*New* AsYa OS : Tu Hai Ke Nahi!!

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hello everyone!! i am here with an AsYa OS...hehehe so many writings together...happy shappy right now!!...this one is on my recent favorite, Tu Hai ke Nahi from Roy...its main thing is the song sequence here...this one is a sudden one so banner will be updated later...

Happy Reading!!

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NOTE : here they are family friends and so all of them are childhood friends!!

( banner credits: ImmortalLove)

Tapping her feet she stood there, waiting impatiently for him. She again and again glanced towards her mobile phone checking the time. She adjusted her saree again and again. She stood in front of a huge hall which was beautifully decorated now, with red, white and black balloons welcoming all the guests. She shook her head at him. She was fidgeting with the pallu of her saree. She was wearing a beautiful black saree with glittery borders. She had a silver and black broach attaching the pallu. She wore silver bracelet and long earrings. She wore a beautiful silver waist chain. She heard her mother calling her.

Zeenat : Zou! Bache chal na andar, We all are waiting!!

Zoya: Ammi you go na, I will join you people soon!

Dilshad : princess come na, year ka last day hai, come lets celebrate together, come come!!

Zoya : jeeju vo...

Zoya was about to continue when they all heard someone shouting "sorry !!" behind them. Zeenat, Dilshad, Rashid and Anwar looked back but Zoya didn't, she knew who it was and she was well, very very very angry at him right now.

Rashid : finally ap yaha hai Asad miya!! Sab apka kab se intezaar kar rahe the aur...wait wait Zoya isliye nahi andar ayi... god!! Asad...

Zoya : no dost!! Hum ese logo ka wait hi nahi karte, chaliye andar!

She locked her hands with Rashid's and started walking while everyone were trying to stifle their laughter and Asad had a puppy look on his face. Everyone somehow excused themselves and left behind Asad and Zoya. Zoya started walking without even glancing at Asad. Asad sighed and started following her. He stood in front but she managed to make her way. She started walking and he walked with her but backwards handing her roses one by one.

Asad : yaar Sunshine, mei kya karu I was stuck, see I am here now, maaf kardena please { handing her a rose} sorry yaar!! I now you were waiting but kya karu...{ giving one more rose}... Please yaar!!{one more} see iss saal ka akhri din hai,{two more roses}, lets be happy and enjoy rather than being angry upset{two again}.

She stopped and returned him all the roses and started walking again. He finally kneeled down in front of her and handed her all the roses. She sighed and shook her head. She accepted all of them and smiled.

Zoya : agar saal ka akhri di nahi hota na, to kabhi accept nahi karti!! Now come lets move inside sab wait karing!!

They walked inside talking about something or the other. They all stood together laughing and talking about something. Ayaan, Najma and Humera found a right moment and dragged Asad to corner.

Ayaan : Asad miya!! Kuch socha hai, ap kab princess ko apni feelings bataenge?

Asad : socha to hai, I hope she accepts!

Najma : don't worry bhai!! She will!!

They both went and stood with all of them. Zoya saw Asad nervous and smiling at the same time. She was confused so she elbowed Asad.

Zoya : kya hua? Itne nervous aur khush ek sath? Sab theek hai na?

Asad : no nothing! Everything is good! Vese Zoya I want to say something...

Zoya : ha ha bolo..

Asad : actually that is very special and important...ese nahi bolunga...

Zoya : I am getting curious now...bolo!!

Asad : ummm wait and watch sunshine, itni asani se nahi...

Zoya narrowed her eyes at him and shook her head at him. After a while Asad excused himself. All were enjoying whenZoya was walking towards Ayaan, Najma and Humera when the lights went off. She stood there when suddenly there was a spotlight on her. She scrunched her eyes and blinked twice and adjusted her surroundings. She was confused when she heard someone speak

" Zoya, I am not good at words so please understand what I want to convey, by the way I am doing it"

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She heard someone whistling behind her and also she heard someone playing the guitar. She turned around but there was dark everywhere, only light was the spotlight that was on her. She turned around trying to find the person.

