#T3 - SS:'Love Starts After Marriage - season 1' epi pg.37

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OMG!!😲 thread 3 for my first SS: "Love Starts Aafter Marriage - season 1". i can't believe it but still we made it guys!! thank u so much for your constant support & encouragement!! only your lovely comments boosted me to write further!! thanks dearies.

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part 18 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4180939/t2-ss-love-starts-after-marriage-pt-23-pg-139-15-12?pn=70




part 22 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?


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Merry Christmas & A Very Happy New Year To All My Dearies (In Advance)

Thanks to all my lovely readers for ur likes & comments on the previous part!!

PART - 24

"KICK!!" A shoe tip touched Sikky's chin which was leaning towards madhu & he was thrown back far away from madhu with the hard kick & falls flat on floor with blood oozing from his mouth.

Madhu was startled with the sudden force & looks up to see what it was with her tear brimming eyes & she smiles in relief but still tears of pain flowing from her eyes, seeing her love, her Rishab standing tall with his hands fist & eyes burning in fury, if just a stare could send daggers then Sikky would be dead by now.

"U bloody bas***d!!! how dare u hurt my wife? My madhu" Rk furiously asks Sikky & stamps him hard on his chest & kicks him vigorously on his stomach making him feel a deadly pain but without stopping his ferocious kicks Rk shouts at him "If I know to save a life then I do know to kill a life. I will not spare u...i'll kill u" he raises him up holding his collar & kicks him with his knees on his stomach & he coughs bleeding from mouth.

"Arghh..." Madhu shouts a loud cry in pain & Rk stops hitting him hearing her cry & he quickly pushes him away & sikky sinks on the floor unconsciously & Rk hurries to madhu & picks her in his arms from the floor & gently settles her on the couch.

"Madhu...i'm here...i'm here...please don't cry, baby, please" he holds her close to his chest & rubs her arms & back to soothe her but she cries more burying her face to his chest.

"Rishab..." she breathes hard & scrunches her eyes tight in pain clutching her stomach with one hand & holding Rk's shirt with other.

"Rishab, please..please help me...its paining...please do something..." she begs him crying.

"Madhu, u lie down, I..i will come now" Rk says & tries to pries her hand from his shirt but she gripped him so tight. "Rishab, please don't leave me...i'm scared...please"

"Madhu, I will come in a moment" Rk says little forcefully & she quickly leaves her hold on him to go & she curls on the couch hugging her knees. Rk rushes to his room & takes out his medical kit & searches for a medication which will reduce her pain. Then he returned back to madhu on the way fetching a glass of water. "Madhu, take this pill" Rk says as he gently lifts her up to sit & made her lean on him & he forces in the medication on her mouth & made her drink water but she chokes & throws out the pill along with water spattering on the floor.

"Oh God!" he prays & takes out another tablet from the strip & made her take in slowly without throwing it out again.

"Madhu, Hold me" He tells & takes her hand forcefully which was gripping her belly & puts it around his neck & she holds his neck tight digging her nails in his skin to restrain her pain.

"U will be fine baby...I wont let anything happen to u..." Rk promises her & she nods in response. Soon her abdominal pain reduces & her grip on Rk's neck loosens & she fell asleep in Rk's arms.

Then Rk gently carries her in his arms without walking her, he walks straight to the bed room & made her stretch on bed comfortably. She looks pale & weak & tears strained all over her face. He adjusts her pillow & caresses her face & brushes away her tears with his thumb & without turning back he walks out of the room.

(Hours later)

Rk was sitting at the edge of the bed with one leg on the bed & other on the floor & his hands clasping madhu's hand & he was looking at her pale face as he waited for her to get back to conscious state.

A while later she slowly flickers her eyes struggling to keep it open but her vision went blurry as tears of fear stung on her eyes.

"Rishab..." She calls his name weakly & blinks her eyes to let the tears flow so that she can see him clearly. Hearing her voice, Rk looks up at her & scoots close to her & faintly smiles at her.

"how are u? How's ur pain?" Rk asks her.

"Gone. Thanks. What medication was that?"

"That was to stop ur abdominal pain & internal bleeding" he tells her & turns his face away.

"Rishab..." she calls him again, her voice filled with gut wrenching fear...fear for her baby.

"Hmm..."

"Look at me" she tries to sit up. "Lie down...don't move"

"What's wrong?" she panics.

"Nothing is wrong...everything is fine & u need complete bed rest. That's it" he clears the air.

"Baby?"

"Safe" he murmurs. She breathes in relief. "For now" he adds.

"What does that mean?" she asks him confused. He remains silent.

"Rishab, tell me clearly what's bothering u? Why u r so tensed? Are u okay?" She asks him worriedly.

"Madhu, just relax. I'm okay. I'll go get ur soup, u must be hungry. Till then u lie down" He orders her.

"I want water. I'm thirsty" she asks him & he helps her to sit up & adjusts her pillow to lean back.

"Here" he hands her a glass of water & walks out to bring her soup.

When he comes back from the kitchen with a bowl of soup he saw madhu crying burying her face to her palms. "Madhu..." he quickly rushes to her side in a flash & places the bowl on the side table & envelops her in his arms.

"Madhu, stop crying" he gently pats her head.

"I'm sorry, Rishab...sorry!!" she crying hugging him.

"Why are u saying sorry? What wrong u did?" he asks & tries to move her back to face her but she hugs him closely & wails against his shoulder.

"It's all my mistake. I should have listened to u. u warned me about pabho & sikky too but i didn't take ur words seriously & now we are suffering. I put u in pain too" she sobs.

