~A rose sans thorns~ A Randhir drabble - Page 2

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

I try to bury your memories six feet under,

but it surfaces through my soul leaving it asunder.

^^^ these lines.. by God!

beautifully written..

After a long time i read a work where i had to refer a dictionary.I'm glad i learnt 4 new words today.

Apart from that you portrayed the emotions very well Trups..

I simply loved it.

And the last scene,, it made me emotional.

Perfect ending to the drabble.

Originally posted by: Anamika2692001

Awesome! Loved it! :)

Hi!that was really nice!sry for reading it after so long..but it depicts his pain and suffering so well..him playing along so that he could know how it feels to be loved..so heart wrenching n so amazingly written!!please write an os on his present situation also..he is in so much pain even now.

Originally posted by: ritul19

Hi!that was really nice!sry for reading it after so long..but it depicts his pain and suffering so well..him playing along so that he could know how it feels to be loved..so heart wrenching n so amazingly written!!please write an os on his present situation also..he is in so much pain even now.