Mujhse hi aaj mujhko mila de

Dekhun aadaton mein tu hai ke nahi

She saw a shadow appearing and another spotlight was there. She saw the person singing and playing the guitar but the face was still hidden in the dark. The person started walking towards her and her heartbeat accelerated like anything. As and as the person moved forward the lights went off, again only she was standing under the spotlight.

Har saans se pooch ke bata de

Inn ke fasalon mein tu hai ki nahi

She felt someone behind her and the spotlight went on the person. First the person pressed his head against her. She was confused. She then felt the person whispering turn and whispering lines in her ears. Her heart was beating with a speed of bullet train.

Guitar music...

She started to walk when she felt a tug at her wrist. She turned and first looked at her hand and then towards the holder. " Asad!?" she was shocked to see the person. She was confused seeing him kneeling on the floor stretching out his hands asking her for dance. She confused but placed her hands in his.

Mujhse hi aaj mujhko mila de

Dekhun aadaton mein tu hai ke nahi

He got up and walked closer to her. She was still confused but smiled. He held her hands and kissed her back of her hand. She was confused and shocked while he just smiled.

Har saans se pooch ke bata de

Inn ke fasalon mein tu hai ki nahi

He tucked her bangs behind her ears and and caressed her face with his thumb. She looked into her eyes intently and sang it meaning every single word of it.

Mein aas paas tere aur mere paas

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

He moved back and revolved around her slowly and then again stopped in front of her. He took her and the pulled her and she rolled and hit her back to his front. He hairs hit his face like a soft silky cloth. She looked at him while he looked back at her. He slowly rolled her out and then again pulled her by her hand and she collided with him. His hands wrapped her petite waist while her hands were placed on his shoulder and they looked each other in eyes lost...

Music...

They swayed slowly side to side in this manner and kept looking their eyes locked. He moved back and took her fingers and then kept spinning her and she revolved around him. Finally after a complete circle they again went to the same position. He again rolled her with her back pressed to his front. His hands were wrapped around her waist while she placed her hands on his and swayed to the music.

Daude te hai khawb jinpe rasata vo tu lage

Neend se jo aankh ka hai wasata vo tu lage

He parted away and came in front of her. He started moving backwards pointing towards her. He moved towards her and first moved his palm across his eyes and then moved his same palm on her face and covered her eyes and after a moment removed it while she opened her eyes and looked at him who was now pointing again towards her, this time near her.

Tu bdalata waqt koi khushnuma sa pal mera

Tu woh lamaha jo na thehare aane wala kal mera

He pulled her and taking one hand rolled her and the she bent back and he wrapped his hands around her waist. She had her one hand wounded around his neck while the other one was hug in air. He again took her up and lifted her up from knees while she had her hand on his shoulder and she looked down.

Mein aas paas tere aur mere paas

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

He took a round like this and then slowly put her down, while she slowly caressed his face. He took her hands and pushed her away and again pulled her and her one hand flew up to his shoulder and the other one clutched his other hand while his one hand was wrapped around her back and the other one clutched her hand. They swayed to the music. He again pushed her and pulled and she rolled in and they together came into the famous RK pose.

Music...

He brought her up and then parted. He went and took the guitar again and started playing it. He revolved around her playing it while she was overwhelmed with happiness. She smiled and laughed. She felt rose petals falling on her. Her hands moved up and she looked up enjoying the shower. She started twirling under the petals. Her palu flying as she twirled. She finally stopped and looked towards him. She smiled and looked towards him still laughing. She covered her mouth with her hands and then mouthed him thank you, while he bowed down like a gentleman. She laughed and didn't realize when a tear rolled down her cheeks out of joy

Inn labon pe jo hassi hai in ki tuhi hai wajah

Bin tere mein kuch nahi hoon mera hona bewajah

He walked towards her and wiped the tear and shook his head. He with his fingers gestured her to smile and she did so. She hugged him while he caressed her hairs. She broke apart when he was singing and she hit his arms and covered his mouth and shook her head in negative and again hugged him.

