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Full English version (on Page 17) Though I very strongly recommend that you read the original version (which has some dialogues in hindi) in this post.
As usual, unable to resist writing! And randomly written, as usual! đ My apologies for any errors.
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His Shirts
"Ishita!! Kahan ho tum yaar..meri wo brown shirt kahan hai? jab dekho apne hisab se mere kapde rakh deti ho!"
"Ishita!! Ishita!! Ab sunegi bhi nahi..behri...Ishitaa!"
Ishita: "Kyun itni zor zor se chilla rahe ho Raman? Aa rahi hoon!"
Ishita enters the room.
Ishita: "Kya baat hai Raman? Subah subah kyun itna chilla rahen hain aap?"
She notices his bed is full of his clothes thrown around mercilessly.
Raman: "Arey meri brown shirt kahan hai? kabse dhoondh raha hoon! Pata nahin kaise rakhti ho tum mera saman cupboard mein"
Ishita: "Brown shirt? Kabhi Pehni bhi hai aapne? "
Raman: " Jaanta hoon wo kam pehenta hoon. Par aaj kuch special clients ne aana hai, and I think that one will be perfect for the meeting today. Arey batao naa kahan rakhi hai?"
Ishita:" Maine wo peechche rakhi thi, kyunki aap usse regularly nahi pehente naa! layiye main nikal deti hoon"
"Ye lijiye" she hands over the shirt to him.
She sits down calmly on d bed to sort and fold his clothes he has thrown around.
Raman: "Arey inhe chod do , main Neelu se keh deta hoon, wo theek kar degi ye kapde"
Ishita: "Kyun Neelu kyun karegi? Ye mere pati ke.."
She stops suddenly, realising what she was about to say.
Raman: "Kya?"
Ishita: " K..K..Kuch nahin..mere matlab.. Main kar loongi na!"
Raman: "Tum bhi na..tumhare tareeke na tum hi jaano. Mujhe to bahut late ho gayee hai. Main nikalta hoon"
"Hmmm" she smiles.
He smiles back and waves a good-bye to her.
Ishita looks back at the bed.
"Mere Pati ke kapde hain..Ab unhe kaise pata ki unke kapde touch karna, feel karna, unhe set karna, mujhe kitna achcha lagta hai" she speaks to herself, a smile breaks out on her face.
Neend ud jaave
chain chhad jaave
Ishq di faqeeri
Ishq di faqeeri
jad lag jaave
She picks up his yellow shirt, brings it to closer to her; she smells it, kisses it, cuddles it...
Maathangi naam tha tumhara! Socho agar tumhara wo naam final ho jaata, to main tumhe kaise introduce karta? Meet my wife Mathangi Raman Kumar Bhalla..hahaha!
She chuckles remembering that night with him.The first time they had shared tea together..the first time he had rested his head on her shoulder..
Tea! it clicked in her head. Even that day they had made tea together..him tea and her coffee..he wore the same yellow shirt!
She remembered how he had pulled his burnt hand when she had tried putting ice on it..
"Kitne khadoos the ye tab! " she hits the shirt softly as if she is hitting him.
She folds the shirt properly, a smile not leaving her face.
She picks up the peach one. She remembers that time he had dressed her up in Ruhi's school.
"Aiyyo!" she squeaks as she feels aroused remembering the moment he tied that kamar-band around her waist. If the memory itself was so arousing, imagine how the actual moment would have been for her!
"You always affected me Raman..even then.."
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
"And even that day, when you made that fake confession, you had worn the same color Raman!"
"You had affected me so much then too, I donno exactly in what way though.. It hurt when u had said u were just faking it, but it did feel good too..cos somewhere u had said the d same words that I had to say to you..
Shayad hum ek doosre ke liye hi bane hain..isiliye kabhi koi aaj tak tik hi nahin paaya humari life mein..
"I know you meant it then Raman, I know you meant it. Atleast you confessed, even though you said you faked, I know you had confessed."
"And this carrot red one..Aiyyo! Our first hug..in the rain! Our best moments have been in d rain..haina!" she blushes
"Some part of me, then too, had wanted to believe you were not lying when you said those three words. Were you lying then or you meant it then too haan?" she smiles.
