Maneet ff-U,Me,aur..?# 12 important note pg 131 jan 19 - Page 56

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PART 131


Vicky rushed her to hospital..bgs informed maan about geet being in hospital..

Maan immediately called DR. to know the problem.but she didn't take it .he wrapped up his work soon n started to hospital..dr.checked geet n got to know what happened.. ..soon geet gained conscious..dr.asked her to be tension free..n not to get hyper about any matters..she discharged her.but Vicky was reluctant..he want to confirm geet is f9 before going home..

Vicky:dr.nothing to worry na..

He was so tensed seeing geet faint

Dr:no..she is perfectly all right..just its tension that made her faint.someone be with her n don't make her feel alone..make her feel happy..thats it..

Vicky n his friends thanked dr. n came out..they helped geet settle in car..she looked pale n weak..her families memories flashed again in front of her..vicky thanked his friends n they all bid bye to them n went to their houses..

Maan came to know geet is discharged from hospital n the reason for her fainting from dr..he was hurt so much knowing the reason..he came directly to palace..n was restlessly waiting for her..

Car stopped in mansion.. vicky asked geet to come in..she refused saying she would like to go to palace.. when nakul came n said that maan has already arrived Vicky let her go..

Driver drove the car to palace..BGs tried to help her get out of car.. before that maan came n scooped her in arms n took her in..she snuggled in his arms n closed her eyes .the place which she feels more comfort.. maan didn't say anything. he walked upstairs. he placed her in bed softly. she called him when he didn't ask her any que..

Geet:prince..

Maan:take rest..kalakka will come now

He left her alone..its unlike him..he didn't pamper her today nor there was any naughty glimpse..she looked the way he went..

Man came down n saw Bahadur there..he gave the tablets n prescriptions dr gave..maan gave that to kala n asked her to be with geet..kala watched him move out ..

Kala:what happened to chotu..agar gudia teek nehi tho he will be with her only..then what happened today..

She entered maneets room n saw geets eyes fixed still in entrance..

Geet:di..prince kahaan hai..

Kala sighed

Kala: don't know gudia..he gave me ur tablets n went out..kya hua..

Geet:hmm..nothing..

Kala:dr.ne kya kaha..

Geet:to take rest..

Kala: then take rest.

Kala sat next to her n threaded geets hair..

Geet closed his eyes..but sleep was faraway from her..maans indifference couldn't let her sleep..

Kala:are u hungry..

Geet:hmm..

Kala:teek hai..i ll cook something for u..

Geet:di..i ll be in balcony till then..i m not feeling sleepy..

Kala:ok..come I ll help u..

Kala helped geet n made her sit in the balcony chair..the fresh air made her relax..

Kala:ye chotu ..what is he doing there

Geet:kahaan di..

She saw man in the backyard swing looking at the sky..

Kala: see there in swing...only when he misses his parents he will go n sit there..

Geet too remembered him saying that its his moms fav place where she use to make him play or sleep..

Maans indifferent behavior with her..she can relate now..he knew about what she said..

Geet:di..im going there to prince..

Kala:gudiya.. chotu will get angry..

Geet:wo mei deklungi..aappls mere saath aayiye..

Kala first made geet have some juice ..then took her to the garden..

Geet:di..now u can go..i ll manage from here..

Kala too thought when it comes between husband n wife she must not be there..

Kala:teek hai..i am going..dont stay here for long..

Geet:ok di..

After kala left..geet took slow steps..she was feeling so low n her body was also weak..

Maan sensed geet..but he was too lost looking at the stars..he didn't turn..

She sat next to maan ..n touched his shoulders..

Maan:u must not be here..i told u to take rest..

Geet hugged him from behind..

Geet:how can I take rest when u r not with me..u never let me alone when I m not well..im used to sleep in ur arms..now how can i...

She meant Her every words..but man was ony thinking about the word orphan..what she told to her friends..

Maan: what am I to u geet..nothing na..

He said in a broken voice..she has hurt him so much..

She instantly came infront of him n saw his eyes moist..

Geet:prince..

Yeh.aasoo

He blinked his eyes hiding the tears..

Maan:today u made me feel im orphan..

The words made her realize how much he is broken hearing it..

Geet:no prince..how can u say that..

Her own words pricked her now..his broken state is adding guilt in her.

Maan:when I married u na ..i thought I have got someone for me..for myself..who will love me for what I am..but u too proved me that I am left alone..koi nehi hoon mei tumhareliye..my mom left me alone..my dad..my dev bro..all left me ..still I m living...sab hai mere pass.dadi..vicky.dono hokar bhi nehi hai mereliye...dan daulat..nauker in sabse kya milega mujei...but still im left alone...dont know y..what else left for me to face in this world..it would have been better if they have taken me along with them..i would not have heard all these..

