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amazing parts...
asim made devika agreed for marriage...
finally devika and asim married...
asim leaving with her another home...
devika need time to consummate...
asim respect her decision...
ah devika's father rejected them...
devika sad ...
but it will be okay after few days asim is right...
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part 46

before going to see his parents Asim led Devika at the restaurant he offers her a moment of relaxation to make her forget her grief and during lunch he speaks to his love for her and that all conditions only reinforce this love he asks her to not despair and to prepare for another refusal that of his mother

they return to the house moves in the sitting room Asim can't find anyone asks Devika to sit and wait he'll search his mother he found her in the kitchen with the wives of his brothers to prepare dinner she sees him asked him still furious to explain to her for the scene that he did in the theater

-: Where were you the last night why you did not come to sleep at home?

-: I'll explain Mom come with me (he holds her hand and takes her to the living room he looks at his brother's wives and said to them) you comes too

-: What are you doing Asim (she said moving with him) why you don't responds to my question

their movement leads them to the living room she sees Devika her anger emerged and said shouting

-: Why you bring her back here?

-: Calm down mom I'll explain everything (he asks her to sit his father and his brothers rejoins him and his mother continued to say raising her voice)

-: That's why you did not come home last night? you stayed with her (she turns to Devika and told her) and you how you accept it spend a night with a man? what shame

-: Please Mom don't talk like that with her (Asim said to defend the honor of his wife) if I brings back Devika here and if I was with her last night it's because she is my wife we got married yesterday

-: What is this delirium (she said) you drank? she made you take something? She has bewitched you

-: Asim !! you married without telling us? ( his father asks him) and you my daughter (he speaks gently to Devika) how you accepted it and your parents they said nothing?

she says nothing remained silent her eyes full of tears and see Asim who does not support her tears he told his parents

-: Why you are doing all this drama (he looks at his father and said to him) why are you blame her? her parents know we are visited them before coming here (he holds the hand of his wife and continuous) nothing will change now she is my wife you have to accept us like that

-: What said the father of your wife when he knew? ( his father asks)

-: He refuses to talk to her (he said with a sad voice look at the pain of his wife and he adds) he never was against that we marry but as mom refuses he also refuses

-: And I will never accept this marriage is a disgrace to us you know very well what I think

Kashi the elder brother of Asim who was all the period with his other brother only observer he intervenes and tells his mother

-: What is done is done mom Devika is now the wife of your son she's a very nice girl and from a good family and most importantly she loves him very strong she will do his happiness accepts

everyone agrees with smile what just said Kashi

-: congratulation my son (said his father after having concluded that his son has chosen his life and what Kashi says is true) I'm not angry but save that I would have liked this marriage is done with family

Asim looks at his mother to let say that it is because of her if the marriage was done like that he answers him hoping

-: This is our dream to us (in looking Devika) if Mom wants I'm ready to do a great wedding party

-: Don't hope especially not with her (she said) if you want a big wedding leaves this one and I'll find you another

Bothered Asim wants to answer to his mother but his father prevents him and said

-: How can you do that to your son that's how you like. him approve and lets him live happily

-: Never (she says) I'll never approve this relationship (and she leaves leaving them alone)

disappointed by the reaction of his mother he would have liked it to be spent otherwise he'll hope that his mother forgets everything and takes him in her arms and tell him "anyway you are my son" this is not the mother whom he knew in his childhood he has printing of being in front of another mother he does not understands the woman of his childhood was soft full of love for him he does not understand why she's like that he thought that bringing back Devika as wife she forgets her pride approves his marriage very disappointed sad takes his bag that prepared him his brother's wife and said to his wife in taking her by the hand

-: Come let us go from here and go home

the silence reigns in the car the events give a sad atmosphere Asim is not upset because his mother refuses his marriage but that's what she said about his wife who upset him and puts him in anger while Devika is sad and annoyed by the attitude of Asim's mother toward her son she thinks that marriage was torn the families and separated Asim of his mother she still silent in the car look of times to time her husband to decipher his emotions Asim looks her too but out of love not pissed or sad he thinks he is happy like this and he did need anyone to choose his life especially not his mother who wants him to choose a woman to her taste arrived home she keeps this sad face does not want to talk about the situation she is afraid to say something that will hurts Asim and to avoid him she goes into the kitchen and prepared him a cup of tea he noticed that she still has that discontented air he sits on the couch in the sitting room and waiting for her she approaches with the cup of tea and puts it on the table but before she leaves he holds her hand and asks her to sit next to him

-: Why you are sad (puts his hand on her cheek for caress) I don't want to see you like that I want to see your smile

a tear flowing from her eyes her head down she wants to tell him what she has on the heart but she know that her words will displease him she looks at him with eyes that shine he includes she hides something He puts his hand on her chin lifts up her head and asked concerned

-: Tell me what happens Devika you worried me

she gets up moves away a bit turns to avoid him and said

-: I think we made a big mistake Asim our wedding created a lot of problems we would not have to done that

annoyed by what she just said Asim rises from his seat puts his hand on her shoulder turns to him and says

-: You regret to be married right? What do you want now that we stop everything and each of us go back to home ?