"It's not ur mistake madhu...please dont blame urself. Even I had no idea that that loon will go to such level...i wish I could kill him" he says clenching his teeth.

"What u did to him? Where is he?" she asks him looking at his face.

"He is at the place where he deserves to stay...behind the bars." he says gritting his teeth. "I was in the verge to kill him for hurting u but I restrained myself from doing so because I have a wonderful life to live with u" he says & plants a kiss on her forehead.

"I was frightened, Rishab. He behaved like a psycho" she hugs him again.

"He is a psycho but don't worry, baby...he is gone...his chapter is over" he says assuring her but her tears refused to stop.

"Ssshh, baby. U r already weak so don't waste ur energy by crying & u know I can't see u in tears. Please" he pleads her. She nods & wipes her tears.

"Ur soup is getting cold so have it" he says & feeds her.

"Are u mad at me?" she asks.

"No, baby. i'm not angry with u"

"Really?"

"For a change."

"Yeah. Its a change & it feels great when I didn't get scoldings from u" she says softly. He shakes his head & continues feeding her.

"But still i'm mad at that f**ker who put u in this condition"

"He was following us from Mumbai, he knows our each & every move clearly. He was responsible for all the incidents took part in our life...he only send the photos on my birthday, he offered me job in his company to get me close, & that France trip was also a part of his plan...i get angry on myself when I think how I fought with u that day when u restricted from going on that trip. U were even right about Pabho, she was helping him. & Patil was the one passing information about us when we were in Mumbai"

"Patil?" Rk asks her in shock.

"Yes, he only cut the car break wires on Sikky's instruction. They planned it to..to..." she stammers.

"To kill me." Rk completes for her. "God, I could never imagine he was this dangerous"

"Did he hurt u?" Rk asks her. She remains still. "Madhu, tell me what happened exactly after I left?" Rk insists to tell everything.

"Enough" She stops him from feeding.

"Just finish it"

"Soup got cold...i don't like it" she says stubbornly. He sighs & places the bowl aside. He waited for her to say something. After a brief hesitation she starts "he came to our place an hour later u left, with a puppy. & by seeing it I understood phabo was helping him because she was the one who were listening to our convo when I asked u for the pup. Then I gave her a tight slap & showed her way out" Rk looks at her surprised with a hint of pride. "Then I asked Sikky to get out but he didn't hear to me...he said he loved me from college days, he was so mad about me" she makes disgusted face. "he asked me to come with him, he blabbered all sort of nonsenses & he even killed that poor puppy he brought...i...i got scared, every passing minute he was turning evil saying all evil thing he had done to us & to get me... at last he said that he even planned to kill u...hearing that I lost my control...i got so mad & I poured hot milk on his face followed by boiling water & started hitting him with that boiling pan & at end he couldn't take anymore beatings from me so he pushed me & I hit the kitchen counter & sank on the floor" she narrates the incident to him looking down at her knotted fingers.

"u hit him?" he asks in disbelief. "I don't know whether I should worship u or spank u for the stunt u had pulled up."

"What?" she frowns.

"Then what madhu? U could have tried to escape out & seek help from others instead of fighting him on ur own & raising his anger when he was already behaving like a madman & got hurt..." he sighs & suddenly his expressions changes from anger to worry "I can't imagine what could have happened to u if I didn't come on time..." he shudders at that thought. She hugs him to assure him that she is safe. "if anything wrong happened to u then I will never forgive myself, madhu. U r my responsibility. U r my life...i should keep u safe"

"Rishab, U didn't let anything go wrong...u saved us & we are safe now. So please don't worry" she says keeping one hand one his cheek & other on her tummy & he place his hand on top of her hand & a lone tear rolls down from his eyes. "Rishab, why are u crying" she brushes away his tear & cups his face in her hand. He hugs her & hid his face on her neck & whispers "Madhu, please bring our babies safe to this world."

"Rishab, i'm sorry for being reckless but it will never happen again. Nothing will happen to our baby...i'll bring our baby safe to this world & we will live happily together. I promise u" she assures him & he nods still hugging her. "Madhu, u should be in complete bed rest at least for the next two months"

"I will do anything as u say" she agrees

"I called my mom & ur mama"

"What? But why? Did u say anything about sikky to them?"

"No. I didn't tell anything about that psycho...they don't need to go through all this shit so I lied saying u slipped on bathroom & u need complete rest, on hearing that they themselves said they will come here to take care of u & I agreed too. U need someone to help u when i'm not around u."

"When are they coming?" she asks.

"Tomorrow" he replies. She nods.

"Now u sleep & forget about this shittier day & wake up fresh tomorrow." he pecks on her lips & she lays back on the bed.

"You too join me. Please don't leave me alone" she quickly grabs his hands & pleads him when he was about to leave her.

"I'll change & come" she nods.

"Wait" she stops him. "what is that red marks in ur collar? Is it blood? What happened to u?" she asks worriedly. He examines his collar & touches his side neck & finches in irritation as he remembers madhu holding him hard around his neck digging her nails in his skin when she was in so much pain.

"CUT UR NAILS, madhu" he growls at her & walks straight to the bathroom.

"Rishab, u didn't sleep yet" Madhu asks him seeing him sitting on the bed & caressing her head. She turns & reaches for the side lamp to switched it on.

"I couldn't sleep, madhu." he sayd dryly

"Rishab, its 3 in morning. U ought to sleep. U have work, right"

"I have taken two days off"

"But still..." he cuts her off saying "U sleep, madhu. I'll sleep in a while"

"U r shaken, right?"