Geet shut his mouth with her palm..

Geet:I am sry prince..pls don't ever say like that..i am wrong..if u want slap me..but don't say those words..i ll die if something happens to u..

She hugged him tight..

Geet:im sry im sry..

She cried in his arms..

Man pulled her out from his embrace..his eyes red in anger

Man:what u said..

Geet:sachi tho kaha..without u I ll die prince..aap mereliye sap kuch ho..

He took her mouth in his shutting her words..he was aggressively kissing her..she didn't mind him hurting her..her lips were pierced n turning red..she gave up to him..he relaxed n broke the kiss..

Man:dare u ever say that word..dare u..

She smiled with tears in eyes..

He gently kissed her tears,,n hugged her..

Man:u r everything for me jaan..

Geet: same with me too..aapke bina mei kuch bhi nehi hoon ..

She smiled seeing his love again..

he cant stay away from his love..nor he could stand her tears nor he can stay away from her..

man:promise me..that u wont ever feel like that..

geet:prince ki promise..n sweety promise..

maan chuckled seeing her promise on her toy..

man:did u had ur dinner..

geet:who will feed me..

man:tum bhi na sona.u don't take care of urself..u must have medicines too..

he again lifted her n went inside his house..n placed her on sofa.

kala smiled:aagayi tum dono..

man:akka..dinner ready na..

kala:yes chotu..

man:u go we will have..

after kala left he carried geet again to kitchen..she enjoyed the ride in his arms..same time kissing his cheeks n giggling..she was back to herself n man was also back pampering his princess..

he fed her ..geet took the first piece of roti n had it..when he placed the next piece she pulled him near her n made him eat the pice from her mouth..both having a romantic dinner..finally they finished off n settled in bed..he gave the med..

man came to naughty mood

man:jaan..how do u want to sleep ..with or without clothes..

he winked..

geet too is equally naughty..but want to play safe..

geet: it s upto my prince wish..

man:prince wishes ..ok..princess is so tired today..so she must take rest..but must get changed as she is still in same dress that she wore for college..n prince want to do it..

geet:princess is all urs..not tired too now..

man took the night dress n changed her..he was getting hard but controlled for geet..

geet:who..aap..aaj..nehi..

she was so shy..

maan kissed her lips..

n took her in his embrace..

maan:aaj nehi..kal..we will have long night..today u need to sleep..

geet:I forgot to say u one thing..

maan:im here now say..

geet told about the fund programme..

maan:gud..so whats ur plan..

geet:I want ur help too..

maan:im always there for u jaan..now u sleep..we will talk about this morning..

geet slept in his arms..maan thought about her programme..if she has taken the responsibilities she must do a good job n raise the funds..n it will bring more tension..so he must do something for it..he slowly thought upon the programs n planned everything..

the next morning when geet woke up n did the routine works..both got ready..maan stopped geet n gave her the program list..she jumped in joy..

geet:yippe..my prince is the best..

maan:are u happy..

geet:yes..

maan:only thing u want to do is ..select the perfect persons for all..for group..u can take hiten n arjun in masters section..n in bachelors section I have noted the names..but the program arrangements will be done by ur group only..u will be the group head..n the other 12 will be sharing the responsibilities..like lights ..stage..decors..gifts..hospitality..

maan was going on n on..geet gapped at him like fool with her mouth wide opened..

maan:I don't mind tasting u jaan..

he said when he didn't get any replies from her..n her wide open mouth was inviting him..

geet blushed..

geet:that's why u r best..ek raath mein itna sab kaam plan ki aapne..

maan: or u will be tensed na..mujei meri jaan ki fikr hai..

geet :thank u so much..

maan:mujei thanks..

geet kissed his lips..

now ok na..

he pulled her by waist..

her hands wrapped around his nape..

maan:I love this thanks..iskeliye mei kuch bhi karneko thayaar hoon..

geet nuzzled her nose with his..

geet:I ll love too..but kya haina.the coll chair will miss u..n .in my prince company all files will be happily enjoying the rest of the day..n haan all the staffs ears will be safe too without hearing ur yelling sound..adi bhai..haha ha..he will not give his famous laugh if u r not there..

geet was pulling maans legs..

maan:enuf baby..im going to coll n office..ok..u don't want me to remind..

geet: I ll meet u in office..

maan:I ll be waiting for u..n haan no tension..

geet:ok.

both left to college..but geet forgot one thing 🤣



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eppo update paanuva enaku thukam varudhu
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updating dear..
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

updating dear..
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after long time i am first to comment
very nice part dear
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nice update di
geet faint n for once i thought she is pregnant
good to see geet expressing her love to maan

for note i can understand di how u r feeling
this is the major reason we loss so many writers from geet forum..
blog is much safe place to update
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