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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
geet is not ready to go with maan to ashram..
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part.. Geet nice answers to him..he always scold u.. Geet not ready to go with him to ashram..ab kya karoge MSK..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...Maan kitna gussa h Geet se...pata ni ashram jake kya karega Geet k sath...bt apni Geet b dabang h...hehehe. MSK se jara b ni drti...wating fr the nxt update...do it soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
i so love this geet...so gutsy and ready to stand up to maan..who is being very possessive of his brother's things...waiting to see her straighten up maan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 25

At the Aashram...

Maan and Geet enter the gate looking away from each other as they are still angry with each other...

And Maan is reminded of the past, he thinks of those happy days when he used to come here with his Bro and they had so much fun with these lovely children...

Everything has changed now...that's how Maan thinks...he hesitates to enter as he is not willing to go I without his Bro...

But the fact is that nothing has changed and the children here always keep smiling though they are also equally unfortunate as Maan...

All the children happily welcome Maan...

Geet looks at dadi and she is happy seeing the kids playing with their gifts and having fun in the sun...

Dadima is also looking happy...

Dadi: aayiye bete, ye log toh aapka hi intrezaar kar rahe hai

Geet goes and plays with them, she becomes one among them, she is still a kid at heart...

Maan looks at them playing with Vicky's things...vicky had a good collection of toys too...

One of the boys played a song with the guitar and the children started singing and dancing to the tunes...Maan keeps looking at them and his mood changes looking at their happy faces...

Caretaker: thank you very much Mr.Khurana, Vicky sir ke b'day ko isse achcha celebrate nahi kar sakthe, ye bache bahut kush hai aur kuch bache toh Vicky ko yaadh bhi karthe hai, woh hamesha aaise hi ayhan aake inke saath khelthe the, aur inko aksar gifts lakhe dethe the, unke jaane ke badh toh aap bhi yahan aana chod diye hai, achcha hua ab toh aapko inke yaadh aayi, Vicky sir bahut kush honge

Maan is surprised by this, but he is still not happy that he had to part with Vicky's things and the memories, he is happy that the children have found them useful and they needed them more than him

They have their lunch with the chidren and the children bring whatever they got from Vicky's collections and tell Maan how they loved those gifts from Vicky, they thank him and love him for he has become their gift uncle now...

Maan forgets his worries and plays with them for a while...Dadi is happy that she had finally brought back the real Maan...

Though Maan is happy for the children he is very upset that Dadi had given away vicky's things to them, if she had asked him he would have bought them new toys, he can't live without his Bro's cherished memories...and it's like taking away a part of his life...

After they return to KM Maan couldn't stop himself from asking dadi about this...

Maan: dadima

Dadi: haan bete

Dadi is very very happy...

Maan: ye achanak aapko aashram ki yaad kaise aayi?

Dadi: ye gifting ka idea toh Geet ka hi tha, humme bhi apne aashram ke bachon ki yaad aagayi, aapne dekha sab kitne kush the, hum toh aaj bahut kush hai bete

Maan: aap aaise kaise kar sakthe?

Dadi: kyun bete? Aap toh kush haina?

Maan: mein kaise kush ho saktha hoon?

Maan is very upset...he is hurt...but to heal some wounds you have to endure some pain...haina babaji?

Dadi: Maan bete

Dadi looks into his eyes...they are wet and Maan is broken...this is good, let him vent his pain out...

Maan: ye ladhki toh kuch nahi jaanthi hai, lekhin dadi ma aap toh sab jaanthe haina? Phir aap aaise kaise kar sakthe?

Dadi: hum aapko kitne din aaise dard mein dekh sakthe bete? Vicky mar chukka hai, lekhin aap. Aap abhi bhi zinda hai, aap ko hum kush dekhna chahthe hai

Maan: lekhin dadi ye karke aapne toh mere dard ko aur badathiya hai

Dadi: kuch chot ko teek karne ke liye thoda dard ko toh shena hi padtha bete

Maa: lekhin aapne ye teek nahi kiya hai dadima

So saying Maan leaves...

Dadi is upset that Maan has misunderstood her...

Geet: aap fikar mat kijiye Dadima, unko thoda waqt dijiye, woh aako zaroor samaj jayenge

Dadi: humme toh bahut dar lagtha hai bete

Geet: dadima, darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, aapki Geet haina aapke saath

Dadi: haan, aap hi hummare aakhri umeed hai

Geet: mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki aaisa kitne din chaltha?

But Maan stops talking with dadi too from that day...he never thought Dadi would forget Vicky like that...

Dadi ye sab bardast nahi kar pathe...woh toh toot gaye...

Geet waits for Maan to break his silence patienty but it's been a month since Maan talked to anyone at home, this is not good, and Geet can't tolerate this attitude, specially Maan's silence with dadima...

Dadima is the only person who has every right to decide anything for Maan, she knows what's the best for him, so Maan has to consider her wishes too, he can't keep blaming her like this, even she is grieving Vicky's loss, he is her potha, one who took care of her and Maan when they lost their family...

But Dadi didn't think that it's the end of her life, she stood strong for she had Maan to look after...

She hid all her pain and put a brave face just for Maan, but when Maan himself didn't understand her she lost all hopes and couldn't bear it any longer...

