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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
What sorcery is this? What amazingness is this? You've left me breathless with your words.
Each scene so beautiful, I could picture it.

Thanks Mais for making my day better with your lovely words :')

-edited because mais said this comment sucked 😭-

But sometimes, just sometimes, during their fleeting goodnight kisses or warm pecks of morning wishes, he would have this sudden realization that the tiny girl in his arms was all his, wholly and irrevocably, inside and out, she was all his by her own will.

THIS. Gosh, how beautiful are these words. So perfect. And that's it isn't it? They'll away love so deeply that they'll stun themselves. They will always fall more in love with each other, every day.

Realization and talks and coffees come much later..

Love. It was about love. They don't shy away from physical contact, it's a part of love for them. Being with each other, it gives them peace, it just feels right.

They make a rather interesting picture for her Chachi to find, all his tall limbs sprawled uncomfortably and her tiny self snuggled close to him, both of them dozing off on the couch of her living room without a care in the world

This made me smile so much. That image. His legs hanging of, she snuggling up to him.. Definitely something that's just so MaNan.

Their eyes locked with each other like it happens in those sappy romantic novels but they didn't care about them. Their friends would.Mukti would see him and facepalm at her friend's uncool actions while Cabir would awww over it and record it all in his camera. Navya would witness the scene and just because she could,

GHA. Perfection. Ofc the rest would react like that. Ofc even a brief eye contact is something far more for MaNan. They can have whole conversations, or perhaps say nothing at all, just with their eyes.

The year was basically just 365 days without touching her, 8760 hours without seeing her face, 525,600 minutes without playing with her hair...oh god, it was an eternity for him.

For two people to whom touch means so much, to be apart for so long... Ofc he would know how long, right down to the second, that they were apart.

It's never a smooth ride with them, the bumps come from everywhere but they never let go of each other's hand.

THIS. This is what it's about. They learn. They grow. They make mistakes. They fall more in love. They aren't picture perfect, they may even seem like a train wreck.. but it's their picture and their wreck and it's perfect for them. That's how they work... f*ck up's included.


Edited by Firebolt - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
You Mashaallah are such a gifted writer
This was absolutely sheer piece brilliance and excellence
Beautifully written Mais ...and I just had littel tears reading at their definition of love..the small cute yet important moments of their life
God bless you 🤗
Keep writing okay?
Edited by -MKB- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
OMG!
When did I not see this before!
This was breathtaking...your words
*fangirl alert*
I could actually vividly envision each and every scene you described...the feels, the nuances, the individual thoughts and those little gestures of love and tenderness coupled with those 'looks' you describe...it was a wonderful, wonderful read!
The whole thing was love...chachi finding them sprawled on the couch, them just existing in their own little bubble, those little victories and the hug that conveys it all...uff, the feels!
Edited by medha16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Res..
Omma get me a Manik. Please. I want him ab 😭

This be ❤️

Remind me to unres this and gaze after 30th 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
I have no words to praise the beauty of this post.so good
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26


  • Leaning their foreheads together, completely out of breath after a long kiss..
First of all, everything you've written here, everything is so so beautiful and so deep and riveting in a way that I do not even know how to describe how it makes me feel. It's not just so thoughtful but the sweetness is so deep and touching that you feel it in your heart and you feel their intensity and the bond they share. Of how much they mean to one another. Secondly, OMFG THIS IS SUCH A GREAT GREAT COMPILATION PARTNER. Like you already know what a great great fan of your writing I'm. It's not the words you use only but how you use them and how you write these deep felt sentences choking of some heavy yet serene emotion and you make me feel so many things together asjndasmv! Thirdly, OMFG I WANT TO KILL YOU. COS THIS IS SUCH A FAVORITE FAVORITE AND I'LL BE READING IT SO SO MANY TIMES and cos omfg now i want the BG/GF PHASE SO SOOO BADLY! Even when i know right now's not the time but urgh you made me want it so so badly :((

and how you chose random scenes to write on and showed so much in just lying together and glimpses is LOVEE. THIS IDEA IS LOVE. MY PARTNER BE SUCH A GENIUS!
Let's start with the first one. Imma put the dirtiness out of it LMAAO. That was reserved for fb. I loveedd this. It's just so pure and serene and so so deep. How you explained them lying together quietly, saying nothing but yet so so much being conveyed. The loving way he's staring at the adorable "tiny" girl. I loved the way you used tiny, made me imagine them and it was so sooo cuteee and made me go awww at my manan. their height difference is so cute and makes them manan <33 and you explained that part so cutely, that little baby lying in his arms and he staring at her like she's all his world and that kiss conveying just that, how much he loves her, how much she means to him, she's his whole life. and so much said and yet never said <33 OOOHH MAN MYYY FEEELS. I DIES.