"A deranged asshole enters into my house & hurt my wife verbally & physically & made her cry in pain...& she never cares for her personal safety...yes, i'm pretty shaken up with all these incidents"

"I'm sorry, Rishab...please don't be mad at me" she says gently grazing his cheek with her fingers & he kisses on her thumb finger. "No. u had enough for the day so i'm not going to show my anger on u" he says & she sighs & hugs him in relief.

"Sleep, baby" he says hugging her from back & snuggling her hair & she takes his hand which was around her & places it beneath her cheek.

"Doctor"

"Hmm..." he hums.

"I want to ask u something?"

"Anything, baby...ask anything." he says & kisses at the back of her ear.

"How did u came back home on time? U were supposed to be on airport right?"

"I was supposed to be" he replies sleepily.

"Then?" she asks. He slightly leans up resting his head on his palm with the balance of his elbow & he gazes at madhu. She turns & looks up at him expecting for his reply.

"after leaving from here I headed to my hospital to get some papers regarding the conference & that time, Miss. Kathi approached me...lab assistant" he adds seeing her confused frown & she nods getting who was that lady. "She gave me ur scan reports & I read ur chart then & there...ur were so excited to know the gender the previous day & u were so upset about me going away from u so I thought to make ur mood better by telling u the result for which u were pestering me for long. So I came back home to see..." he rubs his head trying to forget the scene he took in front.

"Glad u came back. I was praying & hoping to send u to my rescue & u came..." she chastely kisses him on his lips. "Even I'm glad"

"So tell me? I'm still waiting" she asks holding her breathe.

"U got to name the baby" he softly says near her ear.

"So its a baby boy" her face lit up in joy.

"Even I got to name the baby" he says with a smile.

"No way, doctor. Only I will name our son. We have already agreed on it...so no cheating huh!" she warns him.

"I know. But still..." before he could say anything she starts shouting "No! No! No! I wont let u name our son"

"Chup!! Chup" he puts his finger on her lips to stop her shouting.

"I won't..." she opens her mouth.

"Chup!! just listen to me" he orders. She nods.

"I'll name my baby girl" he says sternly.

"But just now u said its a boy? Are u lying to me? I was so happy but u shattered my dream of naming my son" she cries putting her palms on her face. He sighs.

"I'm not lying, biwi...u name our son & i'll name our daughter" he gently says removing her palm & wipes her tears away. "How?" She stares at him confused.

"Dumbo, we are having twins" he gently hits her head.

She continues to stare at him letting what he said sink in her head.

"Twins?" she asks in surprise & automatically her hand starts to caress her belly.

"Yes. A boy & A girl" he says looking into her eyes which were brimming in happy tears.

"I can't believe that we are having twins. Both of us can name our kids." she cups her mouth still amused.

"Your Super boy & my little angel is here" he gently pats her belly & smooches her belly sending tingles to her.

"Yippee!!" She squeals. Hearing her sudden excited squeals he looks up at her with a happy smile on his face knowing madhu is also equally ecstatic like him & he came top to her & holding her head between his hands he kisses on her forehead.

"Thanks you so much, Rishab" she says grinning.

"I love u, madhu" he whispers & she pulls him for a kiss.

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Hope u all liked the update!!

Next update will be after New year.

Please do hit the like button & comment ur views!!

thanks to all in advance!!

Enjoy your "Christmas & New Year"lovelies!!

Stay blessed!!

-sudha

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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🤣 🤣 If u wanna ROLF then read kavya's cracking comments!!! 🤣 🤣
i enjoyed reading the following comments & laughed out load so i'm sharing it here so that u can also enjoy it!! thanks!!!

Kg15 / kavya's comments!!

Finally, I am here to comment on the bulk updates together!! 😆 It's too too late but it's OK! 😆 Ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi! 😆
So, I have already read the last four parts- 20, 21, 22, 23 and to begin with... here is my reaction to you Sudhu!

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My flying soul was wandering freely in the sky when it clicked to at last read these updates and to give the above reactions, it has to sit under the Neem Ka Tree to get lot pot... 🤣 But thanks to my Ni baby!! Now that Talli will accompany me to the trip up above the world so high...🤣 And then I will drop her to the Hell...!!! 🤣

Part 20-

"Radha cries on seeing Madhu at the door." Royegi nahi to aur kya karegi wo... Itni Shaanti se reh rahi thi apne Mohan Babu ke saath... Aa gayi Talli Delhi se sab kharaab karne... 🤣 Khushi ke nahi... Shock ke aansoon hai re... 🤣

"Where are Daddyji and all?" Oye Talli bala... Tujhe dekh kar uss Radha Rani ka haal bura ho gaya hai, do you want the rest to have the same? 😡 No one wants to see your Talli face! Just go and get Talli.. 🤣 Nobody needs you here...! 🤣 Especially Mohan babu... It's time for your Chota Devar to come... Rishi baba! 🤣 And you've dropped in like Bin maangi Barsaat... 🤣 It's time for you to set your Talli soul free in the sky...! 🤣

"My princess has come to glow the house in bright colors!" Exactly... this is what a light man does at the wedding places... 🤣 Le Talli... Kaam karna chahti thi na... Chal re... Lagja kaam pe... khoob saari lighting karni hai Mansion mein...🤣 Bas Radha Rani princess bolke thoda Maska maar rahi hai tujhe... Warna Pwincesss or light woman ka Matlab to ek hi hai re... 🤣 Isi layak hai ye Talli...🤣

