||Rishbala SS- Operation Love|| Completed! [04/01] - Page 52

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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks Shreya 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: momi78

Fabulous update full of suspense! Please don't kill RK.



Thanks momi
I won't 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalu1786

Nice update.
Sultan is dead.



Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Read all the 8 chapters in one go, beautiful story and you write brilliantly, Sultan dead, waiting for their confession, love the pic that you have used.



Thank you so much
Glad you are liking it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

<font color="#0000FF" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Nice update Meghna!
Luck by chance RK cut right wire & saved Madhu😆 Then action drama, sultan died, but RK got injured! She took him to his favorite place hospital😆
waiting for the next update! </font>



Thank you swati 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk

Res Unres

Yay!!! I'm 1st ...Oh yeah, Oh yeah, Oh yeah...😆😆😆
See I left all of the others in this ss...😆😆
I came 3rd in PWF and DK isn't that great. ...😆

Meghu ...Meghu what to tell you always steal my heart in all your stories...This update was just fabulous. ..Awesome. ...and...etc...etc. ..etc...I just don't have words to describe🤣

Madhu you are a very strong girl😃I just over the way u had confidence in ur Rk.
Rk ...man what to tell about you Mr. RAW agent I am really at loss of words to tell you. I didn't care about the wire which you were gonna remove but I was scared that Sullu might do something to you Rk.
From the start till the end I was so...badly thrilled. I was really laughing hard that Sullu ullu died such a death.The way he fell with a thud and those 2 bullet shots...🤣🤣

Meghu what is this huh? You left me in a cliff hanger😲
My Rk became unconscious. ..too...bad...and while becoming unconsious also he told Madhu.
What a scene!!!😆

Tfs for pm but I came before pm..😆



Congrats on getting first shriya 🥳
How many hearts have I stole of yours? 🤣
Sullu Ullu got the most pathetic drath in my opinion...two bullets and then down 🤣
Cliffhangers are my thing...I seem to make them a lot lately 🤣
Welcome for the PM that served you no purpose whatsoever 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

reserved..u r testing my patience.. Update soon😡

oh shit. I missed it. But still i won d race. I came 1st one time & 2nd two times which no one could do not even ni, dhri & cry baby lubs lol.

now i ll go have my dinner then i ll read & Comment. U made me wait for hours so now u wait. Bye!

unres..
fabulous update meg. Loved it.👏👏
feels like i was watching an action movie with less action lol.😆😆
uff...let me take a breathe in relief lol😆😆. Yes, finally CHAMP is safe but little weak never mind feed him well soon he will get back to normal.
as i said pricess found champ before rk finds madhu lol.
he is one dumb soldier lol.😆😆
at that bomb scene i was shouting come on man whatever wire u cut that will be d right one & U two will never explode lol..😆😆.
whats the most funny thing in this part was sultan lol.😆😆
did he got up after eating two bullets to get a head shot operation? Lol.😆😆
may be he was so in pain but that aimless rk was more into operation love instead of killing him lol so he wanted to avenge rk before his death by shooting him on somewhere u didnt mention clearly but just we know it was nothing serious as our rk himself told that the bullet only torn is shirt not his flesh lol..😆😆
so next update "sasural Rk ka" Lol. Hospital yatra on d way. Great to read that bcos madhu will be taking care of him fully forgetting abt champ & Both love birds will romance & Champ & Princess will give d result first before rishbala lol as ni is eagerly waiting for a puppy... Name d puppy as champri lol.😆😆
waiting for next mass update eagerly but i dont next time i can read & Comment on time due to d reason which u knew. Lets see...😳😳
no thanks for pm lol😆
2nd to comment...😛😛



Would've update sooner if my threads didn't get spammed 🤣you still won the race sudha... 😆
You can't have an action movie without less action 🤣
As long as champ and Princess are oaky...screw the rest of the world 🤣
They could explode if I began to think like Ni...🤣
Sultan met his death in the form of two bullets...really pathetic for a terrorist 🤣
RKs sasural...I had to include that 🤣 Now finally some romance in this story 🤣
Champ and Princess will have puppies...the names you already know 😆
Welcome for the pm sudha
Hope you can read updates on Sunday...well just have to see 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago


Chapter 9
(Madhu's POV)

RK had been rushed into the operating room. I was holding his hand until they took him inside. His blood was smeared on my hands. Tears filled my eyes. The nurse came up to me with the formalities...but I ignored her and sat down on the chair right next to the operating room. She followed me, shoving the clipboard in front of my face. I was about to take it when suddenly another hand came in a took it from me. I looked up. Mukund.

"I'll take care of this nurse." He shooed her away after quickly filling the form.

He sat down next to me and put his hand on my shoulder.

"He'll be alright Madhu...he's a fighter." He assured me. But my tears failed to stop.

A nurse ran out and went back inside, bringing a metal tray inside with her. I curled up into a ball on the chair, my face buried in my knees. No one else had come out in the coming minutes.

My heart longed for him...I didn't know what I would do without him. I needed him by my side...always. I turned to Mukund.

"RK...he will be alright na? He has to...for me." I said.

"He will be fine Madhu...relax." He offered me a glass of water. I shook my head. I didn't want anything.