-: No (she responds bored) this is not what I mean but this whole situation scares me I see you away from your mother and I'm afraid that one day you will regret

-: I never regret (his hand on her cheek) I made my choice and it's you who I want (he kisses her and suggested ) let this stress aside and just sleep I need you by my side (said with a soft voice)

this is her second night with him all alone in this apartment her heart beats too quickly blushed and lowered her head very stressed today too she can't offer to her husband his desire

-: What happens to you (he said whispering his hand still on her cheek) not afraid today I will be patient too I just want to feel your breath for sleep (he carries and takes her to the bedroom

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nice part...
asim's mother didn't accept devika...
she accused devika badly...
asim defend his wife...
all will be fine hopefully...
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part 47

another sun rises in the house of Asim and Devika she opens her eyes and found herself once again in the arms of her husband Asim can't sleep without putting her against him each time that he gets up at night he feels her next to him and can't prevent himself to kiss her in the dark and put her in his arms, and his night takes place in this way to every time she escapes him the emptiness wakes him he puts her back into his arms and closes his eyes. this is the second day after their wedding and he already feels that he can't sleep if she is not with him and every night at this way

one week already they're married, the father of Devika still don't talk to her what makes her sad and deprives her husband to a enjoyment that he waits every day and to start the day after a night that was agitated Devika gets up and goes into the kitchen, she prepared a delicious breakfast with different foods something she never did. since she is married she prepared only tea and for food, Asim he buys it or he takes her to the restaurant today she rose motivated and want to do pleasure to her husband in his room Asim open his eyes by a feeling of emptiness he does not find his wife in her place he gets up leaves his room and found a well-stocked table of a different kind of foods he is surprised he did not think Devika knew do all that

-: It is you who do all that (he asks seeing her advance with a tray of cups of tea) you got up early to do it?

-: Yes it was me who did all this (she responds to him by sitting) last night I sleep badly so I used my time

-: I did not know I had married a woman who knows do cooking (he said proud of her after letting slip a kiss on her cheek?) good morning (he sits too) I'm one man very lucky because I loves eating

-: I know you like overly to eat that why I made you all this food

-: You know things about me !! (Asim be astonished) I don't recall that we talked about it

-: We don't speak but ate together (she admits it) I saw how you like to eat

Asim puts his hand on his wife he finds that there's a lot of things he does not know on her he was busy to love her and to recover her he did not pay attention to her desire and needs but Devika knows him a little bit she loved him and at the same time observed him

-: You love me so much you've had time to observe my actions and my desires (press in her hand delicately and continuous asking her by love) tell me again what you know on me

-: Many things Asim (she gets up to serve him and said at the same time) I know you love football you love your family and mainly your sister and you have a very large heart (She continued to describe him he looks at her dazzled by her high observation)

attracted by what she has tell him he holds her hand stands up caress her tender cheek his lips close to hers and said with his fresh voice

-: My mother was right (he leans in to kiss her don't continuous his sentence)

-: What? (she asks him cheeks flushed she includes the intentions of Asim)

-: You have bewitched me (he answered retrying to take a kiss)

Devika is not ready yet she tries to escape from his hands he grabs her and asks her not to move he go put music and returns to her the music reaches the ears of Devika and she sees the hand of her husband who lands on her she gives him hers and their steps lead them again in the world of this beautiful song which expresses as always their wishes and mainly those to Asim, this song will help him to tell all that he has on the heart all what his words can't be included the song does (Tujhe Dekha to ye jaana sanam) which gives him the opportunity to show his wife his great love and manifest his large envy which lead him to take her and make her a part of him he grabs the arm of his wife from behind and the song guides him to expressed with gestures (when I found you I realized that love means go crazy for someone) with a crazy look he fix on her after he turns her toward him she looks at those eyes with hers which always shines in front of him and her words tells him (those eyes are mine their dreams are yours) she puts her hand near his heart and continuous (this heart is mine and the thoughts are yours) he continuous his movement takes her and looks at her from below (nothing is mine all it's yours now my life and every breath are yours) a tear flows from his eye Devika wipes it at the same time as the words of the song that help her to say (the eyes are mine and tears are yours all my troubles turns into smiles. now that I've come so far I want to die in your arms)excited by her gesture begins to empty his breath and let it feel on her face sweeping with his lips debuted by the neck advance towards the cheek taking with him her heat caused by her desire This path leads him to her mouth to finish his trip install his lip on hers and stay as long that desire will last the song is not finished always with their expressive movements Devika's heart beats and wakes her to put her in a stress withdrawn from this kiss he prevents her from leaving and keeps her body to his with the words of the song (stay just in front of me and let me watching you) she caress his cheek put her head on his chest (you called me and I came to you what promise can be greater than that of love)

at the end of the song Asim remains standing his wife against him he looks at her with love he just experienced his greatest revelation which allowed him to tell all his love his desires and even his patience this patience that makes him mad which is still inside him so he wants to be patient but he also wants to live his true love with his wife and he waits for the day when he feels her ready to give herself to him to be one with him he dreamed of his wedding night he has not yet had he holds her hand and asks her to sit down he sits next to her and keeps his hand in hers

-: Devika you know I'm very patient I told you I will wait that you're more comfortable to live your love with me I have you by my side it's a dream that is realized, but I want you closer than that I promised you I will never force you but I feel that you refuse me as if I forced you for the wedding and you punishes me to be far from me I love you and I need you to prove me the same thing

-: I know what you want Asim and I want it as much as you but I don't understand what happens to me I don't know why I flees we are here you and me our parents are away from us and even our friends no one know that we are married

Asim feels the anxiety of his wife he feels she is not well he wondered if he had not made a mistake with her by marrying her of this way, by snatching at her family and don't allow her to realize the dream of every girl to have a beautiful wedding he keeps his eyes on her and began to think for a solution to make her smile and all her desires

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