"Call Me Maa not Auntyji!" Oye Hoye... Abhi se practice shuru kardi... Ek Beta aur bana liya... 🤣 Matlab that Gynae Sahab will have now three brothers... Sullu Pullu, Mukku Bhiyaa and Chota Rishu Baba...🤣 Waah!! 🤣

"Can't you sit with us except Trish?" Arre samajh nahi aata kya tujhe... Mukku Bhiyaa bhi bhaag raha hai tere se...🤣 Marne waali hai tu... Ye Moh Maaya Chod de Pagli Talli.. 🤣

Haww!!! No Pizza for Talli Balli... 🤣 Sab ne mana kar diya Bala ko!! No problem! I'll get you Pizza... Not one but a dozen... Jee bhar ke thoons le Talli... 🤣 (My way to take you with me!🤣)

"Hello Stranger!" Ye baat! 🤣 So finally, you have started realizing that three unrest souls are hovering around you... To Take you for the Hell trip permanently!🤣 Abhi se Gynae Man ko paraaya kar diya!! 🤣 Achcha hai... Waise bhi kaunsa wo tere bina rone waala hai Talli! 🤣

"I'll call you back." "No I will stay online!" Kyo bhaai... STD call ke paise kaun dega... Mohan babu?? Khud to kamaata hai nahi... Faaltu Gynae kahin ka... 🤣 Papa ko loot raha hai STD kar kar ke... Chal phone rakh! 😡🤣

🤣One by one, everybody is meeting to Talli...🤣 Good! Jaane se pehle sab se mil lena achcha hai... Pehle Mukku Bhiyaa... fir Trish (She also shooed her off!🤣) and then Dipu Bhabhi with Adi... 🤣 Adi se achche se mil le Talli... Tera Chota Devar Rishu Baba will also be like him only... Chotu sa! 🤣 Signature of MoDha Louuueee... 🤣

I got the trick for why this Gynae is getting too caring towards Talli...🤣 Bechaara Doctor Sahab bhi pareshaan ho gaya hai roz roz Rock karke- pehle bed, fir kitchen counter... 🤣 he need permanent riddance from that Pagal Talli...🤣 His plan is- pehle pataao-> kapde gehne deke khush karo-> and then finally... Kaam tamaam...🤣

See, I told na!! 🤣 FInally, Gynae has come to take his revenge... one for all! 🤣 Bathroom mein Talli ki leela khatam... 🤣 "Open the Damn Door!" Talli opens the door... Gynae hastens inside it, pushing her evilly in the bath tub...🤣 Takes out one iron chain from his pocket... Swirls it around his palm... Evilly smirking at the crying Talli...🤣 She is pleading- Mujhe Chod do Gynae...🤣 Gynae Man slowly approaches to her... And suddenly, wraps that chain around her neck...🤣 And tightens the grip giving her enough jerk to struggle her feet in tub water... 🤣 Choking throat.. Gynae laughing evilly... Grip tightened... And then... at last...🤣

NO NO!! What did you think Sudhu... I will kill her!! NO! 😈 She will have to pay for my demise slowly and... steadily!! 😈 🤣

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Part 21-

So finally, Talli Balaji has realized, her THE END is near! 🤣 Aaj Papaji se milne pahunch gayi!! 🤣

"Khush raho Beta!" 🤣 Kush to wo rahega hi Papaji... Talli Biwi ka Chapter close jo hone wala hai... Soon! 🤣 His hidden happiness is beyond the boundaries! 🤣 Last nght plan of his deadly bathroom torture has already worked so efficiently! 🤣 Aap to jaake apni Talli Bitiya ke haal chaal poocho...🤣 Asli haal to wo bataayegi! 🤣

Talli bani Chor! 🤣 Stealing Samosas! 🤣 Dekh le Faltu Gynae Sahab! Tere everyday Bed Rocking dosage se uss Talli ka pet nahi bharta re... 🤣 Khaana bhi chahiye usse...🤣 Apne ghar jaake teri Ijjat ka Faluda kar rahi hai teri Talli Biwi... 🤣 Now Papaji and Paddyji will think... Unki Talli ko ye Gynae kuch nahi khilata...🤣 Aur chadha usse apne sar pe...🤣

Paddy Devi in full bajaoing mood...🤣 Here Talli Bitiya rani is trying to woo with her words, Deviji is not paying any heed to her Bitiya! 🤣 "Mumma, I missed you!" "Jhoot Mat bol, Madhu!" 🤣 Le Bala... Ab to your so called Mata Pitaji also gave you the abandoning kick...🤣 Now, you just start packing for the Hell's trip!🤣

"Give me this Samosa!" "No! It's not for you. It's for my son RK!" 🤣 One more stroke by Devi Maa! 🤣 Ab to wo tujhe Beti bhi nahi maanti, Talli! 🤣 Waah Gynae Bhaai Sahab! Playing so well hunn... 😆 Dheere Dheere sab kuch cheen lega apni Talli se...🤣
Now you have following members in your newly made family-

2 Mummys (Radha and Paddy Devi)🤣
2 Ullu Papaji (Mohan and Malik)🤣
1 Good for nothing Sister 🤢 (She is of no use to me!🤣)
and the drastic part...🤣
3 brothers... Sullu Ullu, Mukku Pukku and... Rishu Baba...!! 🤣

BADA PARIWAAR... SUKHI PARIWAAR... Without Balaji!🤣

"Why suddenly you quit the by The weDownload Manager" style="box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(0, 109, 202); border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;">JOB?" Arre Deviji... She is going to fly up... up... up... So, moh maaya ka jaal to todna padega na...🤣 Samjha karo yaar! 🤣 Aur waise bhi, kaunsa Talli ki monthly salary ase aapko Parle G ke biscuits mil rahe the khaane ko...🤣

