FIRST KISS STORY SEASON 2 part 8,part9,epilogue posted@66 on 19.1.15 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta


UPDATING..IN NEXT FEW HOURS..


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i was waiting for ur comment..😆
updating now
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Guys the comments and likes are really very precious to me..to please kanjoosi mat karo..!!!

PART 3

Mk assembled all the information about GEETIKA HANDA..She was a First year student...And he was a second year student..

He ran back home got changed..and left for college.

He hunt her everywhere..but there was no sigh of her...with the help of Facebook now he knws what she looked like... He was completely bolted from the blue with the fact that he kissed a nave girl like her.

Nave girl??? Rohan mocked...raising his brow

Maan chuckled...wildly..sipping his coffee

Yea...well he just saw her snap so now he was double guilty..feeling terrible that he kissed a Indian girl who seems so...meek ...

*******

Finally he spotted her entering the library..

He took a deep breath..and went behind her..

There she was in the science section selecting some books..

He straightened himself..and took a step towards her..

His heart was pacing wildly..he was just a centimeter away from her back..when she unexpectedly tuned...

His sudden presence startled her..and She wobbled..shakily falling on him...

" ahhh" She shrieked...trying to stable her self...

MK gripped her waist and pulled her to himself...

Geetika was still in a state of shock...she was screaming Thus Mk plastered her back on the wall..and placed his palm on her mouth..

Feeling a something warm on her lips...she snapped opened eyes...and found Mk before her..

Mk blinked his eyes...gazing those hazels for the second time.. even in those specs he could feel their beauty..

Ummm she mumbled...

Gaining no response..from him...She bit his palm..

Oww....Mk yelped in pain shaking his hand..

" u dinosaur how dare u...repeat ur actions... " she fumed..her hazels turned glazed in fire

"woh..i..actually..." he gulped...looking down.." i dint "

Geetika rudely cut him off..

" what tell me..i know.. guys like u ..wait ..u .u r Indian na..." she scanned him from top to bottom..

" chi chi Indian hokar ...indian k sath hi..itna ghatiya prank karte hue sharam nahi ati.."

[u r Indian na..arent u ashamed of urself..doing such a prank on me]

" u..u.." She pointed her finger at him..Mk swallowed hard..Stumbling behind...as she stepped ahead..

" tum ne..mujhe.." she made a sad face...[u...did that]

" don't u ever feel bad..ki...tum sab logo k wajah se mujhe kaisa lagta hoga.." She said in a teary voice..[don't u guys feel bad that how much ur actions and pranks hurts me..]

MK nodded fearfully entirely unaware of what she was saying..

She wiped her tear from the corner of her eyes...

" i don't care what u guys think of me..I don't care samjhe.." She howled at him..

MK dint implicit a word she uttered but her eyes..screamed her vulnerability

MK's expressions changed from fear to guilt..

" look..I..i..dint.."

Geetika raised her hand..to stop him..

She composed herself...looking direct in his eyes with all her self esteem..

" I..i cant complain...about u ..but that dosent mean i i will forgive u ...i m not bothered what u guys feel about me..i m here to study thats all i care.."

With that she walked out grabbing her books..

*****

Honesty i felt a bit awful for that girl..

Maan smiled sadly and nodded...Sometimes our appearances matter so much that people don't even try to go beyond our outer persona

Thats true...then what happened...

Well then mK did a bit more researched about her and came to knw..how she was troubled by the students at the university..Badly ragged by everyone..she was a scholarship student...a bit geeky..hence everyone made fun of her..she hardly had any friends...

Ohh..Rohan murmured

then?

Mk realized that the girl was really distressed..plus his actions only troubled her more..and for a inidan girl a kiss was unquestionably a big deal..So he followed her everywhere...to her class..in library her way to hostel..everywhere..

He would smile at her when she glared him...In fact she sent sorry cards...and what not to manofy her..i mean to ask forgiveness...But nothing melted her..

Then...

One day in their chemistry lab...

******

Geetika was performing the practicals alone...each student had a partner but she had none..

Professor was busy in his world...Mk was watching her through the window..It was his daily routine..he just hoped that one way she would forgive him...

She was effortlessly doing her job...whilst one of a classmate planned a prank on her..

They mixed some of the..chemicals and decided to pour that mixture on her...

Before that guy could execute this..MK arrived on time and grasped his hand..

"what the hell were u planning to do ..huh how dare u..."Mk said gritting his teeth..

Geetika frowned spinning back...

