PARCHHAIYAN - ateet ki Updated EPILOGUE on 20-1-2015 /P 142 - Page 67

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
very beautiful
Poor geet she is suffering so much
maan is doing a lot
so geet is falling for maan
i think maan will tease her now😳
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 12

Nice part...

thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...Maan cares sssooo much abt Geet...
loved the way he supported her when she was having nightmares..
oye hoyeee...Geet lattoo on our handsome Maan...
waiting fr nxt..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update..
Glad geet is starting to trust maan even a little bit.hope she fights the. Demons of her past with maans love..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 13



EVENING time and fine cold weather. Maan is relaxing on bed,while watching tv. Geet come out of from the washroom,when their door knocked by the room service. Maan ordered coffee and tea for them. Geet opened the door. She recieved the order and locked the door again. She stepped towards him and slipped near him. She raised a coffee mug towards him.

Maan took and gave a smile. Then he again struck with the movie he was watching. Geet glance at him but he was so engrossed in tv,dont paying any heed towards her. She take a small sip of her hot tea.


'Maan...' She called to grab his attention.


'hmm.' he replaied briefly.


'your coffee. Thandi ho rahi hai.' though she remind of coffee but deep inside she wans his attention. He was neither talking nor teasing only watching his fav movie.

'oh yes. I just forgot about my coffee.', Maan raised his hand to hold the mug,but his eyes was glued to tv screen.

Suddenly she widened his left arm and made a space for herself. She slipped more to him and Maan cuddled her. 'i was feeling cold.' she explained quickly,not sure to whom. It was for him or she trying to remind herself that there is no future of their relation as she still scared to accept new things in her life.


Maan glance at her. Both's eyes met. He rubbed her arm softly. 'feeling better?' he asked politely and she nodded her head frequently. She hold him tight and hide in him,resting her head on his chest,hearing the thumping sound of his heart.



Unaware about her own feelings,his arms become the most peacful place for her. Gradually she start trusting on him,no matter how much she denied but deep inside Maan made a place for him in her wounded heart. His care and love affected her. She liked staying near him.


Same time her phone rang. Pinky was on other side. She apolozise first for disturbing her but it was urgent. Some mails are pending which was necessary to send urgently and detail was only know by her. Geet assured that she will send it right now. She cut the call but need her laptop which was at home. 'Maan do you have the file which i send you,of xyz project?' she asked if had the detail with him.


'yes i had kept it safe in my laptop.' Luckily Maan always carry his laptop with him.


'can i used your laptop?' She asked for permission.


'ofcourse' he said briskly.


Geet picked up his laptop. 'Maan pasword dalo.' she raised to himself.


'ha to type kar lo.' He commands her.


'but i dont know...' she told but Maan cut it briefly.


'tumhara date of birth hai.' He confirmed.

Geet was stiffned that moment for few seconds,dont know how to react. She was amused. She typed and get the access. His laptop now like a open book for her. First the wallpaper was of the last day. She even dont aware when Maan clicked that pic of her smiling. Last day when both went for outing,both become kid and start playing with snow,threwing it on each other. Geet laugh after ages and too freely.


She was staring it amusily. 'Geet open hua?' he asked to confirm.


'ha.'


'now open he xyz folder and you will get all the required detail.' Maan told her. Geet opened and do her work quickly. Afterwards she just checking out as Maan was busy in tv today,and she got folder full of her pics. From the day one, when both met to till date. He secreatly click her many pics and she dont have ay clue about them. Now she was so confused again weather she will act happy on his insane love or doubted on him for this secreat pics. Hear heart beats for him but his mind threatened her to save her from getting hurt again. She went to him and asked about the pics.


Maan smiles and pulled her near him. 'nice na?' he asked casually. 'you know what i clicked to keep you with me always. Ab tum to mujhse bate karti nahi ho but your pics talk so much. I share everything with these pics.' Maan poured out his feelings. His confession told her how much he yearning for her love,but her fears become wall between both.


She was silent dont replied and snuggled him only. 'what i am doing with him,only spoiling his life. He loves me but in return i only suspect him. When will i able to gave him his share of love?' she was lost in her thoughts and drop of tears come out from her closed eyes and died on his chest. Maan alerts and pulled her face up to see her face.


'what happened Geet?' he turn worried again.


In reply she cuddled him more firmly. 'dont ask anything pls. I only wanted to stay like this.' she wished and Maan enveloped her. After some time he toased and bring her down. He made her laid on a bed and start parting from her but she wont ready to leave him. Geet pleads him to stay with her. Maan bend on her face and kissed on her both eyes and forehead. His hand entwined with her hand. Both looked in each other eyes. She raised and intiate this time. She kissed on his lips and made his soul burned in desire.


Maan don't know how he would pause now. She was his love and to love her was his only desire then how would he pulled him back.

Last night she fell and lost her concious. And it was he who changed her clothes and cuddled her for whole night to warm her cold body. That moment he controlled himself but her simple kiss set him on fire. The urge to feel her underneath him crouching badly.


"Geet..." he growled and his hands raised to pull her near. His grip firmed. She broke the kiss and glance in his intense eyes. Though desires wasn't mutual but she decided to give in. Till now he only gave her and now her turn to repay back by loving him. She couraged and subsided her fears for the moment. Though it wasn't easy but she wants to do it. Maan was in doubt. He doesn't want to spoil the trust she showed a bit, due to his wishes so he was just waiting for her to initate.

Geet raised and kissed him again. Still he want a confirmation so he asked her straight to which she hide her face in the cork of his neck and nodded yes.


His heart pounds dreadfully. Both made love and connected with each other in true sense. He not only love her but worshipping her body. The feel was different from her past experiences. He not using her for his physical pleasure but loving her. When both reached to climax he removed from her and laid next to hold her again. He kissed her softly. He can't get enough of her. She still looking nubile even in her most messier state. She rested her head on his chest and hear his heart beats which was running much faster then hers. He covered both and they rest to calm themselves.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
geet trying to trust maan
nd getting to know bout him secretly tking er pics thru his lappy
her past is a hindrance but she decided to let go
do cont soon buddy
thnx fr d pm😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
heading toward trust issues letting past go is tough for geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet has finally moved on with maan

Happy for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
great..geet trying to trust him...
aww he got her photos in the laptop..so cute...
ooh they made love...beautiful...
cont soon!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Geet maan ka attention paa ne ke liye jo harkatein kar rahi hai...wonderful!!
Maan ke lappy mein apne photos dekh kar hairaan hona aur maan ke barein mein sochna...lovely!!
Dil-o-dimaag ki ladai mein dil ka jit jaana...jast awesome!!
Dono sex mein nahi par love making mein kho jaate hai...wonderful!!
Mujhe yeh update bahut achha laga...thank you!!

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