Geet thinks that one day Maan will realize his mistakes and come to dadi to apologize, but no there is no sign of that...Maan is becoming more devilish day by day, he is angry that Dadi joined hands with Geet and helped her even though dadi knew about Maan's love and affection for his big Bro and how he turned into a lifeless robot after Vicky left...

Geet keeps running after him and she had already apologized a hundred times for her mistakes...

She pleads to forgive her and not to punish Dad for Geet's mistakes...

But Maan keeps his ears shut and ignores her completely...

Geet is fed up with his attitude and she decides to ptu end to this...

One day Geet waits for Maan in his room and is ready to do anything for Dadi...

Maan comes and is unaware of Geet's presence...

When he goes to take his towel from his wardrobe Geet who was hiding behind the door closes the door and locks it from inside...

Maan hears the noise and is surprised to see Geet in his room...

Maan stares but Geet keeps coming forward...

Maan signals her to stop but she won't...

Maan tries to leave but Geet blocks his way...

Maan keeps staring her and is very angry...

Geet: aaise kya dkehthe ho? aaj toh aapko mere baat ko sunna hi padega, samjhe?

Maan: hat jao Geeet, warna

Maan ka gussa badthe jaatha...

Geet: warna kya karoge?

Geet dares...she steps ahead...

Maan pushes her and she falls down...

But she gets up on her own and looks straight into his eyes...

Maan has no escape now...he had to face her...

Geet: galthi toh mujhse hui na? toh aap mujhe koi bhi saza do, dadi ko kyun pareshaan karthe ho iss umar mein? Dadi ne jo kuch kiya hai mere kehne se hi kiya hai, issiliye sare galthi meri hai, aapko mujhse shikayat haina, toh mujhe saza do

Geet holds his hands and slaps herself...

Maan suddenly withdraws his hands...

He can never hurt a woman...it's against his principles...

But his silence is much more painful...he doesn't realize that...

Maan: ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: meinne galthi khi, mein hi galat hoon, maro mujhe, aur maro

Maan: tum toh pagal ho gayi ho

Geet: tappad se darn ahi lagtha hai Maan ji, aapke kamoshi se hi dar lagtha hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: ye salman ka dialogue hai, aapko kaise patha hoga?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap Dadi se baat kyun nahi karthe?

Maan: woh meri dadima hai, tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Geet: aap unko apna Dadi samajthe toh aaise nahi karthe

Maan thinks that she is right...may be Maan has gone too far this time...

He shouldn't have hurt dadi like this just b'coz of this stupid girl...

Maan keeps looking at Geet...

Geet: aapko mujhse problem haina? Mein aap se wada karthi hoon ki aaj ke badh mein aapko kabhi tang nahi karoongi, aur aap ko kabhi bhi pareshaan nahi karoongi, aur aap se baat bhi nahi karoongi, aur

Geet keeps thinking hard...

Geet: haan, aur aap ko aaise sawaal bhi nahi karoongi

She tries to remember if she had left anything else...

Geet: haan, koi bhi cheez pe haath mat lagaoongi, aur kuch?

Maan: bas bas, ho gayi, ye toh bahut achchi deal hai, kam se kam mujhe teri bak bak se toh chutkara milega

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab teri baat katam ho gayi hai ya nahi?

Geet: bas itna hi, toh aap Dadi se baat karenge, haina?

Geet still looks worried, Maan is surprised that she got attached to dadi so much in this short period, par Dadi hai hi aaise, itne pyaari dadi toh kissi ko bhi nahi milega, ab Maan ko apni galthi ka ehsaas hotha...'ye Maan ne kya kardhi? Dadi ko kitn bhura lagega? Iss ladhki se chaakr mein MSK ek se badkar ek galthi karth rehtha...

Maan: haan, mujhe dadi se baat karni hai, par tumne toh kaha ki tum mujhse baat nahi karoge?

Geet: sorry, aage se aaisa nahi hoga

Geet immediately apologises and Maan also gives up his anger...

Geet is happy that she had succeeded in her mission...

She looks at Maan and Maan is also relieved...even he was not happy with himself...

He knew that he is wrong but still he couldn't realize his mistake in his anger...

Luckily Geet has made him realize his mistakes...

Part26

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update...finally Maan agreed to Geet's conditions... n nw Geet vl nt talk to Maan lolz...lets see fr hw many its going to work coj this Geet is so irresistable... i jst luv the way Geet always says to Maan, 'aise kya dekhte ho'???
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Posted: 10 years ago
maaneet to ashram
he is happy to see the childrens happiness n remembering his bro
he is angry on dadi for giving vickys things
in anger he stops talking to her n seeing this geet traps maan in his room n makes him understand
maan will surely miss her bak bak now..
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 24 - so much misunderstanding...maan is hell angry on geet...and geet doesnt belive him at all...kitna jhadgte hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 25 - maan was happy to see all kids happy playing and reminding vicky...he realised that he should not have stopped coming to ashram..but he was hurt with dadi for taking this step and listening to geet...he stopped talking with dadi which had bad effect on dadi's health...
finally geet made him agree to talk with dadi after promising him that she will not talk or harrass him in any way...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part.. Maan stopped talking to dadi but dadi made him understood..

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