Mk grabbed the mixture from that guy's hand..and glowered at him..tightening his jaws..

Geetika grasped loudly noticing the mixture in his hand..Her heart almost churned in fear..

" uhhh...hey dude..its nothing.." the guy tried shoving of mk's hand feeling intimidate by his look

Her hands grew cold and sweaty ...as she glanced Mk and her classmate..

Mk tossed the test tube on the ground..gripping his hand tightly..

" don't ever try to mess with her...never...ever..got that or else..." he spoke roughly..His one look was enough to scare the hell out of that guy..he a furious glare to all the others who stood there quietly gaping...the whole scene..

The guy nodded...frightened..

Mk strolled to geetika...clasped her hand...and walked out..

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Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pehlay to I m first 🥳
What should I say abt story yaar ..amazing ... So main followed her awww😳 and she was being ragged ... He saved her from chemical 😉 ..waiting for next 😛😛
Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m first feeling proud 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta


i was waiting for ur comment..😆
updating now

that's so sweet of y 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
grt part...loved it...

geet is like......ab nhi khurana...n maan ...mujh kissi nhi mili...

n thn as hero maan save geet becm her savior ......ready to fight fr geet


loving geet expressn here...may b urs too😆😆
Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Just Stunning Update

Maan got scared of Geetika but later found out that she had been ragged and students trouble her , so he took the liberty to follow her
everywhere to seek forgiveness but Geetika did not melt until one day
he saves her in her lab and scolds her class mate
now I'm eagerly anxiously waiting to see what does Geetika do to Maan

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okkk finallly me getting to comment on dis thanks dat u updated dis nw
Seriously uplifted my mood more
Kal IF ne mera mood barbad kiya n was nt able to read or like or comment
Aur aaj pwd aur mere mood ne hi sab spoil kiya
Anyways enough of my bak bak
Nw back to story
My first reaction was like wat d hell divorce jhatka laga ki maaneet divorce den i was like nahi maan k dialogues toh blue mein hote hai so i got relieved 😆 so clever of me na
Okkk 1st b4 started reading dis story i thot dat dis going to b d same as 1 only diff wud d pov but i m glad ki u did'nt do dat coz phir sab same ho jata no fun in reading phir toh
Cool convo b/w maan n rohan both struck at der views experiences n pov's
But i must experience speaks a lot n maan is a lot experienced he easily caught that rohan still cares n worried abt his wife
Ahaaan excited to knw abt maan n geet's love story
Again i c dis one is reallly reallly difff frm all ur other works
Dats wat makes ur writing unique n special
Feel sad for geet her life so saddy saddy
But no worries wen maan is here
Kinda true geeky logo k saath yahi hota hai i ve seen dese a lot even if der is no fault of ders
Wowww maan so cool yaar aise lifestyle k baad bhi his views abt girls his respect for dem hats offf man love dis man a lot
Mere pooore dream man ka description de diya yaar tumne expect d drinking thing 🤣
Even i knew a guy like totallly similar
N d sad part is i hate him so much still respect a lot n can't forget dat person kash bhool pati😒
Loved wen maan tried explaining abt his pov abt girls to his frnds but kamine toh kamine hi rahenge
Oooppsss totally talli
Finallly met his dream girl honey brown eyes said u i respect dis guy a lot
Aankhon mein kho gaya 😆
Lolllzz geet bichari ki chutney ho jayegi dinosaur🤣
Cracked me up
Hawww kiss taali state mein yeh toh gaya kaam se
Aacha hua dupata aur book choot gaya warna maan toh saachi mein dhoondta reh jata apne sapno ki rani ko
Grt ya impressive presence of mind facebook ka sahi use full details out loll dats me i do dat usually
Expected outburst frm geet bichari aur kare bhi toh kya
Again full details i c love at first sight ho gaya maan ko bas realisation baaki hai
So sweeet of him still following her to ask forgiveness aaj k zamane mein kon aisa hota hai dats y i love him
Omg heights of prank yaar nw geet shudve punched dat guy wanna c sherni
Ufff bacha liya maan ne
Kash dono ek class mein hote
Romantic story aur romantic hoti ❤️ still no worries clg romance ho hi sakta hai
Ahaaan highlight d warning shayad d guy got his msg nt to mess with geet anymore maan jo hai sath
Wow wow wow finale wala highlight haq se haath pakad le gaya 😳👏
No words left to appreciate yaar me running out of words
U knw i love u
Keep going babes u rockkk
🤗

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