day 19/12015
The hustle bustle and commotion drew her attention and she came pitter patter down the stairs wondering what all the commotion was about. Paridhi was dressed in her night jammies and looked like a mess, with her tresses that fell loose on her shoulders. Hetal modi saw her daughter in law come down and a small little smile appeared on her face she had that blushing look. Kokila was quick to sense looking at her jhetani
Koki: Motabhabi are kahanaji's clothes already for tonight
Hetal: Yes Kokila everything is in control there is nothing to worry about.
Kokila: Saaru
Paridhi came running to them in excitement as she asked in her ever so chirpy voice.
Paridhi: Aunty what is today is there a festival, whats happening can i also be part off it. is it janamashtrami
Kokila: Paridhi (she said in her ever so strict voice) Calm down there is nothing today its just a normal day .Janamashtrami happened ages ago.
The two sister in laws walked towards the kitchen as they some what giggled with Baa trailing behind them. Paridhi wondered what was so funny. She saw Gopi setting up the mandir when she ran to her and asked her.
Paridhi: Gopi bhen tell me whats going on i am so confused
Gopi: (couldnt help but chuckle) you will soon find out.
Paridhi: but i have got to know now (she complained)
Gopi: go and get changed, trust Kahanaji and just relaxed (saying that she left from there leaving Paridhi all the more confused)
from a far distance two beady eyes looked through the grilled wall, Radha witnessed what happened in front off her and wondered what the hell were these Modi's upto and what would happen now. making a conscious decision she decided to stay on and see what was happening.
*****
Gopi walked into her room with the biggest smile on her face. she couldnt help but blush this day was going to be perfect for her little sister Paridhi after Raashi's death she was unable to function things seemed a mess for the whole family and she knew that. but Paridhi had brought back the madness and made every one laugh again she couldnt help but giggle to herself about what tonight was going to be like for her devar Jigar and her sister Pari.
Her husband on the other hand sat across from her and looked up at her with his stern eyes. He was not a man to really laugh or show emotion... his expressions often made Gopi curious to know what he was thinking... this is probably one of the reasons she fell so deeply in love with him. Ahem Modi was a layered man yes he was a hard nut but from inside he was a softy and she knew that. She loved decoding what he thought. But this time it was the other way around this time her husband wondered what was it that was making his wife giggle and blush so much.
Ahem: Gopi why are you laughing so much
Gopi: (while folding clothes she spoke) nothing Ahemji i am just excited for tonight thats all
Ahem: hmm (he said looking back at his screen)
Gopi: I know Ahemji you wont show it but your also very happy today arent you.
Ahem: (looked up at his wife smiling which is probably something rare to see between the two of them) yes i am (he straightened his face) but i am also a bit upset
Gopi: Why (she asked confused)
Ahem: i behaved wrongly with Paridhi i know that. I was wrong its just that i didnt like the way Mom was so bothered by her and one thing led to another
Gopi: (sitting on the arm rest of his chair, she held his face) its okay you didnt intend on doing it for a wrong reason. Paridhi is a smart girl and i am sure she has already forgiven you. Today is all about happiness Ahemji. (she explained to her husband gingerly)
Ahem: (nodding his head he said) yes it is a happy day
Gopi: cheer up. (she got up from the chair and headed to the cupboard to remove to beautiful saris) Ahemji tell me which one do you think i should wear tonight
Ahem: (surprised with his wife's move got up and said) you know i have always loved you in red. but today i would say wear yellow.
Gopi: and why is that
Ahem: the only one who should wear red today is your sister paridhi after all
Gopi: oh yes (she said smiling)
Ahem: Gopi i dont think i ever told you this but the day we got married you looked so beautiful i still remember you dressed up as a bride
Gopi instantly blushed and hugged Ahem and he took her in his arms. she sunk into him like melted chocolate would. he would rarely show her his love but when he did he did it to full power.
