Maine pyar kiya4 Arman-jassy&pratam-gauri

PART-1......Jasmeet Walia is a typical
middle class punjabi girl....very simple....wears
ordinary short salwar...wears glasses,long hair...she
plats it.she is attached 2 her parents,dadi & her
dearest brother Pratham {Hiten-kutumb}she joins a new
college.she was teased by all the guys.bcoz she was an
exception in that college of fashionable girls.everyday
she was getting embarassed.one day she was crying under
the college tree.suddenly a girl comes & touches
her:Jasmeet WAlia...she looks at that
girl.tall,fair,short hair,tight jeans,short top.she
smiles at her:hi,i'm a Gauri. jasmeet walia smiles.
gauri:1st u wipe out ur tears.then smile. she did so.
gauri:jasmeet walia,du u hav any pet name? she:the ppl
who r close 2 me call me Jassy. gauri:wow,i'll also call
u jassy.bcoz i'm ur friend.see jassy,yellow flowers...r
falling on us...u no yellow is the color of
frienship...gauri takes a yellow flower:it proves that
we r gud friends.is'nt rite jassy? jassy smiles:yes.
gauri was thrilled:that means u 'll be my friend?
jassy:i'll not be just a friend,i'll be ur very gud
friend. gauri:really? both of them smile. gauri:this
smile shud there on ur face always.shud not cry when
stupid guys tease u. jassy becomes shy.

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Part-2....gauri:jassy,u hav 2 change.i was like u b4.now
see my change.u hav 2 be smart. gauri teaches her how 2
walk in stylish way....she changes jassy's
dressing.jassy starts wearing western clothes.she makes
her hair short. slowly slowly she adjusts & becomes a
smart girl.evey1 was surprised at her change. there is a
raksha bandhan party in a hotel. gauri invites jassy 2
come with her brother. gauri:many brothers & sisters
will come.we'll tie rakhi 2gether.how nice it will be!
jassy goes there with her dearest brother pratham.
pratham was surprised at the high class ppl's party.
gauri comes near jassy:hi jassy. pratham falls 4 her at
the 1st sight itself. jassy:bhayya,this is gauri. he
smiles at her. jassy:this is my brother pratham.
gauri:hi. pratham was flattered:hi. jassy:ok,i
introduced my brother 2 u.where is ur brother? gauri
shows her only brother PURAB. purab falls 4 jassy at the
1st sight. all the sisters tie rakhi on their brothers'
hands. pratham tells gauri:gauri....his voice was really
cool,soft & romantic.he:i came 2 thank u. gauri:2 thank
me?4 what? pratham:my sister was very shy,reserved...but
u changed her.now jassy is very happy.u made her really
beautiful. gauri laughs:i did'nt make her pretty.she was
already very pretty. gauri smiles.pratham was serious&
looks at her eyes deeply.gauri becomes shy 2 look at
him. pratham:ur smile is so beautiful....luvly... gauri
smiles :thank u. pratham thinks:coming 2 this party
was not a waste.infact it was very useful. purab
always about jassy.gauri finds out his secret luv 4
jassy.she teases him. she reveals it 2 theirparents.they
come 2 jassy's house. jassy comes out.purab's parents
liked her very much.they did'nt care that jassy is a
middle class girl. purab's dad:we came here with a
proposal.we wud like 2 get jassy as our bahu. they were
surprised. gauri:my bayya luvs jassy very much. pratham
says in his mind:jassy's brother luvs u gauri. the
wedding gets fixed.but Mr.walia told them 2 wait till
her studies get over. they agree. when they were
going,without their knowledge,pratham winks at gauri.
gauri did'nt expect it.she feels funny. do not 4get
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Part-3....bOth pratham & gauri at the icecream parlour.
he was looking at her. gauri:pratham,why r u looking at
me like this? hiten smiles.gets embarassed.understanding
his embarrasement she laughs. he:u look very beautiful
when u smile. gauri:u always talk about my smile.i'm
getting bored of that. pratham gets embarassed.
gauri:tell me why did u call me here? pratham:that u
did'nt understand? she:if u don't tell me how can i
understand?tell me why did u call me? he: gauri,when
does a person becomes silent&wordless? gauri laughs:how
rubbish ! he:this not rubbish.its connected 2 luv.a
person struggles 4 words when he has 2 open his heart b4
his beloved.yes gauri i luv u.u also luv me no? gauri
smiles:no...he:no,u luv me. she smiles:no...he:if u luv
me,u shud come 4 2day evening's party. she smiles. in
the party,pratham was searching 4 gauri.
jassy:bhayya,whom r u searching 4? he did'ntt get words.
later ppl started dancing.suddenly gauri comes....in
short top & parallels...with lots of bead work. pratham
dances singing....ajave mahi....{FIda}.gauri also join
with him.every1 was shocked 2 see their intimacy.
jassy's dad's voice was raised:whats this? pratham:i'm
sorry papaji,we luv each other. suddenly every1 laughs 2
their surprise. bcoz of the horoscope,pratham-gauri's
wedding was conducted early. gauri becomes an ideal
bahu. jassy's college life gets over.they get ready 4
the wedding.but unfortunately b4 the wedding purab meets
with an accident.his car falls into big river.his car
was fully damaged.they did'nt even his body. every1 was
sad.jassy was heart broken.she takes months 2 recover.
months passed.when gauri forces jassy starts going 4
modelling.4 that she shifts to another city. she goes 4
a shoot. they call 4 the photographer.he comes.he was
well dressed.he was very handsome.he smiles nicely. he
was touched by jassy's presense.he falls 4 her at 1st
sight.he is none other than ARMAAN. he runs 2 dadi.he is
her pet. he was thrilled:dadi,i met the girl of my
dreams. dadi:what? he:i told u no,i see a girl in every
dream.2day i saw her. dadi:who is she? he:sh is
jassy,the upcoming model. armman's mind tells:1 day
jassy will come b4 u. she'll admit that she luves u.
armaan goes 2 a dream world. he dreams having pretty
moments with jassy.song....nazar..nazar...{FIda}

