Ishra TS :The Blue Dress [Pt2 pg 4, Pt-3 Pg7 MATURE] COMPLETED

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

all the three parts were amazing. .third was hot..

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shifajoomun

@shifajoomun

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Aouuuh !! Superb ! Amazing ! Romantic ! Making love is never a hot scene in itself, but its the love making process that makes it hot ! Amazing work ! U rock writer ! :)

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poornimar

@poornimar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

This is a great update. Wow you really know how to write. Mmm didn't mind the length at all. Looking forward to many more. You write really well. A few dialogues in English would be welcome. Good work

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Sensual and hot!

Loved it :')

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Nehla,neha ,nehu

@nehaarshi09

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

aWWw...this is soo HOT HOT ☺️☺️☺️

LUVD IT...like how u add raman's one liners into ur os..its just perfect and funny👍🏼😆

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Excellent update!! Please if you do more work on ishra then could you kindly pm ?
Much appreciated xx

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mamamiah123

@mamamiah123

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Write more really really matured OS.

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Ahhh..Like always..A super HOT n SENSUOUS OS Tweety! ☺️
Poor Raavan..saari akad utar gayi the moment he saw her in the dress..😆😆 All he could think of after that was his alluring JKR! 😳
Loved the part where he sends the driver away and doesn't wana go to the party..Protective and possessive eh.? SEXY it was! 😳⭐️ Ohh my my..Ish is so bold in this one! She directly asked him to make love..and SKIN ON SKIN.? OMFG! ☺️☺️ I swear, that line was so HOT! I still have the blush..Rest can be left to imagination..

Lovely TS Tweety! Always a pleasure to read your works! 😳

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