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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

BEAUTIFUL...!!!

That was beautiful...I loved it...I felt like a was reading something that is well thought and written so well...I love the way you have wrote it...I love the way you have used Hindi/urdu...It does give it a deep meaning...I love you POV of relationships and how you used "Chai" to explain it...Simply beautiful that was...😳

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Nams

@..nams..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Thank You everyone for your likes and comments. it makes me glee 😳

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nice OS
Love the concept
Even though I don't drink tea or any hot drink but still amazing
Beautifully written.

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Aisha

@RandhirHolic

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This was so nice!

Simple yet so unique ...The philosophical part of it is actually so true and it fits the plot perfectly :)

Well Written :)

Love

Aisha😳😳

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rainysandhu

@rainysandhu

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

must say...awesome os..

u r an awesome writer 😊😊

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Sush

@Sushie05

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

omg! that was so good.

that is such a different style of writing.. i can't wait to read more of your stuff...😳

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girivanam

@girivanam

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Nicely written, nams. I have great affinity to coffee and I think that must have pulled me to this 'chai' story of yours😃. It was very nice and I could visualise the characters in the balconey, kitchen, jogging/walking track... from your description. I had slight difficulty with the hinglish😳 part, but managed😃.

Now I see you have a story on coffee date also. I will go there before others😊

Edited by girivanam - 10 years ago