"Shaitaan Beti!" Arre she is more than that, Devi Maa! 🤣 Why are you insulting the innocent Shaitaans of this globe...😡🤣 Go and ask that question of happiness to your newly found Beta... Faaltu Gynae! 🤣 He will explain his happiness in detail! 🤣

"Rishabh you are happy with me right?" Kal ki Bathroom leela se pata nahi chala kya Ullu! 🤣 Itna pyaar karta hai ye Gynae ki jaan hi lelega teri ek din... Very Soon my dear Talli that you won't even realize! 🤣

Just a forehead kiss! 😲 Aye Gynae... Teri tabiyat to theek na re..? 😆 Kya ho gaya hai tujhe?🤣 Itne se kaam kaise chalega tum dono ka evening tak...🤣 I thought, it's going to be the turn of the parking lot to get rocked by you both...🤣 Waise bhi sharam hai kaha tum dono mein...🤣

Arre koi Mukku Pukku ko bulaao Trish ke room mein... Tab pata chalega apni Pyaari Behna ke asli colors ka...🤣 Jab dekho shuru ho jaati hai... Itni problem hai to just kill him...🤣 Saari problem khatam! 🤣

Arre Gynae, zara apni bhookhi Biwi ko bhi kuch khila de warna Raat ko kitchen mein chori karna shuru kar degi...🤣 Chor Bala! 🤣

To So called Doctor ko braid banani bhi aati hai...😆 Saare lakshan ladkiyon ke hain iss aadmi mein...🤣 I doubt him! 🤣 Apna kaam chodke sab karna aata hai isse... Doctor bana hi kyo bhaai... Kyo intne pasie kharch kiye apne Ghonchu Papaji ke...🤣 Beauty salon hi khol leta re...🤣
Again a kiss on head top! Arre Gynae... Itna tadap raha hai to ek kiss kar he le na properly... I have already died of it...🤣

Waah waah! Talli bani bachpan ka pyaar! 🤣 Pyaar hai Bhaai Pyaar...🤣 Hmmm... Ab pata chala iss Talli ka itna kharaab dimag kaise hai... Bachpan ka asar hai!🤣 Bachpan ki bully ka badla ab tak nikaal rahi hai nalayaak! 🤣 Aur ye doctor... Bachpan se hi Tharki hai ye Aadmi! 🤣 Itne saalon ka badla ab nikaalega ye doctor!! 😉😆

Sudhu, iss braid waale pyaar mein, I think you missed the rocking part...🤣 Or was it hidden behind those words...🤣 Or you left me to imagine it by myself...🤣 Guess what, I have imagined it already!! 🤣 But I won't tell you here... I am Seedha Saadha Bachcha! 😉


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Part 22-


Finally the update marked the entry of the REAL Doctor Sahab!! 😉 I will explain it later...🤣

"Madhu, what are you doing here?" Gynae Man started doubting on his Talli... Ye Baat! 🤣
Now this Faltu man don't trust you Balaji...🤣 What were you exactly doing with that Adi kiddo?! 🤣 Garden mein akele le aayi bachche ko... Dayaa... Pata lagaao! 🤣


Here enters the another Ullu from this Ullu Kundra Khaandaan... Deepu Bhabhiji! 🤣 "RK I am sorry for everything!" Kisliye bhaai... Sorry kisliye!? Achcha khaasa chance mila tha tujhe Ghonchu...🤣 Gynae Akela room mein... selecting his dresses...🤣 And Talli busy in getting more Talli with your Beta...🤣 Jump on him Deepuji! 🤣 .Aisa Mauka Fir Kahan Milega... Aji Aisa Gynae Fir Kahan Milega!🤣 He won't let you get confused regarding the latest feminine fashion ever in your life Deepu!! 🤣

MoDha Romance!!?? Where the hell was it, Sudhu?!! 🤣 Do chaar gaane suna ke Romance ka lollipop de diya yaar...🤣 And you stole my Rohan's signature Song!!! It will always be ROHAN ON THE DANCE FLOOR...🤣 Sudhu... Ek wish maangi thi maine... And you again gave me Babaji Ka Thullu... Big wala! 😡🤣 You didn't even fulfill a dead soul's last wish! 🤣 Agar Antaakshari hi khelni thi dono ko to fir sabke saath he khel lete...🤣 I won't let it go so easily Sudha!! 😈 Aakhir Rishu Baba ki Zindagi ka Sawaal hai... He has to come in this Zaalim duniya...🤣 Aise he ye dono Romance karte the... to ye Gynae Sahab iss duniya mein aaya kaise re...🤣 Janta Jawaab Chahti hai!!🤣

"Mohan, aap bhi na bachon ki tarah behave karte hain!"
"Achcha! Then let's behave like adults... Radha Darling!" And Mohan pulls her closer. 🤣"Leave me Mohan! Somebody will come!!" 🤣 "Then let them come sweetheart!" And he carried her up in his arms, walking towards bed. (Though he got a severe jerk in his back in scooping 70 kg Radha!🤣 )

Saanson ko Saanson mein Dhalne DO zara... Song playing in the background!!🤣

He lovingly lays her down on the bed... Radha Rani tries to run away but Mohan ji stops her...🤣 Both closes in... And then... screen fades...🤣 Finally, they did it in the dark, Sudha!🤣 Ayega... Mera Rishu Baba Zaroor ayega! 🤣

