SaAz OS: His Sparkling Eyes

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Ash

@~sweet Ash~

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Oh my GAWD!!

fantastic job! 👏i was so engrossed with the story that i actually gasped at the accident... do write other stories!!

-Ash

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Junoonian

@Junoonian

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Aaargh u killed him!!!!!

WHY!?

ok now that i have got that out of the way i have to say i loved your writing. Very nice. Esp the sentence where u say that arzoo wld never know that his eyes sparkled only when he looked at her.

But you killed him :( ... damn. I am kind of mad at you.

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey, this is amazing!🤗

Awww he loved herrr❤️

How sweet!!! And Arzoo failed to realize.

Well she was getting feelings for him but not close enough

Why the sad ending??😭 Loved it yaar!❤️

Superb!❤️ Nicely written i must say, good job!👏

Such a cute OS!!!❤️

Please do write more OS's soon!😉

@And if you can plz do pm me for your future works😉

Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 10 years ago

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hey this was very beautiful👍🏼
Loved the way Sahir made a bahana to stay with Arzoo, it was very sweet.
I don't mind the tragedy, coz the last few lines were so romantic that it compensated for the tragical endings 😉

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Fariii, first I'm going to die of happiness finding you here! 🤗
Second, please post something happy before I plan to murder myself! 😳😒 M.A Examinations are killing me enough! 🥺