Sahir: Choun tou loun ussey magar dar lagta hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Choo tou loun ussey magar dar lagta hai
Apni kismat ke andherey sey dar lagta hai



Uss ke chehrey pey likhi jo tehreer hai
Parh tou loun magar dar lagta hai



Mey uss ka saya ban tou jaoun magar
Inn hathoun ke chout janey sey dar lagta hai



Wo laut gai mey sakit khara dekhta raha
Rouk laita magar pyar ke fareb sey dar lagta hai

Sahir Azeem Chaudary longs for love and care yet he is afraid to love and be loved ... afraid that his bad luck may never leave him, afraid to give life another chance. That is one big reason why he couldn't read what was written all over arzoo's face ... he is scared because he build a shell around himself, a protective shell he believed no one could break ... and when he first realized that a girl is starting to affect him he punished himself, tried to push her away and when she still did not go he tried to play it the other way! Be all casual around her, as if she is just another person like all the others! But she is not just another person that is why he over came his past demons to go and check on her ... involuntarily he was drawn to her.. sitting alone on that bench... Wanting to know why... Willing to brave the rain he had shunned for so long... Yet hesitating to ask her... ... because the deceit life threw at him is hard to let go ... the fear that love may leave him again, may prove to be nothing but another dhoka is stopping him from seeing the obvious! Sahir may not know for long that what he saw on her face yesterday was love ... love for him because he is too afraid to give love a chance, he does not think anyone can love him ... nor he wants to love anyone ... once was enough ... he would not allow anyone to break him again! Yet a part of him longs for love ... that is why when she left, his hand dropped the umbrella ... too tired to hold the burden ... burden of his own fate ... too hurt that love is not his to take and cherish

Mai uss se pyar tou kar leta
Apni bahon mien bhar leta
Izhaar bhi kar leta
Magar bewafai se ...
Dil ke phir totney se ...
Darr lagta hai

P.S1: Today we decided to be Poetbaaz ๐Ÿ˜Ž You know the wannabe poets not to be taken seriously waley poetbaaz๐Ÿ˜† yea me and Pri joint production ๐Ÿ˜›
P.S 2: I love Sahir (shut up silky)
P.S 3: Today for the first time I feel like saying Poor Arzoo ... she is so smitten ... and I can't even blame her ... who would, in their right mind not fall for Sahir Azeem Chaudary

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Zoyafan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waah ji waah...subhan allah...yeh toh ekdum mast tha...just awesome
Nads-Pri jodi rocks!!!๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! You guys wrote that!!!awesome!
Please continue to. Wanna be poets or not... It was beautifully penned and captured Sahir's feelings so well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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theek hy main ho gai shut up ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantabulous that last piece of poetry just touched touched my heart and broke it at the same time !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg nads this was a beautiful read ...๐Ÿ‘

Loved ur "Wannabe attempt " at being a poet baaz n it defo deserves appreciation ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I think u have summed quiet a lot up already I will Just say tht for sahir , ARZOO is like an oasis in the desert , the ruined n pained life of his n he is yearning to be with loved n for a Change to be able to experience the true desire of being wanted ๐Ÿ˜†


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Posted: 11 years ago
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My my ecri is replying without being darrbaaz ๐Ÿคฃ Does it mean we won? Kiun ke darr ke agey jeet hai ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wad a wannabe poetry btw...๐Ÿ˜†

omg Sahir...๐Ÿฅบ

this pain of his make me like Sahir even more...๐Ÿ˜’

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome post yet again...wat lovely poetry ๐Ÿ‘ ...I think this was the best analysis of yesterdays rain scene...beautiful ๐Ÿ‘ ...ab toh yeh dil maange more...plz keep writing such posts more frequently ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all for liking the post...๐Ÿ˜ณ

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