love me till the end -- sandhir ff chap 3 page 6

Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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FOR PMS ADD ME.

character sketch

randhir - rude, angry but not always., judgemental, handsome.., businessman

sanyukta - dramebaaz 😆😆😆 , funny ., funloving, cute , beautiful , smart , intelligent. , daring girl, modern., fashion designer.

renuka shekhawat - rd's mom.

harsh shekhawat - rd's dad , in jail.

prologue..

in london

sanyukta to her chachu - chachu .. mein india jaa rhi hoon. mujhe kuchh kaam hai..

chachu - but..

sanyu - chachu i have to go.

chachu - okay

india

rd to sanyu - who re u??

after 2 min.

rd - who re uuu??? he yelled

rd - tum sun sakti ho??? beharii

sanyu - deaf.i'm deaf😭

rd - oh.. i'm sorry .. plz. maaf kardo.. mujhe.

sanyu - 😊

rd - btw i am rd..

renuka to sanyu - oh.. sanyu betaa.. how re u??..

sanyu - aunty i am fine!..

renuka - chacha - chachi kaise hain?

sanyu - wo bhi thik hain..

renuka - randhir se mili tum??

sanyu - kon randhir?..

renuka - randhir.. idhar aao beta..

sanyu - hi ..! rd.. i'm sanyukta .

randhir - hum abhi toh mile the.. and tumne kaha tha ki tum behari ho.. but tum😡😡 u liar..

sanyu - what??? mein deaf? yeh aapse kisne kaha??.. and hum kab mile?? are u mad?? ..

rd - mom.. yeh..

renuka - rd. shut up. and sanyu ko guest room leke jao.. and mein abhi aayi..

sanyu to rd - kyun mr. kya hua?? mood thik nahi lag raha? angry man banke kyun chal rahe ho?

after some time..

sanyu - meine tumse kuchh puchha.. are u deaf?😆

rd - u just shut up. ( he yelled)

renuka - rd chillana band karo.. warna dinner bhul jao..

rd - but mom

renuka - shhh...

rd - 😡

do comment :)

😃

Edited by priya_31 - 10 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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index

chap 1 - page 2 😆😆😆

chap 2 - page 4 😃😃😃

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: holysoul
NICE DEAR ...PLSSS CONTINUE

thank you :) . 😊😊

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Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It was somewhat confusing but I must say
It made me laugh.
Refreshing start..
Glad you Send me Pm
Surely wanna know what comes next after this
Update when the time permits
#Zumi

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It was amzng
Luved it

Updte soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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Sarim.fatmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey its a beautiful start love d prolonge pls pm me next time do update asap

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mika17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#7

Interesting concept

Would love to read more

Thnku for the pm

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hii!! .. :)

chapter -1.

in london

sanyukta to her chachu - what??... unki death

nahi hui??.. aapne mujhse jhooth bola...??..

chachu... now wait and watch.. i will find them

ASAP!.

chachu - so.. tum india jaa rahi ho?? akele??..

sanyukta - yeah!.

chachu - okay mein renuka ko call karta hoon...

sanyukta - but chachu.. mein hotel

chachi - no! hotel??

sanyukta - okayy.

india

rd to sanyu - who re u??

after 2 min.

rd - who re uuu??? he yelled

rd - tum sun sakti ho??? beharii

sanyu - deaf.i'm deaf😭

rd - oh.. i'm sorry .. plz. maaf kardo.. mujhe.

sanyu - 😊

rd - btw i am rd..

renuka to sanyu - oh.. sanyu betaa.. how re u??..

sanyu - aunty i am fine!..

renuka - chacha - chachi kaise hain?

sanyu - wo bhi thik hain..

renuka - randhir se mili tum??

sanyu - kon randhir?..

renuka - randhir.. idhar aao beta..

sanyu - hi ..! rd.. i'm sanyukta .

randhir - hum abhi toh mile the.. and

tumne kaha tha ki tum behari ho.. but tum😡😡 u

liar..

sanyu - what??? mein deaf? yeh aapse kisne

kaha??.. and hum kab mile?? are u mad?? ..

rd - mom.. yeh..

renuka - rd. shut up. and sanyu ko guest room

leke jao.. and mein abhi aayi..

sanyu to rd - kyun mr. kya hua?? mood thik

nahi lag raha? angry man banke kyun chal rahe

ho?

after some time..

sanyu - meine tumse kuchh puchha.. are u

deaf?😆

rd - u just shut up. ( he yelled)

renuka - rd chillana band karo.. warna dinner

bhul jao..

rd - but mom

renuka - shhh...

rd - 😡

rd to sanyu - yeh raha tumhara room okay?

and yaa stay away from me..

sanyu - i'll try :)

rd - what? .

sanyu - try try but don't cry . :) :D

rd -btw mein yahan kyun khada hoon?...

sanyu - mujhe kaise pata?..

rd - keep your mouth shut

sanyu - sry i can't.

rd - why?

sanyu - i dunno :P

rd - YOU RE MAD!

renuka - randhirr... beta abhi ke abhi living

room me aao. !

rd - i m coming. 😡😡

renu to rd - rd plz control your anger.

rd - mein control karun??.. aap uske liye apne

son ko daant rhi hain? mom.. mein aapka beta

hoon wo nahi .

renu - so u re jealous.

sanyu - every thing is fair in luv and war . 😃😃

rd - mom.. mein office jaa rha hoon ..

sanyu - ghar mein shanti rhegi,

rd - mera dimag shant rhega agar mein iss

ghar se chala gya,

sanyu - gudbye mr.whatever..!😃😃😃

rd - 😡 mom isse bol dena ki mere room mein

jaaye.

sanyu - itna pyaar apne room se ...

rd - haan hai pyaar... tumhe kya? .. tum kaho

shaadi bhi karlunga..

renuka smiled..

rd - bye mom 😡

renu - bye randhir,

jab randhir office chala gya,

renu to sanyu - kal randhir ka b'day hai ...

party ka kaam tumhara

sanyu - thnxx :D

precap - rd shouts at sanyu .

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vrinda mishra

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Intrstin

Update soon n do pm me

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awsme update yr
Loved it

Sanyu irritating rd
Rd hell angry with her
Upar se renuka also taking her side

Rd b'day zarur koi dhamaka kreg
Cnt wait
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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