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Posted: 10 years ago
i thought u updated :-(
got addicted of ur ff..
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Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

i thought u updated :-(
got addicted of ur ff..


Awww
i just opened lappy
Lets see if i can manage to proof read while eating breakfast ;)
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Originally posted by: R.sailaja

waiting for ur update


Will update now then 😛
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Epilogue

A/N there are several POVs so don't get confused 😊

||~4 months later~||

||~Rey's POV~||

I can't believe it's been four months since we started dating for real without any lies or secrets. I fixed my suit one more time before I leave with my graduation coat and cap in my hands. I got to Beautiful's house as I rang the bell and wait for her to come out.

Soon the door opened and reveals the most beautiful girl in the world, Taani. I looked at her up and down with open mouth. She looks breathtaking. Her black simple short dress fit her at right places with her natural look. She had her gown in her one hand and cap in other. I cleared my throat finding my voice to speak "you look beyond beautiful" I breath out making her blush that earned a smile from me.

^ Taani's outfit ^

||~Taani's POV~||

I heard the door bell ring and I sprinted to the door opening it to find Rey on the other side. I smiled at his gaping look and checked him out. He regained his exposure soon after clearing his throat and spoke "you look beyond beautiful." I blushed hard at his words as I give him another look over going from head to toe. "You look not so bad yourself Hottie" I commented after seeing his dazzling smile. "Why thank you kind lady" he replied chuckling as he took my hand in his and we walked to his car.

^ Rey's suit ^

Both Swaron will join us directly at school. It's finally the day when we all graduate and start taking steps to fulfill our dreams, passions and get success in our chosen careers. We reached to school in no time and the bubble of excitement and nervous made its way inside me. I started fidgeting with my fingers as we walked inside. Rey hold me by my forearm as he halted my steps and make me turn to face him. I gave him a weak smiled earning a shake of his head. I pouted cutely making him lean down and kiss my lips. He took my lower lip in between his teeth and tug on it. My nervousness went out of the window as he started nibbling and sucking on my lower lip igniting a moan from me. My hands went in his out of bed looking hairs as I fisted them with my fingers. His hands made way to my hips as he squeezed them making me moan again followed by a gasp. "GET A ROOM" a familiar voice yelled in our ears making us jump our skin as we separated.

I put my hand to my chest calming my racing heart as Rey cussed colorfully. I heard a booming laugh and soft giggle making me look in the direction of the voices. I shake my head at them as I glared particularly at Swayam. Rey punched his forearm playfully as he glared at him too. "Whatever man" Rey said as Swayam yelped in pain due to the punch. I took Sharon's hand as we giggled at their antics and walked to waiting area. In these past four months we both have came closed. I apologized for my unfriendliness and explained her my reasons and in mere seconds she forgave me and hugged me tight cussing her cousin brother, Rey.

We both chatted as boys joined us and we all went and attended our boring ceremony. Everyone threw their caps and caught them back as the roaring of cheers and claps from audience. Soon we all exited from the school and reached my house as we all four ate lunch and sat chitchatting until it was the time to get ready for the graduation party. Though boys didn't need much time to get ready but they still left giving us girls some good amount of time to get ready. I and Sharon was getting ready at my place while Reyam at Rey's place.

||~Few hours later~||

||~Swayam's POV~||

"Dude, remind me why I am doing all this with you?" I asked umpteenth time whining earning a chuckle from Rey. "Because you are my bro man" Rey replied in same whiny tone as mine smirking down at me from the ladder he was on. I glared at him and put some more rose petals on the door step. I finished putting petals on the mat and fixed some ice cubes for the wine tray. This man has taken care of every detail for tonight. His love for her is just commendable. After going through sh*t in beginning they have came close to each other emotionally in these past four months. I may not show but I am happy for this idiot. Taani is good for him more than he or she will ever realize. There is this light in his eyes I last saw it before his dad left him and his mom for another woman since then I never saw it until few months back when he described his beautiful to me. "Man, is it right?" I was brought out of my train of thoughts by his question. This guy is asking to me about every little thing like it's some project and he needs 100 out of 100. "Yeah dude it all good now we can leave before girls think we stood them up" I said looking at my phone for time. I looked up at him again and he is still fixing stuff. GOD I groaned as I took him from his arm and drag him out of the room to the lobby then to the car and from there to home.

^ Door step Swayam was working on ^

||~Sharon's POV~||

I giggled as Taani glared at me. Right now we were doing last minute touches on ourselves as I tease her about Rey. When I first moved here Rey was really sad but since past 4 months he is beyond happy. I am glad both of them are happy together. "come on Taani leave the hairs open it will be easy for Rey to move his fingers in them" I tease her more making her go all red as she tried to hide her smile with a glare. I shake my head at her and fixed my bun just then I heard bell ring. My smiled went wide and I turned to rush down but was stopped by Taani's knowing look. I blushed hard. Oh come on you can't blame me. I want to see my prince charming in suit too. I ignored her and went down to open the door nonetheless. There he was standing looking dashing as heck in his three piece suit. He was checking me out openly making me blush as Rey cleared his throat. "Stop eye eating my cousin sister at least not in front of me" Rey faked gagged and went inside smiling at us. I looked back at Swayam who was already looking at me making me look away shyly. He took my hand and we walked after Swayam texted Rey that we are leaving.

