Her revenge....sandhir short one

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ummm...am little disappointed with the current track, i so wana randhir to come on the right track, i want him to pay back in future for his painful acts
This o s is a way of taking my frustration out

HER REVENGE

A night of cold winters bought back her memories, he closed his eyes and a sad smile welcomed his face, sitting in the corner of a coffee shop has now became his habit, his eyes were fixed on the steamy coffee but his mind was lost some where in the past, remembering the days of happiness, days when friends were around, days of hatred and revenge ...days spent with HER...few drop of saline trickled down his handsome face, he shut his eyes tightly, erasing her memories from his mind, refusing his love for her!!! Refusing that he still wants her...he clenched his fists trying hard to stop his emotions overpowering him today ...but alas!!! He let himself sink In to the whirlpool of memories , memories haunting him for years...
That day,a blast in her fathers factory just not made him successful in his revenge...but it took his life too, it took away all he has,his only relation, love, want every thing...it took Sanyukta along!!!
He got up from his place, taking along his bag , rushing out of the shop...thus, fixing a meeting with his nightmares
She never tried to avenge her revenge for the things he did to her, but she gave him the biggest punishment, YES living without Sanyukta is the most painful punishment for randhir...and he has to live his life ,drowned in her memories, till his soul detech from his body!!
WHAT A REVENGE !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome yaar.
Short but really beautiful...
So emotional.
So heart touching.
Just loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Awesome yaar.
Short but really beautiful...
So emotional.
So heart touching.
Just loved it.


Hey mahiii
Thanx dear for liking it,
Am hell pissed off that I can not hate randhir no matter wat he do
But I surely want him to realize his mistake

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG this is short but very beautifully penned down
Me too frustratred with current track .
I want to see RD redemption so badly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajpreeto

OMG this is short but very beautifully penned down
Me too frustratred with current track .
I want to see RD redemption so badly.


Ahhh rajpreeto...love u for this one !!!
See am so angry on him, and yet cant hate him...
Even sanyu is behaving so cool with him
He is a grown up for GOd sakes!!!

P.s...but I still love him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zahranaseem



Ahhh rajpreeto...love u for this one !!!
See am so angry on him, and yet cant hate him...
Even sanyu is behaving so cool with him
He is a grown up for GOd sakes!!!

P.s...but I still love him



Sanyu needs to royally ignore and RD needs to realize that revenge is not the answer.
I would have loved if he used his genius brain and defeated Renuka as a competitor than this stupid revenge shit

What is the point of having a genius brain if not used smartly ?? Rehaan is smartly playing the game.
Sanyukta needs to stop interfering and focus on herself 😆

I hate how they do not potray the emotions . One episode they show the breakup as heart wrenching and next epi they show it as a joke 😡

Sorry poora bhadaas nikal diya 😆

You write well..in your last OS I requested you to pen down an OS on current track . So this made my day ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajpreeto



Sanyu needs to royally ignore and RD needs to realize that revenge is not the answer.
I would have loved if he used his genius brain and defeated Renuka as a competitor than this stupid revenge shit

What is the point of having a genius brain if not used smartly ?? Rehaan is smartly playing the game.
Sanyukta needs to stop interfering and focus on herself 😆

I hate how they do not potray the emotions . One episode they show the breakup as heart wrenching and next epi they show it as a joke 😡

Sorry poora bhadaas nikal diya 😆

You write well..in your last OS I requested you to pen down an OS on current track . So this made my day ⭐️


Yes...randhir badly needs ignorance...coz he doesn't knw the worth of having ituntill he loses her
And the ideas he is putting in to avenge his revenge are totally pathetic...
So he is seriously needs to bring some innovations...my be his urge to take revenge has made him frustrated rather cunning..

And yes the cvs r showing too much at the same time...they need to put some break and let us breath ...one after the other is increasing the frustration level day by day...

And yes I did it too...I so wish that I may have a punching bag just like randhir to let go all the fustration

Thanx for the compliment...am blushing!!! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme yr

It was really beautiful

Loved it

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Awsme yr

It was really beautiful

Loved it

Luv u
Keep smiling


Awww love u too
Thanx a ton darling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome yr..
Short yet so emotional :'(
Neatly penned :)))
Luv it <3

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