~Koi Khalish Hai Hawaon Mein Bin Tere : IshRa SS~ Note Pg 9

Introduction

He was spoilt, irresponsible and self centered; a complete brat who had been pampered by all in his family.

She was an independent yet responsible girl who respected all; whether young or old. Irrespective of being an orphan with none to support her through the hardships of life.

The two met and exchanged unsaid feelings. This makes for an interesting blend of romance, emotions and learning to appreciate the value of loved one's. I hope to create a story that is refreshing and new for people of all ages: children, teenagers, young adults and even the elderly. So sit back and enjoy. This is my personal ode to the love story of IshRa.

I'm waiting for your views so please don't just like, comments are also welcome. My SS is a blend of a few Hindi films...!



Part 1 On Page 2

Part 2 On Page 4

Part 3 On Page 5

Part 4 On Page 7

sounds interesting - looking forward to reading it!

wow..

interesting
do continue
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very intrstng...

Nobody is interested it seems????

Originally posted by: umeirah02

Nobody is interested it seems????

dear its nthng lyk tat. jst post 1 or 2 parts nd intrest himslf b devloped. waiting for update.

Great stay..

Originally posted by: aarohi26

dear its nthng lyk tat. jst post 1 or 2 parts nd intrest himslf b devloped. waiting for update.

Thank you, thank you so much for your kind words!!

He felt emptiness engulfing him from all four ends... Life seemed to be slipping away...!! Yet his desperation to reach and make the most out of the opportunity that befell his way wanted him to step forward, forgetting that one person who, in such a short span of time, understood him better than himself! After all, it was a childhood dream and he could go to any extent to fulfil it.

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He was a care free young lad unaware of the world's ways. All which mattered to him, all along, was that one dream, which in many respects, meant the world to him!
He had all the luxuries of the world but nothing could quench that thirst; even at the cost of his family...

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His selfishness and her selflessness had led him to where, he thought, he belonged!!!
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They met exchanged glances and within no time an uncalled feeling paved it's way into her heart. Perhaps, not only her, also him! Yet their reluctance and hesitation could never bring the words to her mouth...
Well was it only reluctance and hesitance or was there a lot more to her side of the story?
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It was the night his sister's wedding got over. They were merrily chattering the night away when he suddenly broke the news to her. At first she was taken aback; why had he told her: how did it even matter. She was but a mere friend of his sister. Yet delving deep, she meant a lot more to him than just his sister's friend. This fact only his unconscious mind and heart knew!!

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The feeling their mouths were afraid to voice; their hearts were screeching out...!! Yet they were left unaware or was it just their concern for one another; that which had nurtured through time...?

Lovely readers, so this was part one (edited). I had made a start yet as a writer didn't quite feel that my piece was up to high standards. I'm hopeful you'll appreciate my efforts and shower positive remarks. I'll carry on as per your reviews. 😉