  • Waking up together after their first time..

OH THISSS <33 How is it possible to make sleeping bodies look so beautiful? How do you even? LIKE IDEK WHAT TO SAY. You described it all so soo perfectly partner, the serenity, the bond they share, the bliss of it all, i swear ive been smiling so so much reading all of it throughout <33 my manan be sooo special, and just with a few simple words you gave us such a deep insight in their beautiful and so full of love relationship <33 aaah. AAAH. THIS BE SO. And her eyes on him and his peaceful sleeping form made me go jasnmakjmdcf and the last lines. *YES IM CENSORING ALL THE DIRTY STUFF. DEKH KITNI ACHHI HOON MAIN.* LMAAO.

  • Falling asleep on the couch..


OKay so I've to say that this one is my most most favorite one ever. I READ IT LIKE KITNI BAAR PATANAHI. This one and the one below it cos it has mukti and cabir too, EEE. BUT I LOVEEE THIS ONE SO MUCH. Like I always wanted to read something like this. HOW HOW CUTE IS THIS? Like I couldn't stop smiling at all and so so so welldone with this one Partner. It gave me such big manan feels and it was soo Manik and Nandini and there was so so much said in a few lines. Her watching that stars documentary cos he loves starts. Firstly them being on the couch is just LOVEEE. the way you described his long limbs tangled with her short ones and both of them on one couch EEE GOSH I FANGIRL SO BADLY KE JIS KI KOI HADD NAHI AND THIS BE SUCH A FAV KE USKI BHI KOI HADD NAHI ^^^ askmasklm and omfg my nandu be so cute here and how adorbs was manik watching it for her and watching her and then falling asleep and then nandu falling asleep on him. LIKE AWWW AAAH I FANGIRLS SO BADLY AND DIES!! And the way you explained their positions awwwh. mere babies. eeeks. this is so so well written and thought partner. ^^ your words have such a magic man and you've the skills <33


  • staring at each other from across the room like the lovestruck idiots they are..


This is such a close close favorite. 0.1 difference LMFAO. I LOVEEE THIS SO MUCH. HOW ADORABLE IS THIS ONE? Partner you've given me so much manan bf/gf phase feels that it's SOO NOT FAIR :(( ufdmdflkm. I always wanted to see the science wali nandu and music indulged manik and eeeks, how can this be any better? REminded me of that "im not your fan" "Toh kya ho?" and their eyelocks. my manan will have the best adorable lovey eyelocks EVEERRR And i'd be soo like cabir eee. mera monster hulk all lovey dovey for his nandini and with his nandini, EEE. And the way you pointed out how music be his first priority and her science for him and they didn't have to be sitting together. it was just in the way they looked at eachother. Just an eyelock but so soo powerful and so so meaningful and EEE MERAA LOVESTRUCK MANIK. Can't get over it okay :| and cabir, navya and mukti were such a delightful, colorful addition to this ^^ I WANT TO BADLY SEE THIS MAN, BAS!


  • meeting again after being separated for a year..
EEE THIS ^^ *gutter mind deactivates* TUNE MERI MANAN KO 365 DAYS KE LIYE SEPARATE KIYA :| you :|
AAH BUT THIS WAS SO. You explained his feelings so perffly partner. the impatience, the wait, the anxiety, the uncontrollable need to see her. Everything was so spot on and you actually made us feel it and when he finally saw her, and he froze <33 that said so much on its own. AND EEE THEIR HUG AND THAT KISS MADE ME GO SO AWWW. YOU GIVING ME SUCH HARDCORE MANAN FEELS KAMEENI. <33
SUITCASE CHORDI ;O I totally shutsup :X


  • being incredibly, absolutely, blissfully happy..


It doesn't come easy for them, being together. It's hard work and patience and they are stubborn and impatient. They fight and struggle but still stick with each other. Because they grow everyday.


^^ THIS PARTNER. IT'S SO SO MANAN ISN'T IT. THESE LINES HIT HOME SO HARD AND MAKE OUR MANAN OUR MANAN <33 They'll have such a beautiful beautiful relationship ^^ ahh man you give me so many feels. the conclusion was so sooo perff Partner and left me with such a goofy smile and tender heart and thankyou so much for this. now i'll dream :| kameeni |: AAH I CAN'T PRAISE THIS ENOUGH. Anonther great GREAAAT WORK OF YOURS AND ANOTHER FAV OF MINE! EEE. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. AND I LOVES YOU.

WRITE MOREEE <333



THANKYOU FOR MAKING ME DREAM AND DROOL SO MUCH :|

im such a goner now :|




Edited by MaybeSomeday... - 10 years ago

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