^ Sharon's Dress ^

^ Swayam's Dress ^

||~Taani's POV~||

My heart was hammering in my chest God knows why though. I descended down the stairs fidgeting with my fingers. I finally reached the last step and looked up to meet Hottie's eyes. My breath got caught in my throat as I took him in. Damn the word Hottie is nothing in front of him I thought but I guess out loud earning a throaty chuckle from him. "you are so cute Beautiful" he cooed making me go red.

^ Rey's suit with blue tie and handkerchief that matches Taani's dress ^

"Beautiful" he breathe out making me meet his gaze. He had a box in his hands and I looked at it confused. He opened it revealing a beautiful pendent with our names on it. My eyes quickly welled up as he walks behind me and tied the necklace on my neck. His breathe fanning the back of my neck making me shiver. I closed my eyes as I fisted my dress on both sides. His hand went to my waist holding me possessively. "How about we stay here only? I don't want any men eyeing you like you are so come kind of delicious desert." His voice went down an octave hinting jealousy in it as he asked me. I grinned at his jealousy and turned in his arms as he trapped me in them. "How about this Hottie, if you be a good boy then maybe I will let you kiss me as many times as you want tomorrow and I won't stop you. Deal?" I asked as I brought my lips near his so our breaths became one. I looked up to meet his dark eyes filled with desires making me shiver again. He grunted a yes as he attacked my lips giving me a glimpse of what's to come tomorrow if he does what I asked him to do. When we pull away I was dizzy so I rested my head on his chest while he held me close to him.

"You know what these two hearts means?" he asked making me pull away and look at the pendent. I shook my head in a no and looked at him to elaborate. "Well this big heart is yours and in their lays my heart, the small one. so you better take care of my heart as it's yours for life now." He said sincerely while looking into my eyes. I didn't know what to say so I did what I could think of. I kissed him pouring all my love in it. I blushed and he smiled at me when I pulled away. "Shall we?" he asked offering his hand which I gladly took and left for the party.

^ Rey's gifted pendent ^

As expected guys were ogling me and those ugh girls were eye r*ping my Hottie. I pouted as I looked at his angry and jealous state earning a chuckle from him. "See I offered you to stay back but you didn't like it. Now bear all girls throwing themselves at me" he said with a glint of tease in eyes. In return I huffed and turned my back to him.

||~ Rey's POV~||

Damn it I want to kill each and every f*cking guy in here. Did they forget that they came with their dates? They are eye f*cking my girl, my beautiful. With stiff body and clenched jaws I stood glaring at each male who stared at my beautiful. My eyes fell on my pouty jealous Beautiful making me chuckle. I couldn't help but tease her "see I offered you to stay back but you didn't like it. Now bear all girls throwing themselves at me." what did I get in return her anger. Oopss I thought as I wrap my arms around her waist from behind and resting my chin on her bare shoulder earning a shiver from her. I smiled at the reaction and spoke in low husky tone "you know I love when you get mad, your entire face goes red making you look hotter than you already are." "Ho...ttie" she stuttered clearly embarrassed making me laugh. I planted a soft kiss on her shoulder. "Let's get out of here" I say maintaining my husky tone for which she gives me a weak nod. I remove my hands from her but quickly took her hand in mine as we walked out of the party but not before waving bye to Swaron. He winked at me and mouthed "have fun" to which I only shook my head.

We sat in my car and drove off to our next destination with me still holding her hand. I think I am whipped I thought to myself as I parked the car. I looked at Beautiful who was looking around curiously. "I have something planned for us" I explained to her as her eyes landed at me to which she smiled with curiosity shimmering in her eyes. I lean towards her and peck her lips softly and got out of the car and helped her out too. We walked inside and then to the elevator going on the top floor. We walked to the room I booked for us. I heard her gasp as she took the entrance I smiled down at her as she beamed at me.

"After you Beautiful" I said as I opened the door. She walked in followed by me. I turned and locked the door and then turned back at her leaning on the door as I let her take in everything. I patiently waited for her reaction as her eyes roamed around. "You did all this?" she asked finally after few minutes. "Yup I and Swayam helped too. Do you like it?" I asked nervously. She turned to me gaping at me. "Like? I love it, Rey" she said with sparkles in her eyes. I knew then that this decision of mine was the best. I smiled at her as she turned walking around looking at everything closely.

^ the room ^

What did I do? Well I checked out my Beautiful. Her blue gown fit her upper body tightly while loosening up as it goes down her body. The blue single strap on her shoulder with silver work on it went to her chest shaping them perfectly. Her long earrings fell on her shoulder freely just like her long dark hairs in which I was craving to run my fingers. She looked back at me and caught me staring at her. An instant blush took its place on her cheeks making the buddy down there more excited than it already was. I fixed myself as I walked to her and took her in my arms hiding my face in her hairs.