***
Meanwhile Radha hid in the bushes as she saw the very shaitaan and nathkath Tolu Molu walk up and down with their walkie talkies. They were searching for their cousins Meera and Vidhya.Radha being the cunning fox came down to her tricks and tins when she threw a stone at one off the boys.
Molu: Buddy why did you throw the stone at me (he told his brother)
Tolu: i didnt throw anything at you
Molu: dont lie i know you did
Tolu: your dreaming buddy
and in all this both the boys began fighting and Radha caught hold off the walkie talkies
Radha: i can hear what is happening inside with the help off this. i shoudl place one inside. but i can only go when these two idiots move from here.
Suddenly in all the chaos Paridhi came out. she looked at her two sons with glee and asked in excitement
Pari: why are you fighting
Tolu: he is accusing me off throwing a stone
Molu: Pari didi he did throw a stone
Pari: you boys are so funny. come inside i have a surprise for you
the boys gingerly followed her in the house and radha left out a breath
Radha: Now all i have to do is get inside and place this in the hall
***
Jigar paced his room up and down he was looking extremely handsome in his white colored sweater and a pair off simple blue jeans. his hair was ruffled just like Pari liked it to be and he had that unshaven look that she often use to compliment on him. he was nervous as hell.
Jigar: Oh god how will i propose, god in Raashi's time things were so much more easier. she and i just fell so in love and we just knew it with out saying but Pari. that girl is a peice off work.
He walked over to Raashi's photo frame and looked at her with heartfelt emotions.
Jigar: you know that no one can replace you in my life or my heart and that i have always loved you but these feelings for Pari make me love her too. Raashi i hope you are not upset with me and that you understand that.
he looked back at the frame for a second there was no answer but in the heart off his heart he knew his wife Raashi had some how sent Pari to him, to love him take care off him and to take care off their children. In some ways Pari did resemble Raashi. Raashi was crazy and was always up to something Pari is just the same. the only difference between them is that Pari is more modern and Raashi was traditional.. but still Raashi was Raashi and he knew she was irreplaceable. Still his heart clung to her and called out for her. his breath would stop for a glimpse off her. Pari was different the feeling with her was more on the bases off hatred to friendship and that was converting to love. He could sense that Raashi's sole had something to do with Pari coming into his life and so he looked upon her photograph and asked her.
Jigar: you only tell me what should i do. How should I propose to her and tell her that I love her
He wasnt expecting anything but suddenly from out off the blue petals fell from the top off the frame on to the desk. The diya that was lit in front off her photo was shinning and flaming strong
He smiled at the frame and said with bit off relief in his voice
Raashi: Flowers off course, thank you so much
He smiled at the frame kissing the top off Raashi's forehead he ran out off his room the flame burnt stronger than ever, as a sign off blessing
***
Kokila and Hetal were in the Kitchen making food for the function they had just finished ordering the mithai. Hetal looked over at Kokila and said
Hetal: i am so glad that you have accepted Pari. she really is a wonderful girl
Kokila: i know you are happy. Motta bhabhi i am sorry for what happened. It was my fault
Hetal: (smiled at her sister in law) there is no need to worry whatever happened happened with the grace off Kahanaji. there is a lesson in everything.
Koki: yes i agree with you. Gopi stuck to her ground and fought for what is right even though she went against me and did so. I am immensly proud off my Gopi vahu.
Hetal: yes even i am, in all honesty she has always fought against the evils and has always protected our family. God has been kind to have sent her to us.
Kokila: Motta bhabhi i would like to do something for Gopi and Paridhi today. I was thinking off going to the market and buying two statues off kahana ji and gifting it to them on a day like this where our family is now back at peace and we are entering a new phase it is good luck to have god by their side
Hetal: what a splendid idea i and baa will come along with you
Kokila: Saaru
***
Radha quietly snuck into the hall placing the walky talky in the corner. she was about to sneak out off there when she saw a smiling Jigar walk down towards the main hall
Radha: what is wrong with Jigarji, this house is turning mad.
she stood there to see what was going to happen. Pari was playing blind mans bluff with the children on the other side. as the ever so naughty tolu and molu kept teasing her calling out her name
Tollu: catch me if you can pari didi
Molu: we are too smart for you
Pari: you two i am going to get you wait and watch.