"Band karo ye khushi ke aansoon Madhu!" Ab rok ke kya fayada Gynae Babu!! 🤣 Teri Ijjat ka faluda to wo pehle hi kar chuki hai...🤣 Ab to bas thodi si formality he kar rahi hai- to show you as the worst husband! 🤣 Par tu dukhi kyo hota hai re...🤣 Let her get satisfied... Baad mein to usse mere saath hi jaana hai na... Up... Up... Up...🤣 Tu hi to bhejega usse...🤣

"Oh Wow! Wedding photos have come!" Kahan se aayi ye photos?🤣 Did they telecast them on the TV...?🤣 Abhi thodi der pehle to TV dekh rahi thi Talli...🤣 Dayaa... TV tod ke pata lagaaoo...🤣

"... You are stuck with this damn laptop!" "I am busy with presentation!" 🤣 Jhoot bol raha hai ye Gynae...🤣 Sab pata hai mujhe... Tujhe tapkaane ki planning kar raha hai, Talli...🤣 PPT se idea le raha hai... HOW TO KILL YOUR WIFE SMARTLY?! 🤣 Talli to Gayi...🤣

Talli wants Puppy! Kyo bhaai...Bed Rock se man bhar gaya kya tera?!🤣 Now, your Gynae don't entertain you at all...🤣 Sudha... This is the change I was talking about! 🤣 This is the REAL Gynae Man...🤣 Ek aur proof aayega abhi...🤣

But Faaltu Doctor ne mana kar diya!! Hawww!! 😲😆 Na khud entertain karunga... Na kisi aur ko entertain karne doonga...🤣 He is trapping you with a full fledged plan, Talli baby!! 🤣 You just wait and watch! 🤣

Pabho is eavsdropping! Kyo re Gynae Sahab! Ab tera eavsdropping ka gyaan kahan gaya re...? 😡🤣 Bina bole he ye lady apna kaam kar rahi hai... Kya Baat!🤣 Her silence will sink this Talli Bala for sure...🤣 You have no escape door left opened, Balaji! 🤣

Waah ji Waah... Talli knows Dog's language and bite too... And Gynae knows all girly traits...🤣 Sudha... In dono ko kaha se laayi hai yaar..?🤣

And here comes the ass kicking stage of his Master plan!! Chennai trip via Chennai Express!! 🤣 Khoob dimaag chala raha hai ye Doctor!! 🤣 Go on Doctor!! 🤣 Akele jaa raha hai... Biwi ko akela chod kar...🤣 Uski request bhi nahi maan raha...🤣 D- Day is gonna come now!🤣

kkk Kill Kill...
Ddd Dill Dill...
Kkk Kill Dill...🤣

Another trait of this Faaltu Gynae came out..🤣 Laws and rules gaye tel lene...🤣 Sex revelation karne ko bhi taiyaaar ho gaya...😡 Quack kahin ka...Chal Hat! 🤣

Talli helping him in packing... O Talli Beta! Jitne pyaar se help kar rahi hai na... Utne hi pyaar se tera Gynae tapkaane wala hai tujhe...🤣 Pack your bags too...🤣 Hell mein pata nahi kya kya zarurat padegi...🤣 There aren't much shops there in the hell...🤣 I won't buy anything for you!🤣 Not even Bottles...🤣

And the second last nail in the coffin came at the door...🤣 "YOU!!!??!"
Build Up... Build Up... Build Up...🤣 Par mujhe sab pata hai...🤣 Finally... Talli ki kahaani is coming to it's last stage!! 🤣 Jai Ho Gynae Ki!🤣

Sudhu, you might be thinking about the REAL Gynae.. Right? Let me explain...😆

In the entire update... The kissing rate was just 2...🤣 Forehead and one last so called passionate! 🤣 In whole update, Gynae didn't let her close in to him... neither did he try to do so... 🤣 He tried his best to keep himself away from Talli...🤣 He was too serious here...🤣 I won't count those smiles at all... They were lame completely!🤣 He denied every request of her... No Puppy, No Chennai, No airport! 🤣

Aap Devil Ke Peeche... Aur Devil Aapke Peeche... Too much Fun!🤣


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Part 23-


Surprise! Surprise! Surprise! 🤣

Tune Maari Entriyaan Aur Door pe Baji Ghantiyaan re... Ting Tong Ting Tong!!🤣

Jab Gaaon mein Raat ko koi bachcha rota hai, to uski Maa kehti hai- Soja Beta Soja... Nahi to Sikky Aaa Jayega!! 🤣

Oh My Sikky Pikky! Where were you? 😳 Itne din se kaha tha tu?😡 Puppy purchase karne mein itne din lag gaye re...🤣 Anyways, aap aaaye bahaar aayi...🤣

"Nice Place, very neat and clean!" Arre to place ka karna kya hai tujhe nalaayak... Paani Puri bechni hai kya? 😡 🤣 Jaldi se apna asli kaam shuru kar... My restless soul is waiting Silly Sikky!🤣 Teri ek jhalak ne hi Talli ki jhalak bigaad di hai...🤣

"Anything made out of your hand will taste heavenly, Mady!" Oye Hoye Talli Mady... Mera villain teri itni tareef kar raha hai... Aisa kya heavenly taste daalti hai tu khaane mein?🤣 Kabhi Gynae Man ne bhi tere khaane ki tareef nahi ki...🤣 Bandar Kya jaane Adrak ka swaad!🤣

