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Posted: 18 years ago
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since i saw the promo and chinu's article. a story started forming in my mind and i though i'll share it with u guys. hope u all like it. if not plz dont throw andas and tomatoes at me😆

saagar is about to leave vidya crying in that hill station house when heavy rainfall starts. saagar tries to go but the rain is just not stopping. saagar then decides to go anyways but on going out, he finds that his car has broken down. he has no choice but to go back in the house. he goes inside and sees that vidya is still crying; he keeps telling himself that he doesnt love her, she is cannot accept her, then y does his heart ache when he sees her crying?

he goes and sits next to her; suddenly their is a loud thunder and vidya gets scared and hugs saagar. saagar instinctively hugs her back and tries to pacify her..

and.......................(promo)

next morning vidya wakes up smiling. she is sure that saagar has changed his mind and they have taken their relationship furhter. she has new hopes about the future and feels very happy. she sees saagar standing by the window and goes to him.

without looking at her, saagar says whatever happened was a mistake. circumstances made them do this mistake. they both know that they are not made for each other. this is the end of their relationship.

vidya is completely shattered. she cant believe what she just heard. after all this, saagar is still saying that they have no relationship with each other?

vidya has had enough; she started to pack her things up vigorously. she didnt know if she was hurt or was it anger; all she knew was that she had to get out of the place in which stood this man; the man whom she took to be her husband, her everything; n now who seemed like a stranger to her....

will continue............

saagar wanted to say something; but his mouth had gone numb. vidya was going and this is what he wanted, he kept telling himself.

vidya went to the singh mansion for the one last time. she told her mom to come with her. she gave her kasam to everyone to not to ask her any questions. she said she is going and it isnt saagar's fault. as she is going, chinu stops her. he says he wont ask her anything but he will come with her along with shalu. vidya is shocked. she starts to say soemthing but chinu stops her, he says until ram doesnt come to take his sita; this lakshman will be with her.

chinu, shalu, vidya n her mom leave while everyone watches tearfully; sindoora smirks...........

time is passing by. saagar is slowly realizing what vidya meant to him. he tries to take her off his mind. he keeps recollecting all the time he spent with her and all the things bharat told him tht happened while he was not normal; she had even went to jail for him his conscience kept telling him.

more time passed and he was unable to take vidya out of his mind; her smile, her innocence, her simplicity, her beauty; could he be falling in love with her? sindoora kept bringing proposals for him n he kept brushing them off. one day when saagar came home he saw a girl n her parents sitting. sin came n introduced them to saagar. saagar lost control. he shouted at her saying tht he cant marry tht girl. sin shouts back asking him the reason. saagar says "because i m already married and i love vidya". shocked at his own confession saagar just goes out.

saagar tries to find vidya but to no avail. he has faith that one day she will come back n he will bend down on his knees and ask for forgiveness and express his love.

meanwhile saagar has to go to meet the CEO of a big company to strike a very imp deal. His company had not been doing very well, but he has faith that once he gets this deal, his company will reach new heights. This was the reason he was going himself to make sure nothing goes rong.

He reaches the office and asks to meet the CEO as he had an appointment………

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THiNKiN OF YOU thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats very nice!!!
👏
i juss hope it dosent happen 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats's awesum it would be excitin if it happened 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

thats very nice!!!
👏
i juss hope it dosent happen 😆

read the next part when i post it, m sure u'll like it.😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome, plz continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey this is great. I do hope you will continue on with this story..
Good job.. and keep it up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great thankx alot for sharing ur thoughts.....hope what u say comes true cant wait to watch it....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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.......and then this CEO turns out to be Vidya. 😳 😳 Good fantasy. I think writers will play this story at more realistic level and that's ok.

I want vidya to leave this moron and join some school.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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veryyy nice....i wish this CEO is Chinu...w/ his new makeover...and Vidya is also with him...plsss continue soon....:D

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