^ Taani's dress ^

*RED ALERT ~ Romance ahead*

||~ Idk how it is, read at ur own risk 😛 ~||

"I want you so bad" I whispered in her ear huskily tightening my grip around her. "Rey" she said breathless pulling away from me much to my disappointment. She turned around facing her back to me. I went up to her again placing my hands on her shoulder moving down to her forearms, elbows then down to her hands intertwining our fingers as I held our hands to the sides. I dipped my head down to her ear lobe taking it in between my teeth nibbling at it and then sucking on it. "Reeyyy" she moans making me go wild. I tighten my hold on her hands as I pressed my body to hers sucking hard. I could feel her uneven breaths. I left her ear lobe kissing behind her ear going down to her neck then to shoulder nibbling and sucking everywhere. I am sure she will be marked as mine everywhere by morning. The thought made me smile. I went to her other ear lobe, neck and then to shoulder giving it the same treatment.

In all this I don't know when I let go of her hands I realized it when she slipped out of my hands again taking few steps away from me. She was taking deep breaths with her eyes closed and face flushed. I went to her again holding her arm and turning her softly to me making her look at me. "Beautiful, do you want me to continue" I asked gently looking into her eyes. She stared into my eyes as she quickly nodded and hugged me blushing. I smiled at her shyness hugging her back.

I pull away and took her delectable lips in mine as I ravished them. My hands held her to me by her waist as I trace my tongue on her lower lip for entrance. She denied me entrance as she smiled against my lips. Ah hah I thought as my hands went to her hips squeezing them making her gasp. I took my opportunity and slipped my tongue in her mouth. I explored her mouth slowly enjoying every corner of it like its first time. Her hands went around my neck settling in my hair. We kissed until I felt her gasping for breath as her hold tightens on my hairs. I let go of her lips resting my forehead against her forehead.

"I can kiss you all day and night long nonstop" I say breathless making her more flushed then before. I caressed her cheeks softly as I let her catch her breath. I bend down a little as I saw her calmed now and picked her in my arms earning a squeal from her. I chuckled and kissed her forehead as she hid her face in my neck holding my coat collars for support. I walked to the bed and placed her on it gently. I took my coat and tie off and joined her. I hover above her as I managed my weight on my elbows not crushing her.

I looked down at her with all the love I feel for her as I lowered my head and kissed her senseless. My hands had mind of their own as they started their own exploration. Soon we were a steamy mess with Beautiful doing her own explorations. Her moans and my groans were only voices that could be heard in the room. "Reyyy" she moaned as I suck hard on her collar bone leaving another love bite. Her moans will end up making me go insane for sure. My hands went back to her back as I unzipped her gown taking it off slowly as I started kissing her down her collar every exposed skin as I undress her. She quivered and writhed under me making me want to do a lot more to her. When I was successfully done undressing her I did the same with myself and covered her with my body.

"I love you" I confessed as I look into her eyes in thick voices filled with lots of emotions. "I love you too" she said and I entered her in one go not wanting to hurt her more than necessary. She screamed in pain followed by tears from her eyes. My heart clenched at the sight. I showered her face with soft feather light kisses as I waited for the pain to go away. When I see her calmed down, I moved whispered sweet nothings in her ear. We made love to each other several times throughout the night as Beautiful got more comfortable around me in such situation. As sun rose Beautiful dozed off into deep peaceful slumber with a content smile on her face. I pull her sleeping body to me so her head rested on my bare chest and covered us both with the sheets. I kissed her hair murmuring "I love you. Good night Beautiful." With that being said I closed my eyes to dream our future together which will or has started turning into reality from tonight itself.

||~THE END~||

Phew finally done writing it after like sitting to write it several times. Every time something comes up and delayed the update. I hope you liked the epilogue and the pics. Don't think its short cause of the pics in between. Its 5 pages, a page extra than my usual updates and that's the most I could do right now with my flu self. Also I spend a lot of time searching for these pics you all better like them.

Now you all better comment BIG and like the update one last time. 😃

Give this story a proper farewell through ur hearty comments plz

N yh I hope u all like their romance scene in the end 😳

Love

TaSha



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Edited by --Ta_Sha--PMs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow an amazing epilogue
Tooo HOT
will surely miss this ff
thank u for providing us these kind of beautiful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ending di hayeee I lobe all d pics their clothes that pendant room decoration everything everyone POV was good n in d last it was too hot
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res /unres
beautiful ending
much more can't be expected
I love reyam and shaani teasing
wow lovely romance... more romantic filled with love <3
thank u lot dear for pm
pls update soon ur other stories tooo.
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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AWESOME + CUTE + HOT EPILOGUE...👏😳⭐️

EVERY SCENE IS MIND BLOWING...

JUST LOVE IT...😃

LOVE THIS STORY...



GOING TO MISS THIS STORY...😭
Edited by Shubh007 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hit,romantic epilogue
luvd it
Gona miss this story

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