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part-4....Jassy's work was greatly appreciated. she:1st
of all i wud like 2 thank my photographer Mr.Armaan. she
smiles at him:thanku armaan. he smiled as if her
complement is the gr8st achievement of life.jassy joins
that company as the chief model. Lter jassy was
surprised 2 no that armaan is not only an ordinary
photographer,but also the owner of this company.he has
no parents ,only his dadi.actually due 2 the craze of
photograghy,he works there as the photogragher.jassy
thinks how purab was interested 2 take her photoes. 1
lady of the company tells her:armaan sir does
photograghy only if he likes the model.u r his fav
model. jassy simply smiles. jassy's co-star was not
performing well.so the director ot angry & puts him
out.he becomes upset:in this last moment whom will i
try? suddenly jassy looks at armaan:Mr.armaan,why
don't u try?armaan was shocked:me?no way...it will harm
ur name too jassy.i don't want that 2 happen.
jassy:it'll never happen.i think u r the right
choice.just try. ever1 forces him & finally he stands as
the model. that work becomes a gr8 success. he thanks
jassy:its bcoz of u,we cud achieve this success. jassy
smiles :no Mr.armaan...he:plz jassy...don't call me
Mr...just call me Armaan. she:ok armaan...he:how sweet!
she:what?i did'nt hear u. he:nothing.jassy,can we become
ud friends? jassy thinks about her 1st meeting with
gauri:whats the need of asking that?we r already
friends. armaan becomes happy. jassy:i no a sister &
brother who giv a lot of value 2 frienship.i learnt the
value of frienship from them. Armaan was so happy
about jassy's frienship that he runs around like a mad
person dreaming...song..koi milgaya..{koi mil gaya}.
Armaan-jassy go 2 a restaurant.armaan becomes
emotional.he looks at jassy's eyes deeply.jassy
remembers that lady telling her that arman's fav model
is herself. Armaan:jassy,i luv u.will u marry me? jassy
was shocked. armaan:jassy,will u? jassy gets upset:u'rs
is not luv armaan.its just an attraction 4 a model.u r
luving my beauty,not me. armaaan cud'nt bare it:no
jassy.jassy plz don't take it funny.i'm
serious.jassy,i'll tell u a truth.i used 2 see u in my
dreams b4 i saw u.that day onwards i started luving u.
jassy does'nt believe it.jassy gets fed up & she goes
away.he follows her:jassy,don't go.plz listen 2 me.i'm
madly in luv with u.believe me jassy. tears started
coming from his eyes. jassy:ok,i believe u armaan.but
what du u no about me. she tells him about purab. she
thot armman will change his mind hearing that.but he
continued walking behind her.he even goes 2 jassy's
house with his dadi with the proposal when she was not
there. after they return,jassy comes 2 the house.her
papaji tells:2day a guy called armaan came here.he was
not alone.his dadicame along with him. jassy was
shocked. pratham:what relationship u r having with
armaan? jassy becomes upset.