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Posted: 10 years ago
part 53


Asim leaves the hospital taking with him a calm face without emotions of his wife and returns home with his family he does not want to go to his flat he does not want to feel empty that he will find without his wife he can't sleep in their bed without her next to him he goes in the house of his parents joined his room and stays alone he wants to see and talk to anyone his brothers tried to comfort him but he request them to leave him alone for now but despite this refusal his sister enters with a tray of food and tries give him to eat saying

-: Asim eat a little bit you have eat nothing in the day you can't sleep with an empty stomach

-: No thank you (he responds too sad still in tears) I'm not hungry

she holds his hand sits with him on the bed take some food saying

-: please Asim eat a little for me you'll make yourself sick like that

-: How you want me to eat while my wife is in the hospital I don't know if she will live or not

-: You can't change anything about what was actually prays for that she wakes up

-: She wanted to protect me (said Asim collapsed) it's me who will have to be in that hospital bed I want to be with her right now I want to sleep next to her where she is we wake up together or we leave together it is hard without her

with a lot of tears wet his cheeks that her sister wipes delicately with her hand she takes him in her arms very affected by the grief of her younger brother she find nothing to say only to keep him longer like this to think that her brother began his life with great sadness she is afraid that it will not recover. after this great hugged she puts her hand on his cheek to wipe once again his tears she said

-: She will return Asim Devika is strong and will fight to stay with you she loves you and I don't think she wants to leave and leaving you sad in this world alone

he looks at her saying nothing hope what says his sister is the reality he hopes that in the morning the hospital will call to tell him that his wife was saved but he knows that is a desire to what he must keep and believe

Since she returned from the hospital his mother isolates also in her room very sad especially taking of a great remorse since the tragedy she said nothing she did not even reacted she thinks of the wrong that she has caused to her son by denying him Devika this girl who just saved the life of this son and avoids her a great sadness her husband remarked he told

-: What is there ? why you're sad

-: Nothing she (said) I think at what it's happened

-: This is not what you wanted? ( he said with harsh words) you wanted to estrange your son from this girl your wish will be realize

-: Why are you telling me that I'm as bad as this

-: You did not let your son live his life you did in front of his choice now he is sad what you will do?

-: I am an unfit mother I deserve death I'm a bad mother I caused the sadness of my son

she is not well very sad she feels the pain her son is very badly may be he can not recover this little boy who she saw growing up next to her she will may be lose and she feels remorse blame herself to not be a good mother who seeks happiness of her son she regret for having denied him this happiness her husband included she really regret he approach her puts his hand on her shoulder and said

-: You regret?

-; yes enormously (she said crying) my son has chosen his happiness and I wanted to remove him I regret all the time when I told him I did not want this girl in my house and she is this girl who saved his life. without her it's he who will be in her place and I will be a sad woman crying for fear of losing her son

-: If you really have a regrets goes to tell him goes ask him for forgiveness fully you would do this for him

agree with the proposal of her husband she goes to her son's room waits for her daughter out and she enters she takes a bit of food between her fingers hope to nourish her son and she said

-: Why you let yourself die of hunger my son you don't know that you have a mother who needs you

hearing the voice of his mother he turns his head still sad finds in front of him his mother so sad he don't know why she is like that she was always against him does not confident to this face said nothing and returns face up the window

-:excuse me Asim I was wrong (she said sobbing)

he hear the cry of his mother does not support it turns around he finds tears in her eyes he wipes it and said

-: Don't cry Mom I can't see your tears

-: let me cry Asim because I'm a heartless mother sorry my son to let you endure this it's my fault if we're here today instead of wishing you happiness with the woman you love I turned my back from you and worse than that I banned you to live this happiness I am a bad mother I don't deserve a boy like you

-: No you're not a bad mother you thought to do well (he puts his head on her shoulder and continuous) don't reproach yourself what has happened now I know you're in my side and that's enough me I have your shoulder to cry on and that's a lot for me

-: since you have forgiven me eat a bit now for me please

-: I can't mom as Devika is lying on the hospital bed as she does not wake up I can't swallow anything how I can eat so she does not eat

-; pray for her my son and let the day repair things she will come back I am sure she loves you and she will not leave you alone

affected by the reaction of his mother Asim agrees to let to feed with her hands and eats with tears in his eyes looking at his mother seeking consolation which helps him to believe that Devika will not die and will soon return

-: Mom !!! (he said with a miserable voice) you think she'll live you think she will return home soon

-: Yes (she answers continuing to feed him) she will come back among us and we will give her all the love she deserves

a very beautiful image of a mother and her son Asim finds his tranquility near her his mother who takes care of him and does not intend to leave him alone until the return his wife

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow really emotional update
I hope she wakes up for Asim he needs her .
Will she wake up?
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Wow great story please update soon
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part 54