Water to boil on one stove and milk to heat on other... Kyo bhaai? Cold milk can also be used to make tea...😕😆 It won't become a "Torn Tea"🤣 I mean "Soured Tea"🤣 Anyways... Talli aur uske logics...🤣 Tabhi Gynae Sahab wants riddance from her...😆

Uff Puppy ka Pyaar!!🤣 Ye le Talli... Jis Gynae Man ke itna chipak rahi thi usne to Puppy laane se mana kar diya but my Hawwtty Villain bought you one... Chalo Chalo... Thank You bolo Smarty ko...🤣

"My work is done here so i am leaving!" OMG! Silent Lady boli...😲🤣 Itne chapters se chup chaap kaam kar rahi thi... But I knew it! This Silent Lady will throw bomb at the right minute...🤣 Tera kaam sach mein khatam Pabby...🤣 Now my Pikky will handle her... with care!!🤣

"Crap! Why didn't I listen to my Doctor?!" 🤣 Ab pachtaaye hot kya Jab Pabby Chug gayi khet... 🤣 I won't translate it in English Sudhu... Wo baat nahi rahegi! 😆

SLAP!!!!! How dare you Talli...?? 😡 How dare you slap my Silent lady?? Thanks to my Pikky Sikky... He stopped her else Pabby would have thrown you straight into the fridge and locked it..🤣 Just give these burning touches to yourself, Bala! 😡 Feel them before you fly up above the world so high... with me! 🤣

"What do you want Sikky?" He wants one cup milk and sugar...🤣 Ullu Talli... As if you don't know! 🤣 "Get the hell out of my house!" 🤣 This was an epic dialogue!!🤣 This is what we call intuition!! 😆 Talli knows her time is gonna over within minutes... Still trying to shoo the hell away...🤣 Poor Talli!🤣

"I love you Mady... I wanted to propose you during college... went to London for MBA... opted for Dad's business for you... Bla Bla Bla..." O Pagal Pikky!! Itni Ramayan suna ne ki zarurat kya hai re...🤣 MBA London bata ke zyada impression padega kya uss Talli pe...🤣 Jab wo ek Faaltu good for nothing Gynae se shaadi kar sakti hai to tera MBA kya kamaal dikha dega... Point pe aa Ullu! 🤣

"I will cut your tongue and feed it to Puppy!" 🤣 Kya tha ye...🤣 Jisne Puppy diyaa uski to beizzati kar di aur Puppy ko accept kar liya...🤣 Nautanki Talli...🤣

Puppy ko maar dala!! 😈 Now this is called Heights of Terrorism!! 👏 Jiyo Sikky Jiyo...🤣 One step more to snatch Talli's breaths...😈 🤣 EK do aur stunts dikha Sikky Beta... Talli will automatically start begging for her death... DRAG ME TO THE HELL!!🤣 🤣

"Forget your love for him and come with me!" Oye Sikky! Isliye thodi bheja tha tujhe wahan...😡 Ask her to forget her love and come with ME...🤣 Hell to mere saath hi jaana hai usse...🤣

Again a SLAP!!!! Talli...😡😡 I tolerted your Faaltu tantrums with that Pabby but how bloody dare you to slap my... MY VILLAIN!!??? 😡 Dance as much as you can Talli Bala... You don't even have the idea how brutally your Kahaani will reach its end!! 😡

Arre Ghonchu Sikky! Itni Ramayan suna ne ki zarurat kya hai? 🤢 Just start your damn task, idiot!! 😉🤣 She is already not interested in your Bla Bla... her ear drums are aching in pain! 🤣 She wants to die!!🤣 "Ur husband will be flying to Chennai and you... withme to London!!" Idiot... London leja kar maarne ki kya zarurat hai re... Saara kaam yahin kar de na Pagal...🤣 Tujhse kuch nahi hone wala Pikky... Gynae aakar hi kaam poora karega! 😳🤣

First the milk splash and then hot water... Waah! 🤣 You gave my villain a hot bath, Talli!!🤣 His skin will glow like sun... Tough competition to you now...🤣 Galti kar di tune pagal..🤣

WOWW!! Pyaar ki nishaani is in danger...🤣 Finally, route is all clear for my Rishu baba's entry!!🤣 Finally... the D- moment has come Talli... 😈 Just say Tata Good Bye to all...🤣

