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Posted: 10 years ago
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Smoky Heaven ...

At Mussorie

A black Masserati entered the gates of palatial house .. It was old house with gothic architecture .. It had a grand garden and driver stopped the car in front of the entrance .. He got down nd opened the door of car nd a guy got down from car .. He is wearing Armani nd was looking like Royality Offcourse after all he was Royalty was in his blood .. He is the best business tycoon Keshav Desai who just returned from London .. He looked at house with pain and hurt in his eyes and his mind took him to the flashback and the only painful memories came in front of eyes and he quickly closed his eyes letting all pain absorbed with in himself .. He moved forward and opened the door the interiors looked like its of some palace of 19th century .. He felt as if after an era he has returned to the place where once he ruled and it was literally after an era ..

Kd's POV

Finally I am back at the place which snatched every thing from me .. Now it's only the place where reminds me of the glorious past we all had and also the vengeance coz of which I am still alive .. Alive who am I kidding to ( he faked a low laughter ) .. Our kind was never termed as alive we r just bodies with heart dat has never learnt to beat .. But dats what make us the most powerful of all creatures .. The immortals , The VAMPIRES ... We ruled this place but dose back stabbers snatched every thing from us ..

Precap: Kiya and Piddhi 's entry and der nightmares ...



So dis is the prologue of my new ff .. I will update my pending FFs after completing dis one 😊 .. So plz tell me how's it ..,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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supeerbb start...loved the start..plzz continue stavan..eager to knw more..
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Originally posted by: Rock_chick06

supeerbb start...loved the start..plzz continue stavan..eager to knw more..

thanks a lot 😊 ...
I will cont soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start there...

Waiting for more... thanks for this.
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Yaaay new ff🥳
Soo happy :')
Amazing start.. can't wait for Kiya n piddi's entry!
Update ASAP ⭐️👏
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Originally posted by: priya_31

awesomee!!

update ASAP

thank u ..
I will update soon 😊
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Originally posted by: sneha02

Good start there...

Waiting for more... thanks for this.

thank s a lot ..
I am glad u like it ...
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Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice

Yaaay new ff🥳

Soo happy :')
Amazing start.. can't wait for Kiya n piddi's entry!
Update ASAP ⭐️👏

Thanks a lot ..
I am glad u like it ..
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PART 1

He was born to rule darkness ..
Her destiny dragged her in darkness ..

KD's POV

I was here at the place observing how same it is yet so changed .. When I heard the voice of my sister Bobby .. She came towards me and hugged ne and said " welcome back brother .. Ur finally at our home ..." I said " yes I am finally at my palace .. This time I will build my empire stonger than before and I am back to destroy dose werewolves .." I heard her sigh and she said " can't u leave this revenge thing I mean wats the use of war now wats gone is gone .. Damage has already been made I don't see any point to fight them .. In your absence we already had a deal now everything is at peace .. Vampires and Werewolves are in altogether different world .. " so this is my sister I wonder sometimes .. I said with a little high pitch " u can forget that coz u weren't the one who was laid in the coffin for more than a century with a dagger in ur heart ... Btw where is the heir of those wolves .." She again sighed and said " so if dats wat u want than okay and der heir no idea .. Samar said 20 years back queen had twins but the very next day they were no where to be found ..." What no where to be found I guess der is some another conspiracy behind this .. Peace treaty which my sister told about must be just an illusion .. I was snapped back from my thaught by bobby " and yeah I forgot to told u Miss Gujral and her brother will be here in 2 days for the business .. Remember our deal about factory .. It's a big deal for our company so can I expect that u will leave ur supernatural ways of life for some days .. " I smirked and said " u r forgetting sister I had done business in London too in humanly way ,yaa just two our business partner got to see my super speed but dats okay der memory was erased the very next moment .." I heard her chuckled and said " yaa Offcourse how can I forget the mighty vampire king can handle any situation .." I went to my room I know I have lot to think abt new business but my mind is still thinking about those heir .. Where can they be ??

IN MUMBAI

KIYA's POV
I have been working all night over this project .. After our Aunt's death before a year me and by brother Piddhi aka pratham have to run this whole Gujral business on our own and now dis is the first big deal from Desai group I am so very nervous about dis .. I looked at my necklace that I was wearing and held it and murmured I wish my parents and my aunt were here but unfortunately I have never seen my parents and now even lost my aunt .. Just when I was thinking this my twin entered my cabin running and almost banging the door .. I turned around and said " for once Piddhi try to enter my cabin in normal way " he frowned and said " I entered in my normal way .. " saying dis he sat on chair and laughed in his own funny style .. I smiled my brother always manages to make me smile even when I am at my worst mood which is almost everyday firstly the reason was only those nightmares abt some place nd wolves howling.. Don't know wats my connection to dat scary looking place and why I always feel weird energy surrounding me when it's full moon .. Even Piddhi is at same situation but he always makes our life cheerful by his positivity .. He said " Kiya so is ur presentation ready ?? My reports are ready ... " I said " yes so we r gng to Mussorie after two days .. Hope dis business is a success I mean I don't wanna let aunt down .. " he gave me a smile and said " we r gonna rock it .. Aunt will be proud of us .. " I smiled and than he continued " don't u worry sis I know u always make a mess but it's okay ur smarty bro is always there to take care of u ..." Saying dis he laughed .. I gave him " stop bluffing look " and hit his arm and as usual our silly fights continued ..


Precap : Kisha first meet ...

So here is part 1 .. Hope it's okay ... Waiting for the reviews ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh wow...kiya n piddi as bro sis..TWINS...they hv cute bonding 😆😆
bobby is playing a responsible sister...exited to how what KD❤️ ll react when he came to knw abt kiya n piddi's reality...m sure he ll fall in love with kiya by than..😃😃😃.really an awesome update...ll b waiting fr the next part...😊

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