The doctor came out a while later...I got up and rushed to him.

"Doctor...how is RK? Is he alright?!" I frantically asked.

"He is not completely out of danger yet...but yes his condition is improving." He maneuvered around me and walked away. I stood there silently...my eyes dry from crying. I wanted to go inside, to see him. I stood at the doorway of the room, wanting to go inside but not able to. Mukund brought me back to the chair before I went inside. He shook his head. I watched the door with heavy eyes, waiting for someone to tell me that he is alright.

An hour passed before the doctor informed me that RK was in a stable condition. I immediately got up, the smile returning to my face. Tears of joy ran down my cheeks.

"Please, only one person at a time can see him." The doctor said. Mukund signaled me to go first. I stepped inside the ward RK was shifted to.

(RK's POV)

I heard the door slowly open. I cocked my head to the side slightly. Madhu stepped inside, her eyes red and puffy from crying. I tried to get up, but my side screamed bloody murder and forcibly put me down. The nurse rushed to my side, but I ushered her away.

Madhu quickly reached my bedside and cupped my face with her soft hands. Her expression was a sign of worry.

"Are you okay RK?! You scared me so much!" She said frantically. I held her hands in mine.

"I'm fine Madhu..." I said. "Calm down.."

She wiped the fresh tears that fell from her eyes and ran her fingers through my hair. Her gaze reflected a whole new emotion, one that was clearly visible to me.

We stayed near each other in a heartfelt silence. Soon the doctor emerged inside with Mukund. He came over with some papers.

"Mr.Kundra...you are recovering quite quickly than we expected. We just need to keep you under observation for another 24 hours, and if everything is fine, you may go home." He said, then handing the papers to Mukund.

"Thanks doctor.." I said. He smiled and left with the nurse.

"I'll leave you two alone." Mukund said, taking steps back towards the door.

I turned my attention back towards Madhu, who now had a small sparkle in her eyes. She leaned in closer to me, her face just a few inches away from mine. I could feel her heart thumping against her chest. My arm circled around her waist, which surprised her and myself. I pulled her closer to me, until our lips were barely touching. In an instant, our lips met each other. It was a gentle, emotion filled kiss. Nothing else existed in the world surrounding us. It was just Madhu and I. I sucked on her pink lips until both of us ran out of breath. She leaned in again and whispered something quietly into my ear.

"I want to tell you something." She said.

"What?" I asked.

"I'll tell you once we get home." She said.
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[B]Next Mass update: Jan. 4th 2015
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Posted: 10 years ago
resss
Unres.😆

Volah See Meghu I came 1st...so it's party time for me no it's trible party time because I came ist in all your stories🤣 When I was roaming in the forum I saw OL 55 seconds ago by Abhiya4life so I went and checked and Viola I saw you ressed and I ressed...😆

Coming to the Update 😉
OMG!My Rk is at last safe and yes Karan My Rk not that Mdabala's Rk😆 is safe from danger.
My RAW agent I was crying in my heart for you to be safe not like that Madbala was crying literally😆
I just wished I was in that Madbala's place I would have kissed you so...so...so...passionately..😆
Actually Meghu I noticed a thing in OL ,PWF and DK you have given a lot of kisses for My Rk and that Madbala at least Meghu in one story couldn't you put me instead of that Madbala for kissing Rk🤣

I made a song for myself and Rk

KKKisss...Miss...
KKKisss...Miss
KKKISS MISS 2x 🤣

Now My poor Jaan Rk suffered a lot..so now and no suffering only Happiness...😆
Actually Meghu if you would have sent Rk to me I would have given him happiness from starting🤣
I know What this Madbala wants to say to RK🤣
But before her I'm telling You Rk That "I LOVE YOU!"

After this a happy ending and Oh...my god! I totally forgot about Princess and Champ😆
I know even their Lovestory started and only one thing is left that is pupppies🤣

No Thank you for pm Meghu!🤣

Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my. Even in my trip i managed to come third..great.😆
okay, now to d update.
super update meg. 👏
loved it...😛
haha..this rk woke up even without smelling amonia lol or u didnt mention it this time? Lol😆
i thought this update will be more of rona dona & It will take at least one more update for rk to get back to normal & I could to see some hospital romance but what to do our soldier is so strong got well in hours & Our terrorist sullu is so weak got dead in two bullets lol😆
if i liked sullu's quick death more then i shld love rk's quick recovery too... 😆come on rk just jumb out of d bed & Run fast to ur house bcos madhu is abt to say something but she will tell only at home bcos there is an unwritten rule not to confess in hospital & U shld so do only when te hero dies so that he can miraculously come alive lol but in this case u r already well so no such medical miracle shoching drama & No such confessions lol...what could be it? I love u, rk?...nah., What else could be it? Surely its abt marriage talk... Yes, madhu wanna ask princess hand to champ lol.😆 so marriage on cards for champ & Princess..😆 If u delay in recovering rk then u will get puppy in ur hand lol..
okay, jokes apart..is she gonna confess her love for him?😳 If so i m happy & Looking forward to it.
thanks for d pm.
sorry for d delay & I will make sure i ll not make u wait again dear.


Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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