"And that day, when I had left the house, you forgot wearing pants with that orangy red one!" she laughed.
"Kyun mere bina..pant pehenna bhi bhul gaye the! Haina Raman!"
Mann mann ki sunta jaaye
Sunta nahin mann waalon ki
Mann hi mann mein banaye
Duniya ek khayaalon ki..
Sunta nahin mann waalon ki
Mann hi mann mein banaye
Duniya ek khayaalon ki..
"And this blue one!..You look so hot in blue my love!..We shared my pasta dat day..
now that reminds me, i need to improve my pasta making skills! Abhi ye kam khatam karke main sabse pehle yehi karoongi..learning to make perfect Pasta for you!"
"Us din bhi to aapne ye shirt pehni thi..jab aap mujhse wo kehne waale the.."
Keh doon ki tum aaj kaisi lag rahi ho..keh doon ki tumhare liye kya feel karta hoon..
"Tab se leke ab tak hum ek doosre se kuch keh hi nahi paaye hain Raman! uff!" she buries her cheek in her hand.
"Aur ye pink wali! Wo salsa practice ka din! kitni baar gire the aap..omg! hahaha! Aur aapne wo mujhse better dance karne ke liye special training li thi! My jealous Kumar!"
"Jealous Kumar se yaad aaya..ye grey wali..jab subbu ke baare mein maine aapse share kiya tha! Aap kitne jealous ho gaye the..aapne ye tak mujhse pucha tha ki main is shaadi se khush hoon ya nahin!"
Paas koi aave
door koi jaave
Hota hai kyun ye
koi samjhaave
She chuckles again, puts all the shirts together lovingly, and gets up to stack them in the cupboard.
She brushes her hand through his coats, she stops at the black one.
Her cheeks turn scarlet as she remembers the Kya moment.
Neend ud jaave
chain chhad jaave
Ishq di faqeeri
Ishq di faqeeri
jad lag jaave
"Aiyyo! gudgudi ho rahi hai Raman" she bends forward and kisses the black coat.
"Aiyyo! gudgudi ho rahi hai Raman" she bends forward and kisses the black coat.
And when she is about to close the almirah, she notices his South India Veshti..
"Awwee..My cutu! Crush hogaya tha mujhe aap pe pehli baar aapko is veshti mein dekh ke! Itne cute lagte hain aap is mein!"
A smile was still not leaving her lips. He brought so much happiness in her life..his everything brought so much happiness to her...
She closes the cupboard.
She turns around and notices another shirt still lying on the bed.
"Arey ye kaise reh gayi..sky blue!"
"Vaise kaafi romantic rehte hain aap isse pehen ke! remember that time you kissed me on the cheek?" she is blushing again.
And then she remembers another moment. She sits down on the bed and closes her eyes.
Ek baat kahoon..Ek din tum wo baat mujhe khud bataogi..
Her heart is pounding.
"Haan Raman aapne theek kaha tha. Aur shayad wo din ab aa gaya hai. I can't wait to tell you how much I love you!"
She cuddles the shirt in her arms. "I love u Raman! I love you!"
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
Raman is standing right there, resting his folded arms on the room door, his adorable smile on his lips. He had been listening to her talking to his shirts all through.
" Itna notice karti ho mujhe? Itna pyaar karti ho mujhse! Even I cannot wait for you to tell me that...and I love you too!" he speaks softly without her listening, smiles again and leaves for work finally.
~End of OS~
I added the Naina song in btw as this os idea came to my mind while i was listening to that song! (nyone who has not heard d song definitely check it out, its from Sonam Kapoor's movie Khubsoorat) Ofcourse, d latest olv gave me d idea. And I know d OS is not so coherent, my apologies, lack of time to write!
edit: raman watching her part was added on public demand! ofcourse wat he does after listening to her i leave it to ur imagination, i wud want u believe wat u wud want him to do, d above is just one of d endings đ đ
Also I need to respond to a lot of comments to my earlier oses, will do that slowly slowly..
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