She said in an excited manner. She walked a few paces further when suddenly she collided with a tall figure. she touched the persons chest and an instant smile on her face she said in her ever so excited voice
Pari: Jigs
Jigar looked at her with amusement and a glint off love he didnt say a word the boys were about to say something when he stopped them. Ahem and gopi were passing by from the hall as well. Jigar grabbed a hold off Ahem, putting his finger on his lips indicating to Ahem not to make a noise he made his older brother stand in place off him Jigar hid behind the adjacent pillar watching the fun.
Pari opened the blind fold her from a second her smile changed to a confused look
Paridhi: Ahem jiju you i swear it felt like Jigs
Ahem: (looked on towards his brother who winked at him he played along) Paridhi we always knew you were mad but today It is confirmed that you are
Gopi chuckled along with the boys and then came forward.
Gopi: where is your concentration, are you missing devarji so much today that your imagining him
Pari: Gopi bhen i swear it felt like him. I know his every touch.
Gopi: your imagining him.
Ahem: (tried not to burst out laughing he said in his ever so strict voice) Gopi can you get my tea upstairs please
Gopi: sure Ahemji
Ahem left from there. Gopi looked at her sister in law and said
Gopi: Pari i think you need to rest you should go up. come on
Pari: o h i am tired off sitting there Gopi bhen i am want to stay here
Tolu: yeah badi maa let pari di stay here with us
Gopi: Tolu pari didi has had a long day she needs rest
sending pari back up to her room she packed the boys to do their homework a compromise on studies is not a good thing.
Radha couldnt believe her eyes what was going on all this made no sense to her. Jigar fooling Pari and Ahem and gopi playing along and to top it all those bratish kids what the hell was going on in this house. had they all lost it or was it only her who was imagining this. She had to do something and find out what it is that these silly modi's were planning for tonight,
***
She sat cross legged on her bed. her nails in her mouth she had the most curious look on her face. Pari was sure that there was something up and the people in the house were planning something but the question is what.
Pari: think pari think what is it that they are all upto even jigs is acting funny i swear i could feel him
She was in great thought when suddenly her phone rang.
Pari: Papa
Father (sorry i dont know his name so i am just going to call him father)
Father: Beta how are you feeling.
Pari: I am fine papa.
Father: thats good you must rest my child tonight is a big night for you.
pari: what is tonight (she said curiously)
Father: beta you will find out you must rest
Pari keeping the phone down she said in the utmost confusion.
Now i have to find out what it is.
***
Gopi helped her devar set up the small veranda by the corner off the house. It was decorated with sweet red roses the same ones that Pari loved.
Gopi: Devarji i am so happy for you
Jigar: thank bhabhi (he said with a smile)
Gopi: (she caressed his face with warmth) i am happy that your happy and that your moving forward in your life. After rashi bhen i know how hard it must be
Jigar: Raashi was the love off my life bhabhi nothing can replace her but somewhere i feel that Pari is sent to me buy her itself
Gopi: really (she said with a smile)
Jigar: you know i was so confused about what i should do and i asked Raashi what i should do. she dropped flowers for me... this was all her idea
Gopi: oh devar ji this is such great news. Raashi bhen has always wanted you happiness.
Jigar (smiled) i feel her around me you know
Gopi: i know devar ji... (she smiled and then said) you look very handsome today.
Jigar blushed
Gopi: i am happy for you i cant wait to finally see you happily married again.
Jigar: thank you bhabhi... (he paused and then he said) can you do me another favor
Gopi: tell me
Jigar: i will propose to pari soon can you make sure that every one has left for the temple i will come with pari. i want to formally ask her hand in marriage its always been her dream to get married like that..