"Rishabh... Please Save me!!!"🤣

Suddenly the door thrusts down on the floor... and there stands the Gynae Man on the door...🤣 He sees the messed up rooms and screams, "Madhu!"... Talli gives the reply..."Rishabh!!" Gynae runs towards the kitchen... Sikky notices him standing there... He stands up immediately! Gynae stomps towards Pikky man and then... Both hug tightly... And smirking!! 😈 🤣 Talli watches them shocked... "Only final punch is left...R...K..!" utters Sikky in simper!🤣 Both turn and smirk evilly at the baffled, shocked wincing Talli on the floor...🤣 "Good Byee... Bala..." Sikky whispers evilly and lefts from there... (His Exit!! 😳)
"You too were involved Rishabh!!?" Talli cries... He slowly walks towards her, bends down a little, caresses her head in smile and suddenly... pulls her up through her hair... Talli shouts in deep pain... 🤣 "Of course I was... Bi...Wi... Because I love you baby!" And he pushes her away to the kitchen counter... The chipped glass pieces on the floor prick inside her feet and she cries... 😈 Gynae holds her from behind tightly which hurts her and mutters in her ear, "Remember this counter Bala... How much desperate you were to rock this counter!!" 🤣 "Your 24x7 desperate Rockings ruined my by The weDownload Manager" style="box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(0, 109, 202); border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;">JOB... my life!!!"🤣 "I talked to Sikky on phone one day after you had left his by The weDownload Manager" style="box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(0, 109, 202); border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;">JOB!! And then... my master plan started!!!" He grins devilishly!! 🤣 Talli quickly turns back to him horrified... Starts stepping back from him. Gynae picks up one knife and walks towards her...🤣 "Sikky terrorized you a lot Biwi!! Just see your face baby!!" She sees the knife twiddling in his hand and suddenly... runs inside the bedroom...🤣 (I won't let her go outside the flat at all... 😈)He darns behind her and at last latches the bedroom...🤣 "Please leave me Rishabh!!" cries Talli bala, begging him...🤣 "I love you a lot!!" 🤣 (Finally the confession!!🤣) "This is what I don't want from you Talli!!" He scratches her arm with the knife in rage...🤣 He keeps on walking to wards her while she steps back... "Just because of you and your 24x7 rockings... They fired me from the hospital!!" 🤣 "You made me a Coolie, dragging your shopping bags... eating your half burnt food... you harassed me everyday!!!" 🤣 He scratches another arm... And she falls on the bed crying...🤣 "Now it's time to say Alvida... Today my revenge will complete... Madhu... Bala...!" Gynae throws the knife aside, picks up one pillow while she shouts for help... Bends down a little and at last... crushes her face beneath it harshly...🤣 "This bedroom... where it all started!! Finally, I will end it here only!!" 🤣 She struggles a lot to get free... kicking her feet... And at last... after few minutes... Talli Rests In Peace!!! 🤣🤣

TODAY I AVENGED FOR MY BRUTAL DEATH FROM THIS TALLI... Sudha!!!🤣

Kkk Killl Killl...
Ddd Dilll Dilll...
Kkk Kill Dilll...🤣

MAY MY SOUL RESTS IN PEACE FOREVER...🤣 And so do my Sisters'...🤣



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Finally! The half revenge is done!! Enjoy!!🤣



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FOR NEW THREAD DEAR!!! 🤗
See I m first to unres!!! 😆
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New story? 😉 Then definitely RES 😆
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Congrats for new thread
Cmg to the update
Well written
Rk saved madhu in time
I'm glad he was on time to save madhu dat sikki is really a physco n had planned so to separate rishab n madhu but finally he is out of their life
Lykd it
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congo for 3rd thread
party time sudha
awesome update
So hero came in r8 time
and save his LoVe
and twinsss
awww so sweet
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Res
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Congo for new thread 😊
Pls post chp 24 soon
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OMG...What was that?🤣 The urge for Patil or the teacher with a grudge to enter and shoot RK in his forehead came in part 23...But now...this wasn't a urge but something that needed to happen...🤣 Yes I know he wasn't even there then...But you writing Madhu calling for him...I knew he would come and hoped for Patil's or the teacher's arrival...🤣Neither of which happened...
And honestly what kind of pill was that RK gave Madhu? Some magic pill removing internal bleeding and losing their babies...🤣 Now I know what RK is...🤣 He is a leprachuan...🤣 Watching those horror Movies containing them...I am eagerly waiting for RK's soon demise...Hey I don't have to wait I'll kill him myself... I can't let Madhu kill him...She is already dead...Or maybe I can...😉 Her fingernails would do the trick...🤣 Lets introduce Zombie Madhu...😆
Madhu and her babies dies... But the souls of those babies hovers around not knowing where to go... Then the boy sees an opening at Radhaji...He sees she is about to get pregnant...So he takes the spot...While the girl sees the same thing with Deepali and does the same... And so enters Rishi baba to the world as Modha's fourth child...The favorite of the four...
While in darkness Madhu awaitens for her Doctor to return to the now empty apartment...He enters the apartment in Delhi after a long search for a new job with no luck... He goes to the bedroom disgusted, remembering what he did there with his late Biwi...🤣 Little does he know that she awaits for him behind the bedroom door... He enters and close the door with a smash, not noticing her standing there with her long fingernails... Waiting for his arrival in order to get her revenge...He starts unbuttoning his shirt and pants... while a frustrated tallibala figths her natural instincts to jump on him and do some bedrocking...🤣 She quietly nears him while he undresses himself...and then takes the syringe that she searched for earlier and injects it in RK...RK quickly turns around and gets shocked to see his dead Biwi... He killed her...How can she be alive...😆 He decides that the confusion can get cleared later, now the priority is to disable her...When he suddenly falls on the bed...Unable to move...
"Don't worry...I'll take good care of you...Like you did with me..." Madhu evilly smirked
She climbs on top of him and finishes with undressing him...
"What are you going to do with me you sick manipulated shrew?"
"Ah returning the favor for what you did with me...Then I might rest in Peace..." (Like me and Di would let her...🤣)
She begins to lighlty scratch RK with her Nails...And then after some time she deepens her scratch...Separating his flesh a Little each time making some droplets of blood to ooze out... Madhu gets excited seeing the blood and starts to go deeper each time...Unsatisified with the Little blood that oozes out...
"Stop it..."
"Sure I'll stop...At the same time you did with me...When you are dead" It got more brutal...The scratches turned into maim...And soon there wasn't a part of RK that didn't bleed... Madhu covered with his blood...Licked herself...
"I should have done this earlier...Umm...Bitter...I regret tasting your blood... I guess you don't eat enough of junk food or sweets to have a sweet blood like me... Well you won't have a chance in doing so either..." That was the last thing RK heared before closing his eyes for the last time...😆
Yes I killed RK too...😆 And Modha got their Rishi baby...
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For new thread
I wish u make many thread for this story.

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