FIRST KISS STORY SEASON 2 part 8,part9,epilogue posted@66 on 19.1.15 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
Arey maine bhi agayi...😛
Rohan 😆 girly talks...MK is ismart...😉
Specs ...get her a stylish specs... if Maan gifts her lens ... it would be like even MK feels Geetika looks weird with specs on...
waiting to know more what happens in ball
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part Sweta dear,love your writing style.😃
Wow what a supporting gang of friends Geet have,loved their convo.😛
Maan and Geet,aww how lovely they are. Maan lost in Geet's beauty. Surely a ball dance should be there.
Thanks alot dear.😳
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful and sweet update

Rohan just wants to know Geetika's POV
Geet loos amazingly beautiful in her gown and Maan is mesmerized

looking forward to the ball geet and Maan's dance
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome... Liked it ...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

did i cmnt...having doubt



nope I was waiting for ur comment..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update maan was gone seeing geet luved maan reaction on seeing geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome👏👏



geet friends r helping her😊



mk is waiting for geetu😉



maan is mesmerize by geet beauty😉



geet kiss maan😳



update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
bechara rohan...😆 girls chat...😆
Kya progresss...kiss exchange,,,bhi hogaya...Jaldi next update...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

A big thanks to angel.princess aka ZEBA for helping me to select the song..!!!


The song is IN THE STILL OF NIGHT - THE FIVE SATINS

grat song..i reallly liked it !!

Thanks to all u guys for supporting me till now..!!

Part 7


They were interrupted by Rohan's cell..

Irritatingly he picked up.." yes divya(desire6) .." he uttered firmly..She was his secretary..

He made a sorry face...Maan blinked his eyes in assurance..

" sir...the article..Boss had called up urgent meeting at 3 pm today..U have to attend ..."

" uff...make some lame excuse..from my side divs please i m in middle of something VERY VERY IMPORTANT..."

"RAKHI DUTTA AND NALINI are approaching us for their next book publishing...they meeting is also pending.."

" Rakhi dutta and nalini..Okay..do one thing..give them next week's slot..this week wont be possible..Now bye..."

" sorry about the call..anyway..ya the ball.." Rohan exclaimed..In excitement..

" rakhi dutta and nalini..umm..."

" ya..the writers of..." maan interrupted

" Ya...the writers of CAMOUFLAGE and LOVE BLOSSOM right "

Rohan nodded..." how do u knw..U read those books..thats impressive.."

" NO NO.I have got those books for my daughters.."

" daughters...???"

" yes..two beautiful daughters cookie and cupcake..Both are teenagers"

" oh..nice name..u don't seem that old..." Rohan smiled..

Maan smiled...widely " elder one is cookie and cupcake..is younger..Both daughters are my life.."

Rohan smiled..sadly lowering his head..

" are u okay???" maan asked rohan..

" yaa.I..i..m okay.." rohan mumbled...and smiled faintly

" so..anyway where were we..the ball..umm.."

" ya..the BALL.."

*******

MK and geetika made a grand entry in the BALL typically like the other couples..All were astonish to see..Mk with geetika..

Geetika was nervous...like hell. She wore a floor length..white sparkling off shoulder dress..She even applied a little make up which included..gloss..a little mascara..kohl..which made her eyes more prominent..

She stiffen her hold on his arms..hidding her face...Mk was so proud today..!!He walked down the carpet with the most beautiful girl besides him.. His smile...only widen relishing this feeling..again and again..

" Mk these guys are still staring me.." Geetika murmured..

Mk smiled and patted her hold..softly..

" geet just calm down..mai hoo na.."

Geetika rolled her eyes ..

Mk's friends came over to him..Finding her with such a unusual date..

MK introduced geetika to edan and rest of his gang..

She smiled self-consciously..Edan was nice..he knew MK in and out..and thus by his facial expressions..he could discern that Geetika was really really exceptional for him..

A while later geetika grew comfortable with Mk s friends.. She began enjoying their talks...even conversing her thoughts..on the topic..

The BALL ROOM was decorated lavishly..with symbols of love everywhere..The lightings were dimmed...with soft music..creating a passionate, heart felt atmosphere

Mk's friends hopped on the dance floor after their seniors declare the floor open..

Geetika smiled...Staring the couples...Oh..Boy she never thought she will ever ever..enter this place!!

" may i have the pleasure of dance, My lady??" Mk spoke in..his superfluous velvety voice..stretching his hand before her..

" um..uhh.." Geetika chewed her lower lip..staring his extended palm..

" what..now??" He raised his brow

" i ..cant cant dance..I haven't done this before..m new to all of this..i..i.." she spoke non chantingly embarrassed..

Mk shook his head smiling cutely...and held both her hand...and gazed her lovingly..

" DOnt panic..geetu..m there with u ..just follow me..and still if u r okay with it..we'll come back..cmon lets enjoy.."

His words...stirred her heart..she nodded unknowingly yet scared deep within..

" give this to me.." he reached for her glasses confiscating them for a while

" no..Mk i..wont be able to see..what u doing.." she peevishly uttered..

" shh.." he placed finger on her supple lips..

She made a cute face..batting her lashes..

" today just follow me..geetu.." He said ever so softly...

With that he grabbed her hand..in his and walked..to the dance floor..


In the still of the night

I held you, held you tight

Mk slipped his hand on her waist drawing her close..she lurched towards him..gripping his shoulder..

She bit her tongue cursing her clumsiness ..

Mk raised her chin..with his finger..and flickered his lashes in reassurance..


In the still of the night

I held you, held you tight

He guided her one hand to his shoulder while clasped the other..firmly..

He leaned to her..left ear..