Dhup teri naa pade to dhundala sa mein lagu

Aanke saanse de mujhe tu baaki jinda mein rahoon

they both parted away. He knelled down and took her hand in his and made her sit on the knee that was up while she wrapped her hand around his neck and joined their foreheads. They got up and he wrapped her one hand around her waist and other clutched her hand while she placed her hands on his shoulder. He kept one leg forward while she kept her opposite leg back simultaneously. She again kept her one leg forward and he back and lifted her a little and twirled around and again kept her down.

Mein aas paas tere aur mere paas

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

He cupped her face looked into her eyes intently. She moved forward while his hands still held hers. so as she moved forward he pulled her back. Her back collided with his front and his hands were again wrapped around her waist and she placed hers on top of his. She leaned on his shoulder. She opened her eyes and slowly turned towards him and wrapped her one arm around his neck when he suddenly picked her up in bridal style. He walked a little and then twirled her around.

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

Tu hai ke nahi... tu hai ki nahi...

He kept twirling her under the rose petals falling. He kept her down while she still kept smiling and giggling. he clutched her hand and pulled near him. She smiled and moved ahead and he pulled her again from elbow and then encircled his arms around her waist while she bent backwards. She moved up and turned back and just took a step when he pulled her from her pallu. She turned back and placed her hands on his shoulders, while he lifted her up. After wards he kept her down and again twirled her taking her finger. Later they again posed in RK style. They again wrapped their arms around each other and danced. He parted away while she kept twirling.

She finally stopped and saw he knelled down and removed a ring while she looked at him.

Asad : its high time Zoya that I confess! Zoya its been long I am in love with you, but realization took place a few months back. I said I am really not good at words isliye, ye song se confession. All I want to say is I love you, I love you so much, I want to grow old with you, to relish and cherish all the moments with you. Zoya I cant speak much now, just answer that, Will you marry me?

Zoya looked him shocked. Now she understood what he meant when he said he wanted to say something very important and special. She started crying silently. She looked towards him awe-struck.

Asad : yaar Zou, teri ankho me kya koi pani ka tanki, jab dekh roti rehti hai! Jaldi ha bol, my knees are hurting!

Zoya chuckled and bent to his level and hit his arms while he winced.

Zoya : abhhi bhi koi shak hai bevcuf? Ofcourse I love you stupid!!

As she said she hugged him. Everyone around them cheered. Ayaan, Najma, Rashid, Zeenat, Anwar, Humera and Dilshad congratulated them with a lot of teasing. Finally the countdown began for the new year. The clock finally struck twelve and everyone cheered and hugged each other. Zoya and Asad joined their foreheads smiling.

Zoya : Happy New Year!!

Asad : Happy New Year Jaan!

They smiled and hugged each other, welcoming the new year with a new beginning , with a new chapter of their life...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mujhe bhi aisa propossal chaiye 🤔
Itna cute hai aisa propossal
Ranbir looks cho cute 😳
Jaquline is also cute in Chittiyan Kalaiyaan 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Aww... So u posted it in AsYa version!
So cute again
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awww so cute proposal...
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Awesome os riddhi..
Lovely..
Such a romantic proposal. ..
Asya are so cute...
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Keep writing
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Heyy...Riddhii... 😃
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And Loved the confession...👏 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum os riddi👏
loved it
Aww..asya r so cute
it was sooo cute nd romantic proposal..😳
Beautifully written⭐️
Wonderful..
thanks for pm
Love u🤗
Edited by fifi1297 - 10 years ago
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AsYa version 😳 Amazing loved it 👏
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Superb os
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awww sho cutee proposal😃
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