Asim has found the peace and solace in the arms of his mother he hope found joy and his wife returned to him lying in bed he did not succeed sleeping, all night he thinks of Devika and dream up that she wake and run for get into his arms he grabs her and hugged her very strong and expresses his happiness to have find her and he will keep her forever and never let her go, but it's still a dream which is sometimes replaced by a painful vision is to announce her Decius panic and don't want to believe and his sleep fly he is very afraid he rises from his bed, he wants to pray for his wife to get better he down the stairs saw a light from afar approaches the light, lighted by candles that his mother turned on for pray too he approaches gets next to her and pray with her eyes closed facing her idol she prays to her gods saying

-: Please helps Devika to return for those who love her and gives again smile to my son I implore you (she cries saying) I can never forgive myself if something happens to Devika this girl has brought happiness to my son don't take it, she loved him with all her heart and sacrificed her life for him show her the way to back among us and I promise that I will give her all the love of a mother to her daughter I'll never hurt her and I will defend her

after the end of her prayer she looks at her son and said

-: Why you don't sleep you need to rest to see your wife tomorrow

-: I can't get to sleep I came to pray for Devika but you said it all mom thank you, your prayer will be heard

-: I will not stop my prayers until she wakes up I want to wash away all the sins that I do against her I will sacrifice all my nights if necessary until the return of your wife

Asim hugged his mother very happy of this transformation and said with a smile

-: I go to my room get some rest the day will soon to get up, I have to go to the hospital to be with her

after some small hours the sun rises Asim get prepare and without taking his breakfast he goes to the hospital to be next to his wife she still not wake he goes to see her sits beside her caressing her face and said

-: good morning Devika I have a surprise for you, you must wake up to share it with me all our worries are over my mother accepted you she regretted and pray for you for you back among us she wants to live with you all the rest of her life in happiness don't disappoints her wake up for it is realized

Asim speaks long time to his wife although the visits are banned but the doctor allows him, think it will help Devika to return and Asim spent three days to go every morning to visit his wife and tell her how he spent his days and that she lack to create with him memories three days he spends between home and the hospital he returned home in the evenings don't sleep and expect the call to announce that she has awaken and stays next to her to look at her and hope she opens her eyes and found him next to her, the fourth day Asim has collapsed his body has not resisted that ensured and he fell asleep on his bed with his clothes and goes into a deep sleep until that he wakes up in the night by the ringing of the phone frightened by this appeal fears that for announce her Decius but hope at the same time that for announce the contrary the whole family is awaken by this call his father takes the phone and answers

-: Thank you (he said to the person who called)

he looks at Asim with tears in his eyes approached him put his hand on his shoulder Asim very scared tears of his father worries him too much and think he's going to tell him a bad news he does not want to hear moves away in crying and his father told him for stop him

-: Your wife claims you Asim

it's was tears of joy that Asim's father has let it sink he cried because the suffering of his son is finished he cried because he know he will see the smile of his son he has lost since the tragedy and he cried because the love story of his son continuous Asim does not believe what he just heard turns to his father very happy his tears turn into smiles and said with difficulty to get the words out

-: She is awake !! You are sure !! she came back (he hugged his father and said) thank you

-: Yes my son (his father told him) the person who called apologized for calling so late but she said Devika repeated without stop the name Asim and they want you to go

-: Yes ( said Asim) I go immediately (and runs to the hospital arrived out there the doctor said

-: Excuse us for disturbing you but she is stirred and we had afraid for her she has not opened her eyes but she does not stop repeat your name we think your presence will help her to stabilize and open her eyes

Asim enters the room of his wife goes next to her holds her hand he hears her call him he kisses her hand caress her cheek and said

-: I'm here Devika with you open your eyes to see me I'm by your side

Devika hardly opens her eyes and finds her husband beside her give him a weak smile and said one word

-: Asim !! (And closes her eyes)

Asim panic he calls her for get back he believes she fallen into a coma but the doctor approached him and said

-: Don't worry sir she has nothing she's just asleep she is still low she needs rest the worst is removed

-; Are you sure doctor? she is not yet fallen into a coma?

-: No she's asleep go home lets her rest and come back tomorrow morning she will be awake

after seeing her husband Devika don't repeats his name she found tranquility and adopt a calm sleep

Asim accepts the doctor's proposal and returns home where everyone is there waiting for news he returned with a big smile on lips his face radiates his eyes shine with joy

-: this Smile brings good news (his mother told him) how is your wife

-: your prayers were heard mom Devika is fine there is no danger now

the things again become normal and Asim found his joy he can sleep quietly now he returns to his room lay down on his bed smiling face and the voice of his wife calling him today repeats in his ears he thinks of her he wants her to be next to him on the bed this time and thought that soon she'll take her place next to him he gets up looks out the window the stars shine looks far away and think of the beautiful moments that he'll relive he raises his eyes to heaven he said

-: Thank you for give me again my wife I promise never let her suffer

he returned to his bed he wants to close his eyes so that tomorrow comes very quickly for he goes to see his wife and stay with her until evening

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