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Posted: 10 years ago
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Choice-abhigya os

Hi, everyone.I am new to this forum and have been visiting it since few days only.I don't write much but this os automatically came out of sheer frustration.I am totally disappointed with the shit cv's are showing.its so humiliating to watch the way abhi treats pragya.I feel like killing him.so, for relief I came up with my own version.The scene starts with Abhi forcing pragya to marry suresh. Hope you enjoy reading and yes, do comment and like.

"choice is yours chasmish,marry suresh or ..."Abhi said pointing toward his phone.

"No you can't do that.How could you even think of doing this to your own wife"

"I can and I will."Abhi said harshly.WIFE????Abhi laughed without any tint of humour though.Really chasmish?? If you had ever thought of our relationship, you would not have done what you did.He spat out.

"STOP IT! STOP IT! Sto...p it pleeease.How many times should I tell you ,I haven't done anything.Please trust me Abhi please.Tears were flowing down her cheeks continuously but it didn't mattered bit to its recipient.

"oh! Cut your crap.I have had enough of your drama and I am in no mood to have more.so,just tell me YES' or NO'.Will you marry suresh or not?"

Pragya kept on staring Abhi numbly.She can't understand how her husband can even think of doing something like this but moreover ,she can't understand herself.How could she fall in love with this sorry excuse of man?Man who has never respected her and today see he has even crossed all his limits.True they never shared normal relationship of husband and wife.Heck! It was far from being normal but still they have at least been sharing a room for few months. She realized no matter what she does, he is hell-bent in looking bad in her only. For him she will always be a gold digger, selfish and he has got a new entry too characterless! She smiled sarcastically. She wiped her tears, looked into his eyes and replied

"NO"

Abhi thought as if he has heard something wrong.Wh...at? what did you say?

"I said NO.I am not going to marry suresh.Go do whatever you want.I... DON'T... CARE.!"

second part is just below

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2

Abhi blowed his fuse.HE was hell angry.He grabbed her shoulders tightly making pragya flinch but she instantly composed herself.She has gone through much pain and now these physical pain doesn't matter much.

"ofcourse! Why will you care?He responded spiting fire. Gold digger like will obviously think about herself.what a Big Fool I am to think that you at least love your family.you are so shameless, character...

"MR.Abhishek Mehara Dare you say me characterless again"she pushed abhi mustering all her strength.Abhi stumbled few steps back.He was shocked to see pragya like this and even got frightened only if he could admit.

"Aap mujhe characterless bol rahe hain jiska khudka character ka koi thikana nahin"

"Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe se aise baat karne ki"he roared

"why only you have got right to speak like that??huh!Mujhe aapne characterless bola,look at yourself,you will know what it is being characterless.Apne honeymoon pe apni girlfriend ko laate hain aur muhe characterless bolte hain.Uske sath alag room book karke raat gujarte hain aur muje characterless bolte hain.Apne ghar mein No... No... correction apni bedroom mein apni biwi k samne flirt karte hai aur MUJHE characterlessbolte hain.with each words her sound went on increasing.For the very first time Mehra mansion was echoing with words of that shattered soul whose it has thought have got no voice of hers. Perhaps all hell has broken loose.

Abhi was dumbstruck.He started feeling guilty in some far fetched corner of his heart but again if only he would admit.

"You have acussed me of not respecting our relationship?Have YOU ever done that?you acussed me that I haven't thought of Dad...iii" she stuttered but nevertheless continued.She has taken enough shit and now she will show him his true face.Have you ever thought about her?What will happen to her when she will come to know about YOUR infidelity? From the first day our marriage, you have been doing this and you didn't have any problem with that but from the moment you have seen me with suresh ,aapko dadi ,apka career ,humara rishata sab yaad aane lagaa.huh!

"I love tanu and...

Then you should have married her why me?She shouted.Bas muhse badla lene k liye aap ne apne pyar ki bali Chadha di mr.mehra. you know what you disgust me.Aaaj tak maine kisi se nafrat nahin ki par aaj keh rahi hun I HATE YOU with every fiber of my being.Abhi felt as if something shifted in his heart.He was not used to see hatred in pragya's eyes and now all of a sudden those swollen eyes has immense hatred and that also just for him.The pain was sooo piercing, suffocating only if he would admit.Go ahead and make MMS viral.Atleast then I would not have anything to hold back to you. With these last words she left Mehra mansion head held high.She knew someday he will come to know about truth and then his share of pain will start...

THE END


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! This was amazing! If only pragya still spoke like this like she did at the start of the show! This was a great OS! I loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! This was amazing! If only pragya still spoke like this like she did at the start of the show! This was a great OS! I loved it!



Yes exactly, if only the earlier Pragya's brain hadn't gone on permanent vacation we would get to see something like this in the show. I wish CV's could keep the female leads consistent with their initial character. Half the problems wouldn't arise if they did. For some reason they all seem to become these meek, obedient useless ladies after the lead comes into their lives.🤔

As for the OS, I loved it, it was truly awesome and I wish Pragya would reach her breaking point and snap just like you (lourel24) wrote it. 👍🏼
Edited by Parm. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice OS, I like how she said everything she wanted to say and walked out
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome awesome! love pragya's speeches, saying exactly what needed to be said. abhi's reactions are right on target too. great writing, hope to see more from you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! This was amazing! If only pragya still spoke like this like she did at the start of the show! This was a great OS! I loved it!

thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parm.



Yes exactly, if only the earlier Pragya hadn't gone on permanent vacation we would get to see something like this in the show. I wish CV's could keep the female leads consistent with their initial character. Half the problems wouldn't arise if they did. For some reason they all seem to become these meek, obedient useless ladies after the lead comes into their lives.🤔

As for the OS, I loved it, it was truly awesome and I wish Pragya would reach her breaking point and snap just like you (lourel24) wrote it. 👍🏼

I am glad parm you loved it.abla nari n all pragya is getting into my nerves.anyways thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

nice OS, I like how she said everything she wanted to say and walked out

thank you😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

awesome awesome! love pragya's speeches, saying exactly what needed to be said. abhi's reactions are right on target too. great writing, hope to see more from you!

thank you😊

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