Gopi: sure i will do so
****
Pari marched down the stairs in full determination. her head wriggling in utter confusion she didnt care hook or crook. she wanted to find out what was going on. but as she landed the stairs she saw the hall was empty.
Pari: where is every one Koki aunty, mother in law gopi bhen
she yelled out but no answer. Radha stood behind the pillar once again oh how she wanted to wrap her hand around Pari's neck and kill her. her every gut instinct was telling her to go and do so and she was about to come out of the pillar into the light when she heard footsteps approaching
Pari: who is it ??
there was no answer suddenly from behind she felt two strong arms lift her in air. her feet hanging she looked to her left to see those sparkling dazzling eyes. it was her Jigar
Pari: (smiled) Jigs
Jigar smirked at her and took her for a second
Radhas eyes opened the widest they could. Jiagr carrying paridhi in his arms.
Jigar led her to the small veranda outside she cutely curled her arms around his neck her expressions were of joy and curiosity
Pari: Jigs are you okay
Jigar placed her down onto the floor silence still between them... Pari asked
Pari: (touched his forehead) do you have fever
Jigar held her hand in his tightly griping it
Radhas eyes wider than ever
Jigar: do i have to have fever to love you (he said in a smart voice)
Pari stood shock still for a second and Jigar flashed another one off his classic smiles at her. she swear she was dreaming
Pari: Am i dreaming (she said with the most cutest expressions on her face)
Radha: am i dreaming (she said agitated)
Jiagr pinched her arm and chuckled while Pari squeaked in the sweet pain
Jigar: apparently not
Pari: (wrapping her arms around his neck she said) its not my birthday and nor is it any other special day. so why are you so nice. (she raised her eye brows)
Jigar: (wrapped his arms around her waist pulling her close) I dont think i need a special occasion to love you.
Pari blushed as hell as the man in love kept confusing her and playin with every heart string. Radha was in utter shock she did not expect this to happen. Jigar paridhi coming together she could see defeat before her eyes.
Jigar bent down on one knee his hair ruffling in the wind Pari watched him with the most amused eyes ever was this really happening her Jigs was down on one knee was he proposing.
Pari: what are you doing
Jigar took her hand in his and smiled his heart beating fast he said in a cute and meaningful tone,
Jigar: Pari i know we have had a lot off ups and a lot off down. my heart wouldnt let me forget Raashi you know there is no one that can take her place in my life. but even though in the mid of all the drama my heart couldnt keep you out. It has made space for you and not just a small space but a very big one. i never thought i could fall in love again leave alone marriage but the way you stuck on to me like a rock always being there for me and my family i just couldnt help it i started to fall in love with you and that love has just gone stronger today. Pari what i am trying to say is that i dont think i can live my life without you. I want you I want you too be my wife
Paridhi smiled tears off joy rolled down her face. every drop holding happiness he was asking her for marriage this was the best moment off her life. Jigar looked up at her with intense eyes and said
Jigar: will you do the honor of accepting me as your husband, will you marry me...
Parid made him get up from the floor and stand up. she hugged him tightly his arms automatically pulled around her holding her close she cried and cried for a good two to three mins and then she looked up at him with her dough like innocent eyes and said.
Pari: your the only man i want to marry... Yes i will marry you
She hugged him once again and he smiled back at her. He said in his most cutest voice ever
Jigar: I love you
Pari: I love you too
He wiped her tears and then removed the small velvet box from his pocket and opened it. There was a silver color diamond ring in the case. he placed it on her ring finger and kissed her hand. Pari couldnt believe what was happening and she hugged him tightly.
The two lovers were lost in each others arms when suddenly they heard clapping noises in the background they broke apart but Jigars hand was still placed on her tummy. Gopi and Ahem came out from behind both with smiles
Gopi: How does it feel to finally have your dream complete. Your jigar has finally asked your hand in marriage...
