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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note: Just a very short piece of write up that I felt to write after watching recent episode.

Warning: Emotional. Don't read if you don't want to..


Other Room



She woke up in the middle of the night, in her bed, which was empty without him.So, he is sleeping in that other room again.He was thinking that he already did enough, hurting her and his presence might hurt her more.That's the reason, why he was sleeping in that other room.How wrong he is , thinking that his presence would hurt her more when all she needed at that moment is only his presence.He might be the cause of her hurt still she needs only him to heal her.


She sat on the bed, folding her knees,hugging her self.She is feeling so vulnerable.She is sick of doing the things that every one in the home expected her to do.She is sick of faking a broad smile on her face before every other person in the home.The home, which she is feeling like not her home now.She desperately wants some one's presence,precisely her husband,the only man she is loving on earth.But, he is sleeping in the other room.She is feeling her heart is heavy with the grief that she no more can endure.


She went to that other room,saw him sleeping on one side.She slipped next to him before picking up his callous arm and placing it over her waist.She snuggled into him,close to him,to feel his presence.She rested her face on his chest ,listening his heart beat.She felt prickling of tears in her eyes.She tried to hold them back like she is doing all the day,but this time, a lone tear escaped from her eye wetting his shirt.All of sudden she felt his hand caressing her hair.


She looked up,only to meet his piercing gaze."You awake?" she asked surprised.She tried to wipe her tears quickly with her hand,but he immediately held her wrist stopping her. He doesn't want to stop her from crying because he know , that she has to let those tears go which can only make her heart feel light.She is biting her lower lip trying to not to cry.She hided her face in his chest, not wanting him to see her like that.He pulled her more into him.He murmured a sorry against her hair.A soft sob escaped from her throat listening his sorry which made her remember everything again, that she is trying to forget.Tears rolling down from her eyes uncontrollably.She is sniffing and sobbing against his heart.He was rubbing her back gently trying to comfort her.He felt his own eyes wet seeing her like that and the fact that he is the reason for all this.

Later a while, he felt her body calm against him.He was patting her back lightly,trying to make her sleep.They drifted into sleep ,slowly, in each other arms, in that other room of their home, not thinking about the next day which might can give some more reasons for hurt and tears...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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fablous...
very well expresed their plight...

loved hw ishu took first step nd hw raman said sorry to her...

prfct ishra...


thanks fr dis yar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...extraordinary..
Ishita pain has shown just perfectly awesome...
the need of him in such situation just too good...
i liked ishita going and sleeping with him, to reduce her pain,
but loved the ramn was able to understand her...

short but very beautifully written...
well done spana...
Edited by Akshatha19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...but in serial it wud have been raman sleeping in other room with shagun and adi
...adi ke liye
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Loved it so much.
Very well written.. Specially the last part. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww such an emotional and beautiful update! Loved it!Raman consoling Ishita was the best!

Do write more!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arooshee

Nice...but in serial it wud have been raman sleeping in other room with shagun and adi

...adi ke liye



I'm not watching the show regularly.. but what I saw in the recent episode is Raman came to home and seeing Ishita sleeping in their bed room not wanting disturb/ hurt her he went to other room n slept.Shagun n Adi are still at Mihir's place.. They came to Bhalla's house next day..

But I don't wonder If CV's will show this kind of Adi keliye scene too..

Thank you so much for the comment :)


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Originally posted by: shavi2311

fablous...

very well expresed their plight...

loved hw ishu took first step nd hw raman said sorry to her...

prfct ishra...


thanks fr dis yar...



Thanks dear.. I'm glad you liked this😃
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Thank you :)

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