'Cause I love, love you so

Promise I'll never let you go

" back straight...and just copy my steps.." His lips stroked the skin near her ear...she shuddered in response...and merely nodded..

The light were not bright..just glowing little bit

Mk held her firmly yet soft..his heart was elated..


In the still of the night

(In the still of the night)

He slowly moved his steps..according to the harmony ..

Geetika was nervous primarily ...and matched his steps..


I remember that night in May

The stars were bright above

She was glancing down..noting his leg movements and replicating it..

MK grinned...and clutched her waist pulling her closer..she lifted up her lashes...perplexed with his change in hold..


I'll hope and I'll pray

To keep your precious love

Mk dint answer..he just looked direct in her eyes as if..talking to her silently..

His eyes glimmered..with new zeal..she blinked her lashes bemused ..

Her body was glued to his...he revolved her and yanked her closer...gripping her tight..

Well before the light

Hold me again with all of your might

" feel the music..." he whispered nuzzling her neck..

Then what occurred was heavenly

Her body was loose...but concrete..while moving in his arms..they moved in sync..overlooking their surroundings..

Mk swung her and revolved her performing regal turn...

Not once her averted his penetrating gaze away from hers...she was just following him reflexively..


In the still of the night

(In the still of the night)

He spun her..once again holding her thigh..and drew to the floor..she was a puppet in his hand...gliding crazily..

Their skin..was plastered to each other..heart beats were wild thumping in their ears..

Her eyes were shinning..by now none of them were present minded..they were in trance..


So before the light

Hold me again with all of your might

The floor was empty..the only couple dancing were them..The guys and girls were cheering them..

Their passion, ardor and love was visible on their faces...

For the first time..Mk felt this feeling so closely..her face was inches away from his...her eyes...so pure and clear..

There were no denying of his feelings anymore..he wasn't scared to admit this..

Groaning with his overwhelming feeling he whirled her and held her nape pulling her closer..


In the still of the night

(In the still of the night)

In the still of the night

They were abating their mingled breaths..Her one hand was clutching his collar..while his was on her waist...

The song ended...

Mk leisurely...tucked her curly hair behind her ear...One by one..which were scattered all over her forehead..

She grasped slightly...with her eyes closed..

She gradually opened her eyes..to meet his..

There was something in him today which only fascinated her..dragged her to him..

The loud noise of cheers and claps broke their moment..

Mk parted away from her...owing her to loose her balance...however he grasped her on time..Inwardly cursing his foolishness..She dint not had her glasses on..

They retreated back to their places...with MK holding her..

***

" a sensuous dance must say..why did she had to wer specs..??

" rohan..why shouldn't she??" Maan retorted back..

" she wore make up..n all that y couldn't she buy lenses for herself.."

Maan sighed..

" she wore a make up..dressed beautifully in the white gown..not to impress Mk..but to live up to his expectations.."

Rohan frowned..

" u knw..Rohan..she was that type of a girl..who never fantasised dancing in ball..doing anything that sounds like fun..But she still...she groomed herself..not to disappoint him..And specs..well In friendship u can do anything..but still cant urself right??Coz whats the use of making friends if u have to pretend in front of them.."

" hmm...true.."

****

Later geetika and Mk dispersed themselves among their frnds...Mk was out on a call...when some of his naughty frnds asked geet to drink..being nave to such things... she dint want to disobey Mk frnds so.. she drank..

Mk entered the party to find a tipsy geetika..His frnds apologized..as they were unaware of the fact that she was a non alcoholic..And she just had one shot..

Mk bid bye to them..and carried her out..

They walked towards her hostel...and paused in their way..It was a garden the same garden..where they met for the first time..

Geetika was whining like a child..and pinched him...running inside the garden..

" i wana count the stars..Mk..let me sit..na please.." She adorably pleaded..crashing down..and folding her legs..

" Okay..fine.." he knew its useless arguing with geetika..and especially with a drunk one..

Geetika smiled..showing off her dimples..She shifted close to mk..encircling her arm around his..and placing her head on his shoulder..

Mk was surprised with her act..nevertheless he smiled..keeping his head on hers..

" u remember..we met here for the first time..geetu.."

She nodded her head..slightly..

Both were gazing the sky..which seemed more beautiful..

All of a sudden she giggled..

" what??????" Mk asked her..

" ur beard tickles me.." she said in baby voice..

MK rubbed his cheek on hers again..

She giggled...landed on the grass..Mk slipped besides her laughing..

He recalled their meeting..what a turn of events..

That day he was drunk...and today geet is..the only difference was a kiss...

His eyes widen..finding her lips on his..It was just a small peck..

She kissed him..and inclined back to her place..giggling ..

Mk turned to face..her stunned.." geetu.." he mumbled..

She laughed pinching his cheeks.." us din tumne kiss kiya tha..aaj maine kiya..." she stated proudly and snuggled close to him..

MK jolted with her touch..closing his eyes..

She placed her head...on his chest wrapping her hands around his neck..and dozed off..

While Mk was speechless !!

****

" that was endearing...this story gets exciting..after very other chapter..MK toh clean bowled..Now.." rohan commented

Maan laughed..

" phir kya hua?????"

Heyyya guys hope u all liked this part!!

This part has..COOKIEMONSTER aka adda(thanks sweety for being such a amazing reader)...ferri(thats my cupcake...) and DIVYA(DESIRE6)


And writers RAKHI di(KRISHNA_SOURAV) and NALINI DI(DESIGIRL12)



Hope u all liked this part!!

please comment and hit like!!

ON THE DANCE FLOOR HAS BEEN UPDATES AS WELL..!!

love

sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago
👍🏼
kiss 😉
but will Geet remember what she did 😆
continue sooner 😛

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