Pari: Gopi bhen i cant believe it... thank you so much (she hugged her tightly)
Gopi: Like i said i want you too be happy. both off you (she smiled at them)
Pari: (making a straight face said) i wish koki aunty also agreed. Gopi bhen i want to stay with my husband. (she clung to jigs)
Ahem: Pari this was all moms idea. she has organised a small ceremony in the temple today is your wedding
Pari: sach... i cant believe it. OMG Jigs we are getting married today
She hugged him tightly and he hugged her back...
Gopi: kahana ji will always keep you happy...
the two smiled on Radha had lost everything but her gut refused to give up she could not loose to that little twit. she was trying to hard to be a modi shw would not loose it. she had to do something and she had to do it fast. She was about to leave from there when she was suddenly stopped but a statement made by Jigar who was telling the other three
Jigar: This time there will be no Radha to interrupt our wedding... we will get married
pari: thank go that little witch has gone from our life. Jigs i dont want her anywhere near us
Gopi: dont worry kahana ji is there to take care off everything and the police have been alerted as well its best for her to leave the city and go.
Ahem: i have tightened the security at the mandir as well
Gopi: pari i think you should go up and change and even you devarji
they nodded and then left.
****
He held her hand from behind Gopi looked at her husband he ws been awfully romantic today and she was happy. she turned around and looked at him
Gopi: Ahemji (she said blushing)
Ahem: i may not be a romantic like the two off them but that does not mean i dont love you (he said pulling her closer)
Gopi: (she blushed) Ahemji let me go i have work to do
Ahem: he picked up the small flower from the table and sweetly placed it on the side off her hair. tucking the rose bud he said
Ahem: i am very lucky to have you Gopi
Gopi: (caressed his face) and i m lucky to have you.
They shared a warm moment and he surprisingly kissed her cheek she blushed to galore they were in the zone when suddenly they heard a pari screaming
Pari: Gopi bhen come up i need help with this blouse
Ahem left her and then said
Ahem: i love you
She smiled back at him and said
Gopi: I love you too
She ran up the stairs to help pari leaving a smiling Ahem behind...
****
The couple walked up the steps off the mandir pari ws dressed in a beautiful red lengha with gold work while Jigar looked smart in a creme shervani. they looked picture perfect the family came to greet them in. Pari hugged her mother in law and went up to Koki
Pari: thank you so much Aunty thank you alot
Koki: i only did what was right. now go and sit in the mandap its time
She saw her father come to her with utmost happiness he blessed the couple and then finally they sat for the holy vows
Radha walked up the steps with her full proof plan when suddenly two strong arms stopped her. she was going to mix a poison in the mithai. It was the police
The wedding got over and they were taking the blessing off the family when the police inspector came with Radha in cuffs
Police: Madam you were right she fell for the trap
Koki: inspector take this woman away from here
Radha: trap what trap
every one looked shocked and Koki explained
Koki: I had anticipated that you would seek for revenge and i set a trap in your mind told the men to tell you not to come back. but i clearly knew you would and i was sure that you would come back. tolu molu had spotted you in the garden so you could steal the walkie talkies i knew you were behind the pillar in the house all along
Hetal: but if you knew that then why didnt you alert us kokila
Koki: because i wanted this radha to see it with her own eyes that she has lost that she is our lives and that we have nothing to do with her or her child
Radha: how can you throw me i am carrying jigarji's child
Koki: that child is no longer jigars. We will not take care off the child at any cost we want you and your child away from us.
Radha: fine i will go but make no mistake one day my child will come to seek revenge from you modis this is not the end
The police took her away and that was the end off Radha... Jigar and Paridhi began their new lives with their children. Ahem and Gopi revived their love and the Modi family was once again a happy family
The end
Guys i know this is super long and i really dont know if you will like it but i have written in for my own sanity... i really like pari and jigar i miss Rashi but i am use to pari now well kind off rashi will always be rashi :p and i really wanted Ahem and Gopi to have some love action this ff is only best on love thats it more than family drama its just love :)
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